The creator of Courage The Cowardly Dog uploaded two animatic pitches for a series called "Prudence and the Imps", about a girl whose insecurities manifest as monsters irl.
https://youtu.be/eKZxJ7_LLk8
https://youtu.be/ejWaVNJSdXo
>>84061174
I already want to fuck the mom and the girl
>>84061174
It's too sexual
>Prudence and the Imps
>imprudence
What he did there
I see it
>>84061174
>sassy black friend
I like this show but I know the chance of it getting made is zero.
>>84061174
The farm girl is really annoying
And what's with the barfing this is like a bar fetishist's dream
>>84061174
>Panty shots
>nice titties
MUH DICK
>>84061174
Is the black friend supposed to be Shango?
Feels too much like it's trying to recapture Courage the Cowardly Dog's magic, but not doing it quite right. Also too much vomit and poop in the first animatic, and the second one just isn't that interesting to me.
There's some good stuff here; the panic scenes, the absurd bits (like using a saw and hammer to change a diaper) and the character designs are all on point. That's all classic Dilworth goodness there. But the dialogue and all of the build-up to the good stuff is really difficult to swallow. It needs serious pacing adjustments, but I see potential.
Awful characters
Will that make him poop?
>>84062142
>That monster got an apetite like a black hoe!
>>84062184
that's what I heard at first too.
>>84062184
>cosmic
>>84062452
Then you heared it correctly. He barely even hints that there might be an L
>>84061601
>>84062873
Fucking annoying little shit. Dilworth couldn't have made a more aggravating character if he tried.
>>84061174
please tell me I'm not the only one who loved this part
>>84061436
Voiced by Turk from Scrubs
>>84061436
>with catchphrase
glad to see he still got the touch
>>84061174
>protag and black friend listening to Star Lord music up on Throbbing Phallus Ridge
Epic.
>>84061174
Main character talks too much. The exposition is almost unbearable, it ruins a lot of the tension. Also the friends add nothing but make the show feel more generic than it should be. Like, it looks like it's trying to be a parody of lame 90's toons while being one itself.
>>84061174
It's very Dilworthy. and I genearlly like that.
>>84062007
Well it's just a pair of animatics done by one (two?) people. Presumably if he gets a show he'll have more writers to help brainstorm ways to fix the issues you mentioned.
Personally I feel like it's got a really solid base to work on. Seems fresh compared to the kinds of cartoons on TV today, but wacky enough to attract the lolsorandom crowd everyone is pandering to.
The sassy black friend is a little weirdly archaic, but I almost feel like it's being done ironically as a kind of shoutout to the weird tokenism 80's and 90's cartoons suffered from. Kind of like how the family is a parody of typical 1950's "perfect" sitcom families.
>>84063171
It's very Courage-ish, I liked it. I also liked the scene where she kicks over the bowling pin.
>>84063511
That's how I feel about it too. Courage was very unique and this cartoon doesn't initially capture that appeal.
>>84061174
Character models, pacing, takes and gags are all superior in the first. It's the one we need.
The second is too kid-friendly, too consequence free, like pandering to a focus group panel of concerned parents. It's the one we'll get.
it's really nice
It feels like it's trying to have that Courage feeling and it came out "alright"
Feels to Courage what the The Justice Friends felt to Dexter if they were don right
Second has better pacing and atmosphere, first has better jokes besides all the poop.
I really like the concept of her insecurities turning things into monsters, has a lot of applicability. Though it would probably bring a lot of theories about the supernaural things being all in her mind.
>>84063511
I kind of feel the same way; a lot of the humor in Courage was really visual and surreal, and even though I can sense the same kind of comedy trying to come through in this it keeps getting dampened by the girl constantly talking to herself. (You know how when someone says a joke is funny right after it's told, it somehow makes the joke less funny? Kind of like that.)Also I don't want to be that guy, but while I like this show, it's really emulating Courage in terms of macabre/grotesque imagery. I don't know how well that kind of intensity would fare to executives/test screenings in the age of soft pastel ukelele sing-a-longs.
>>84061174
Those backgrounds!
That action!
That panty flash!
The story is kinda meh, but it'd be watchable, I'd wager.
>>84061174
I'm not 100% sure the style suits it. This feels too much like Courage. Too 90's.
>>84061174
Cosmic!
>>84063171
>>84064173
It's those little gags that do this for me. The diving helmet exploding, the tools out of nowhere, the fruit hat, the bowling pins...all really cartoony in the best way possible.
