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TWO MORE WEEKS Edition

Previous: >>83910501

Air date: July 11 at 10:30 AM EST

Promo 1:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=QsK_tpwaHvM

Promo 2:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=atkvUO3Z0Bw

Season 2 info: http://variety.com/2016/tv/news/star-vs-the-forces-of-evil-season-2-melissa-rauch-mayim-bialik-1201783224/
Links:
http://svtfoe.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=3

Fanfics:
http://svtfoe.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=1

Episodes:
http://svtfoe.booru.org/index.php?page=forum&s=view&id=9

Steam Group:
http://steamcommunity.com/groups/starvsevilgeneral

SEASON 3 COMFIRMED
http://www.broadwayworld.com/bwwtv/article/Disney-XD-Greenlights-Two-Original-Series-BILLY-DILLYS-and-COUNTRY-CLUB-20160304

Writefag list
http://pastebin.com/FJYvmdfg/

Between friends comic artist
http://areablog.tumblr.com/

Countdown clock
https://countingdownto.com/countdown/star-vs-the-forces-of-evil-season-2-11-july-2016-countdown-clock-0
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あああ...トフィーさん!!!
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>>84023627
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>>84023584
SURPRISE ATTACK
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Best StarcOffspring right here.
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STARCO IS CUTE AND PERFECT!

CUTE AND PERFECT!
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>>84023860

Oh yeah the Starco folder finally reached 1503 files or so, give one or two more.

Remind me to upload the folder later, I'm busy right now.
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I want to see an episode where Marco bests a school bully with a few basic karate moves and becomes popular because of it, eventually letting the recognition go to his head a little. Now, obviously Star needs her place in this story. I'd see this as a moment where she gets a bit jealous he's giving her less attention (and maybe even scoring some points with Jackie and other girls). So just to bring him down from his ego trip, after overhearing him talk about his sick karate skills and the guys/monsters he can take on she'd use the wand to conjure up a monster well outside his comfort zone and have him fight it in front of the entire school. Now, obviously she doesn't want to hurt him - just have him go up against it long enough to realize he's in over his head then finish the job herself. Because you know, forgetting about your best friend et cetera.

However! It backfires and instead the magic turns the beast stronger, causing it to knock Marco out and escape the school into the city and earning Star the scorn of her classmates for her reckless act. Give her a real "I screwed up and gotta fix my mistake" moment. So from there you have the two kissing and making up and tracking down the monster only to find (by way of Glossaryck, the mirror, various potential interdimensional beings who could act as informants etc.) it's in the hands of...

>Well, we'd rather not say. Don't worry about it, princess. We'll deal with this ourselves.
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Is that time again!

Only 2 more weekends until we are out of this infernal hiatus! Almost there!
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Does anyone have the cute Starco greentext where Marco sings Star a White Stripes song as a lullaby?
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First time in the general and I just watched Promo 2 for the first time. w-will they really be smooch buddies? Or is this some ploy to get our hopes up??
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>>84024513
It's gotta be some ruse to trick someone.
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>>84024563
>>84024513
If they just smooch once, Ill be content.
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>>84024513
It's probably a ruse but if you think about it, it could lead to them actually smooching once. so even if its a fake out you Starco fans could get something out of it.
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>>84023584
Wait, is there Oskar in bottom left scene???
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Happy Friday everybody. I actually don't work today, but I do over the weekend so boo. Just wanted to drop by before I go to bed.

>>84024470
Did I write that? I remember writing something like that using the white stripes.
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Smooch in promo = no smooching in show. It's a trick used by promos since the dawn of man.

On another note, maybe season 2 will get me out of this depression I've been in since season 1 ended...
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>>84024951
By now it feels practically surreal that in roughly a month from now we'll have seen 3 new episodes.
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Here's my pastebin for anyone wanting to catch up on the Hope/Spade story and part 1 of the crossover finale, Convergence Point.

http://pastebin.com/u/WriteFriend

Still writting part 2, it's only 45% done but it's fucking long as hell already and only getting longer.
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>>84024110
Pls no, nothing is worse than the generic man character ego trip. Besides, Marco is much too cool to have that happen to him.
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Little lone season 2 screen from this https://twitter.com/DisneyXD/status/746055268270768128

So Star hurled Ludo in an empty dimension where he floated through nothingness long enough to grow a stubble (and maybe a full fledged beard) before reaching ground/finding something? That's... horribly brutal.
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Hi, /sveg/: happy Friday!