>>84061174
So has that new season of Courage fallen through then?
>>84071998
This seems so incredibly similar that I won't be surprised if it turns out he utilized slightly modified unused Courage stories.
>>84063511
>>84071325
I agree with both of these posts, but I still enjoyed it quite a bit. It's just really rough all around.
So Cartoon Network''s Silent Hill 2?
>>84073882
This will never, ever, ever, never ever get picked up.
so has anyone picked this show up?
id like it if adult swim took it.
>>84061174
so, when can i expect the r34 of that 13 year old pussy?
>>84061174
Oi?
>>84063117
>>84061491
>>84062056
>>84063511
I actually liked their goofiness and expressive reactions. Why there's so much people in here with such shit taste.
>>84064372
>the scene when "what if I splat my guts in front of my whole school" happens
>kid-friendly and consequence-free
>>84063171
>LA LA LA LAAAAAA
>>84061601
The name's Man, Snow Man.
>>84077136
>Baby Monster chasing Prudence through the house, growling and gnarling
This shit's Intense!
>..is that her spleen
DROPPED!
>>84064372
My exact thought.
but farmer girl was annoying in both.
i want
>>84061174
Clarissa all grown up?
>>84077136
>Dream/Imaginary Hypothetical Sequence then cut back to Reality Trope.
Consequence Free.
It was funny because we SAW the boulder crush the coyote, and suspension of disbelief meant we knew he'd be okay, because he was a cartoon.
>>84061174
This looks really promising, I hope it gets picked up. Now that Gravity Falls is gone and the future for Courage and Bunnicula is looking bleak I'm really looking for a new horror-centered show. The girl's insecurities manifesting into monsters is a really neat idea for a monster of the week show. I wonder if characters from Courage are going to make cameo appearances, like Katz or something.
Plus, I really like Dilworth's art style.
>>84061274
>sexual
>female insecurity
so it's not "too" sexual, it's honest. got it.
>>84079270
whoops that was meant for
>>84061374
>>84061174
Wacky/10.
Would watch again.
>>84061174
Looks a lot better than that Dirdy Birdy shit.
>>84061174
Based Dilworth
>>84061174
This is right up Adult Swim's alley
holy fuck the baby one is horrifying
i hope he succeeds, i feel that hes one of the only few that care about cartoons and how they used to be, nowadays cartoons are nothing but a mouthpiece, and a way to push an objective and ulterior motives. He's looks like he has genuine fun making cartoons
>>84086166
>hes one of the only few that care about cartoons and how they used to be
Also someone that gets shit done, unlike a certain other cartoonist that did succeed in his kickstarter.
>>84061174
Too wacky for me to get invested in the characters even though I can tell he is trying emulate Courage the Cowardly Dog. They should have a few calm moments for build up.
>>84086166
>>84086166
>i hope he succeeds, i feel that hes one of the only few that care about cartoons and how they used to be.
That's the worst part of this, Dilworth can't be happy.
>>84087257
Anon, this isn't even that wacky compared to other of his works.
https://youtu.be/juyjXwyBFxE
https://youtu.be/S5vGJEJwIWE
https://youtu.be/N_E-F-rVKlE
For me, this cartoon was as soft or normal looking as Garlic boy
https://youtu.be/TgTC35-MymM
>>84087641
The one with proto-Courage never fails to fuck me up.
>>84087641
Small talk was fine I could see a show about it. Garlic boy was okay but I am not sure how long they could go on the gag of him stinking still was actually pretty cute.
>>84077714
To this day I still don't think of the spleen as a real organ, since it never appeared in any of the anatomy diagrams I saw as a kid that I recall.
>>84061174
>Kicks over the bowling pin
Fucking ha.
>>84086166
It is nice Dilworth is one of the few people whose social media you can snoop around on and he doesn't come out smelling like shit.
>>84061174
>The part with the dive helmet
>>84064372
I didn't care much for the singing, but that's a personal thing, I'm not big on singing in cartoons in general except in very specific circumstances.
I liked her hair better in the first one.
>>84062873
Nice.
>>84061174
John R Dilworth is so fuckin crazy
>>84093336
I think he really is, but I like their cartoons.
>>84061174
Girl reminds me of Fran Bow.
Dilworth's expressions always get me cracking up tho.
Fucking love the black guy, hilarious.