I did some work on Jackie: as you can see this is the "default 3" pose, one that is more in line with the needs of the VN: more expressions to come!
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>>84025081
Hey Folly, thats one smug looking Jackie you got. Great job.
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>>84024849
Yes
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>>84025135
Hi, WF!
I sure regret not coming up with the idea of the pose when there were Ironghast and Area there to help me, but hindsight is 20/20.

How's it going, WF?
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>>84025041
A better fate than if he never showed up again and we were all just left to assume Star tossed him into hell or something.

I like Ludo being a homeless failure.
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>>84025168
Good, gonna call it a night in a few minutes. Gonna wake up early tomorrow and watch Independence Day: Resurgance since I don't work on a friday this week.
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>>84025184
Well then, have a nice rest, and then have fun at the movies: see you later, WF!
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Oh, and also: here's what I waste time on instead of drawing Jackie!
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>>84025295
Oh no, you beat me to it!

New, NSFW-Area's page http://i.imgur.com/RE8nVi9.jpg

>>84025237
They are all good but this one is amazing!
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does anyone have any good art of Star and random maigc girls from other series
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>>84025354
LMAO, great edit Seddm!

>Oh no, you beat me to it!
(I was the fastest AGAIN! Yusss!)
Ahem, I mean: sure Area's comic is being of great inspiration, lately…

Glad you like my drawing!
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im afraid we wont get Starco as endgame....since we might be getting it so early there's just no way it could last.
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I'm tipsy this is the first thing I've ever tried drawing
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More poses!
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Adam is already practicing for starco.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nxa0CphoIQo
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>>84025765
Can I get some criticism and suggestions please
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>>84025839
Start with a stick figure to use as a guideline
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>>84024899
It might have been you. Literally my favorite piece of fanwork ever.
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>>84025765
>>84025839
Ähm... this is OK for the first time
It's not like I could do it better, but the head irritates me a lot.
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INDEPENDENCE DAY, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR, POST AUTHENTIC BRITS
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>>84025081
>Marco trips and falls during his morning greeting with Jackie
>"Oh hey Marco, what's up?" Jackie asks "You alright?"
>"Not me, haha." Marco answers as he looks up. "But I am fine, I've had worse scrapes fighting monsters with Star."
>Jackie chuckles in that small cute way that Marco loves
>"Well make sure you put some neo-sporin or whatever on your bruises dude. Do you need any help up or do you wanna just lie there?" The skater girl inquires with a hand stretched out.
>Marco grabs her hand with his slightly sweaty one and rises with relative ease. Whatever she does to stay other than boarding keeps her pretty fit, Marco thought.
>The bell rings and Jackie heads to class. The safe boy just stands there looking at his hand
>"SHE TALKED TO ME." He yelled after everyone left. "SHE HELD MY HAND. And I should probably pull out my neo-sporin and disinfect my wounds

>>84025765
I'm liking your drawing more than I would've thought. The thing you need to work on are the hands. Maybe give the wand/hammer a stronger gripping. And give her a more defined expression. Specifically on the eyebrows.


>>84025917
and saved

<///>
I'm not staying here for a long time. I couldn't sleep at all because of this shitty hot weather making me sweat like Marco in my green text, but worse. It's 6 now and I'm gonna try to get more sleep.
Also I saw a thread put up at like 12 or 1 my time and was taken down after a reply. I didn't get to check it out at all. It was weird.
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>>84025765
>>84025839
What this Anon said: >>84025868.

As a doodler, I used to draw beginning from the "inside" out: I started drawing from a small detail (usually the face of a character) and then worked on the other details surrounding it. Instead, you can make a huge quality leap if you start defining the pose of the character by sketching very rough shapes of its body: rectangles as the elements of the torso, a circle for the head, and stick-limbs. Then, you can work to add and correct details to your heart's content.
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>>84025939
Hi SN, thanks for the cute green.
Have a nice rest, and see you later!
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>>84025945
faces are the most intimidating thing to draw
that and hands
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>>84025939
thanks
for both liking it and the advice
I was kinda inspired from the girl in I Kill Giants
I didn't know how I could change Star's look and still make it resemble her at all
but figured swinging big hammer/wand looked like a cool thing
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>>84025978
Glad you liked it. Your art inspires, man,
I probably won't get any rest. So I'll probably suffer today. But it won't be too bad. Since I'm having a writers block, my drawing skills are flowing and I got the perspective down for that drawing I owe Red. It's a pretty rough draft at the moment but at least I have the basics down. I'll just need to turn it from a beach scene to a park scene but that won't be too hard. Just shrink the amount of visible water, add in trees, trails, roads, and a elbow grease.

>>84026007
With me, it's just fingers. The face is pretty easy to get down once you understand the "setting" of where everything goes. In realistic, anime, and other specified art styles the face is really static. Once you get a handle for drawing faces, you'll always get it. The hardest part will only be in conveying emotion, which isn't too hard with practice.
But man, fuck fingers. Literally the worst.

>>84026026
Well lucky for you, girl swinging massive fucking axes/hammers is supremely my shit in any type of media. Especially Dungeons and Dragons. Try working on your drawing once more with the advice the anons and I gave ya. Show us your improvement!
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>>84026007
>faces are the most intimidating thing to draw
that and hands
They sure are, and you'll have to observe and practice a lot to drawing them well (I still can't!); but you can start with the very basic shape of them, and go from it. Here's a very quick sketch.
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>>84025802
>If the world consists of continental plates who are moving since the bigbang, did humanity ride a skateboard since the beginning of its existence?
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>>84026162
Jackie is the philosopher of skateboarding!
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>>84026162
http://pezpimp.webatu.com/StickerList/FlintstonesDotted.JPG
Yes, yes they have
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>>84026120
is there a way to make more cartoony ones?
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I tried again
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>>84026278
Jeez it's almost a new drawing with the new take. Star's expression is great, maybe pull the end of her mouth towards her cheek for a big smile. Fingers are better, try curling her right hand a bit. But your small changes made your drawing look infinitely better. Great going
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>>84026308
I'll draw more in the morning
too tired and tipsy
Is there anything with Star and any Marvel/DC/anime magical girls?
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>>84026271
Of course!
Cartoons have very extreme proportions, so you should change the basic shapes accordingly; but even maintaining them, you can stylize your drawing according to the desired results.

By the way: I am no real artist, just a self-taught doodler. Try to look for actual tutorials from people who really know what they're talking about!

>>84026278
That looks nicer, and more clean. The more one draws, the better they get, so never stop practicing, and look at your own drawings with critical eye, trying to spot what you can improve on.

>>84026340
>Is there anything with Star and any Marvel/DC/anime magical girls?
I'm sure there are, laying around — though unfortunately I didn't save any. I'm sorry Anon!
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>>84026340
>Is there anything with Star and any Marvel/DC/anime magical girls?
Do you mean with offical art, fan art, fan fiction?
In one of our previous threads there was a magical girl Star floating around. I couldn't find it now, but I'll take a better look when I'm in a better state of mind

>>84026378
>By the way: I am no real artist, just a self-taught doodler. Try to look for actual tutorials from people who really know what they're talking about!
For a doodler, you're art's pretty amazing. If you called yoruself an artist, it'd still be really amazing. Ya know, the quality. I'd like to see whom you call a true artist
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>>84023627
The wait is almost..over.
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>>84026378
I don't really get what those pictures are trying to say
like what do I do with the square hand/fingers?
I kinda get the face part with where eye placement should be but idk how I would do it when her face is turned
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>>84026406
fan art

Star x (enter favorite magical girl here)
I like magical team up cross-overs
like Scarlet Witch x Zatanna or Buffy X Madoka
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>>84025917
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>>84026190
Do one where Marco sent her lewds by mistake
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I like how scared and lost she looks when Marco didn't appear, She looks like she about to lose it and have a break down
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>>84026532
It's pretty cute

>>84026458
I found this and another pic a bit ago. But I'll search for the solo Sailormoon Star when I'm awake.
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66 for christian values
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>Star decides to try and cook Marco some food, Taco's!
>Surprisingly turned out awesome, Marco can't get enough of them
>Declares that he loves eating Star's Taco's
>Decides to make Star his special Marco's Mega Meaty Footlong Burrito with Marco's Special Sauce filling
>Star struggles with this mighty beast but she powers on through and victory is hers, The sauce squirting out surprised her but a quick licking and she was good to go
>school next day
>Marco is telling Fer and Al how much he enjoyed eating Star's Taco
>Completely misses the looks they give him
>Star meanwhile is telling all the girls about Marco massive meaty Burrito
>How it stuffed her to the bring and how delicious his special white sauce was
>Star doesn't notice the girls blushing harder and harder while their seats grow moist
>Later that day Star and Marco can't figure out why everyone was giving them strange looks and what was all the whispering about?

I also humble request more greens of Star and Marco being inadvertently cute and lewd to each other, While accidentally talking in innuendo, Causing everyone else to drop their pasta on the floor
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>>84026740
Why is Starco so Cute & Perfect /sveg/? I can't get enough of it
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>>84025168
>>84025237
>>84025440
>>84025802
Now I want to see her sedductive pose/expression!

Also hi folly!
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>>84026797
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>>84026811
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>>84026815
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>>84026837
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>Star and Marco watch a movie
>Slowly inch by inch their hands draw closer
>Before they even realize it they are holding hands
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>>84026900
Is there a place to read this full comic?
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>>84026900
kek
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>>84026441
Alright, this is a quick example of what you should do: the drawing of the character can be "dissected" in the basic shapes. By moving them around you can pose it around, and then use them as the base for your own drawing.

A learned artist could explain this much easily: sorry, Anon.

>>84026513
I might do an expression like that, after I'm done with the required one.

>>84026753
Hi Aegis, nice to see you!
The "flirty (playful" is one of the next expression I'll draw.
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>>84026919
http://areablog.tumblr.com/post/146292225132/ok-first-one-not-for-tumblr-u-prev-first this is the latest page, the previous one are linked from there

>>84026955
kek

>>84026967
WITCHCRAFT!
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>>84026988
>WITCHCRAFT!
It kinda is! Despite me pointing out that practice, I feel I didn't practice it enough myself, and instead I doodled my own stuff. "Copying" other styles and drawing can help a lot in getting better at drawing.

>>84026955
He he, nice. Thanks for the funny comic, Anon!

>>84026900
Another entry for the Area edits: well done, SynFag!
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You know it to be true
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>>84025917
Did we started the fire?
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Finally a Friday! The epic Paper Mario flame war was the best thing that came out of last week's thread.
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sup /sveg/ its finally friday! that means a week closer to Season 2!!

how all are you?
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>>84027063
BURN THE WITCH
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>>84027770
Could you at least wait until I'm done with the art for the VN, Anon?

>>84027767
Hi Anon, happy Friday!
I'm keeping myself busy: how are you?
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>>84025752
Afraid it might end up like that 90's Legend of Zelda comic from nintendo power?
>They stay nothing more than friends.
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>>84027811
fine..
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will the VN have multiple endings per route
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>>84027871
Thanks Anon: I swear I'll keep the amounts of witchcraft and devilry down to a bare minimum.

>>84027887
You should ask RedHoodie about the story and game details, but I think it's fair to assume there's going to be several different outcomes.

We're still early in development, and I think the script hasn't been finalized yet.
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Reminder that Star Butterfly is the insane heir to a kingdom of bloodthirsty monsters.
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What is in the bag /sveg/?
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…Aaaand another one!
Any feedback?
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>>84028255
Marco's hopes and dreams?
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>>84028269
>Dat boob squish
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>>84028269
Damn!
>inb4 people as "nipple pokes" through her shirt.

>>84028357
Well it the seductive/flirty pose, and Jackie would probably use her "assets"
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>>84028357
>>84028381
Glad you liked the pose! I'm taking a break before working on the last one.

Looks like I'm soon gonna start working on Janna!
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>>84028421
Flirty Janna!? YUUUUS!
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will there be a harem ending for the VN
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>>84028519
I hope so
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>>84028519
If that were a secret ending, it would arguably be worth playing the game four times to get it!

No idea though, Anon.
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Another Friday, another thread. Hey /sveg/, how's it been?
>>84028029
>Star Butterfly is the insane heir to a kingdom of bloodthirsty monsters
I fail to see the problem here.
>>84028255
Every thing in Marco's room.
And Marco himself, of course.
>>84028269
Oh, a blushing Jackie. Very nice Cola, she looks great and flirty.>>84028421
>Looks like I'm soon gonna start working on Janna!
I am both excited and fearful. Jana just might have the best reactions.
>>84028519
If there is, I'll find it.
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>>84028255
Hope's parents. Hope couldn't handle her parents fighting so she hired Janna to kidnap both for a week as a bonding exercise.
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>>84028660
Hi HB, nice to see you!

Glad you liked Jackie. Not gonna lie, I am slightly concerned about working on Janna, because she's always been the hardest character for me to draw: in the series, she's often drawn with asymmetrical features, and not very pretty at all!

>>84028722
Hi NW, happy Friday!
>Hope's parents. [snip]
Nice to see Janna helping her friend in need!

BTW, if anyone wants to see all the work I've done on the VN so far, here's the link to my imgur page: http://follycola.imgur.com/
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>>84028660
Hey HB! how you doing? I made a green earlier up the thread and want to know what you think if that's okay?
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>>84028763
Yea Janna can be tricky to draw, but I'm sure you'll be able to pull it off since you did pretty well with Jackie, after all.
>>84028781
Hello anon, I'm doing pretty well thank for asking.
>I made a green earlier up the thread and want to know what you think if that's okay.
Sure, I'm sure it came out well. Which green is it?
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>>84028911

Here you go >>84026729

(Typing on phone is hard)
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>>84028982
>Typing on phone is hard
Yea, the darn auto correct keeps getting in the way.
Anyway, that was a pretty funny green anon and the innuendos were well used. That bit with Star and Marco's burrito got a good laugh out of me. Good job and I hope to see more greens done by you in the future.
Coincidently, I was also eating a breakfast burrito myself.
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>>84029083
I got the idea from eating tortillas, Then i tried to get as much lewd and innuendo as i could in it

Will you be giving us any greens this weekend and show us how a master does it?
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>>84028519
There has to be one anon!
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>>84026729
Please, listed to this song while you're reading.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-Q2djOnNSE
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>>84028763
Yeah you may need to fake (just a little) her proportions so she can have a more feminine figure.
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>>84029277
I did so with Star too, if a just slightly; I think I'm going to draw Janna while keeping an eye on this version.
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Hello, my sweet artists and writers. May your lines be straight and your stories suspenseful.

I wanna nut in her ass
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>>84029308
Hi IWNIHAanon: happy Friday to you!
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>>84029267
I love Sexual Lobster
>Fernando = Older Marco
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>>84029205
>Will you be giving us any greens this weekend
I've got another idea for a Chelsea green that I wanna do. As for any others, we'll see, depends on what ideas I get while browsing /sveg/.
>A master
I can hardly consider myself a master. Just an amateur at best.
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>>84029267

>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ss7AQC79t2s
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>>84028660
>I fail to see the problem here.
The problem is that one day she's going to gather up the armies of Mewni and lead them on a campaign of conquest across the multiverse. And you can be damn sure that Earth will be first on the list.
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>>84029380
Still not seeing a problem here
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>>84029380
>And you can be damn sure that Earth will be first on the list.
Well I for one, welcome our new Mewman overlords.
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Welp, my country just shot itself in the foot.
I will never leave you, at least, /sveg/
How's your week been?
>>84025815
kek
>>84027887
Yes
>>84028255
Probably a sneaky Sabco.
>>84028269
Told you everyone would love the boobs.
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>>84029505
will there be a harem ending
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>>84029411
What, you WANT to live under the rule of Queen Star? She's fucking crazy. Her domain would be a constant barrage of cutsey havoc and destitution.

Just because she's cute doesn't mean it would be any fun to be one of her subjects.
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>>84029505
You a Brit?
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>>84029545
i for one welcome our new insect overlords
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>>84029529
Yes, but it'll be impossible to achieve without editing the game files. Kind of like how you can cheat in Undertale.
>>84029557
Yes, though judging by general sentiment perhaps not for much longer.
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>>84029620
BOO, BOO, ADD HAREM ENDING, BOO
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>>84029505
Hi RH, nice to see you here!
>Told you everyone would love the boobs.
Not the most difficult of guesses!
>>84029620
Wouldn't it be nice if you could achieve the harem ending by getting the best ending with each girl first? Editing the game to get a secret ending seems like cheating.

>>84029380
>>84029545
So, instead of us being ruled by a clique of pompous jerks who are either criminally incompetent or incompetently criminal, we would get lieges who can use magic and kick monster's ass? Where do I sign up?
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>>84029620
I feel your pain my good fellow, This nation is going down the shitter fast
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Mathematical!
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>>84029505
Hey Hoodie, nice edit there. I've been doing well this week so far. Yourself?
>>84029700
Nice! Sadly, Star lacks the hips needed to pull off Fionna's look.
Now Jackie on the other hand, she's got the hips we need for such a look.
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>>84029728
What about Pony Girl?
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>>84029700
What's up?
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>>84029758
That would work, though it might be fitting to have PonyHead as Lady, the rainbow unicorn thing.
Hell, we can have both with PonyHead as Lady and PonyGirl as Fionna.
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>>84029620
>No harem ending

Aww come on man!
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>>84029596
Are you that same anon who wants Star to lay eggs in your anus?

>>84029650
>So, instead of us being ruled by a clique of pompous jerks who are either criminally incompetent or incompetently criminal, we would get lieges who can use magic and kick monster's ass? Where do I sign up?
Do you honestly think Star being in charge would be any better? Cause there was a whole episode where she proved to be not so great a leader.
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>>84028029
But the lass is the good kind of monster we all need.
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I've posted Sabco so few times that no one will notice I'm posting lewd Sabco
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>>84029629
>>84029650
>>84029817
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>>84029913
>Are you that same anon who wants Star to lay eggs in your anus?

No i am not good sir
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>>84029933
d-delete this
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>>84029933
And double dubs. Today's my lucky day
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>>84029938
Lol, you're heartless RH!

>>84029933
Hi, Mackle!
>checking the pic for hidden Sabco…

>>84029964
Hi O1, nice to see you!
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>>84029938
Oop, meant >>84029854 instead of >>84029817
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>>84029913
I doubt they'd be able to take over in any meaningful manner anyway, magic and all. Humans are just too good at warfare to outright lose to what is effectively a medieval kingdom with highly advanced weaponry sprinkled in among the knights and steel.

I mean, Star is completely vulnerable without forethought, and the wand only lasts so long. I also doubt Mewnie has any idea how to deal with advanced military tactics, given their seemingly barbarian tactics which relied on flat out being more well equip than their opponents to win.
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>>84029989
Hey golly. I read the Nudist Saga. It was excellent. One thing I hope for is that maybe one day we could animate the best fanfics, like Bride of Monster Arm and Diaz Plan and the Nudist Saga. I hope that may happen one day.
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>>84029933
sauce
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>>84029933
Oh my, Sabrina is proving to be a lewd girl after all.
>>84029938
>>84030009
That's alright Hoodie, that is a funny edit.
>>84029964
Hey Oppai's 1, good to see ya. How's it been?
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>>84030012
>image
Gonna need more art of armored barbarian Star. Goddamn. Drawfags, feel more than welcome to add some muscle tone.

Anyway, I dunno. The football episode showed that Star has at least some foresight. At least when it comes to traps.
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>>84030063
Rule 34 Paheal bluejr
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>>84029933
and then Sabrina got pregnant
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Anyone else just here for the blonde loli porn? I don't even watch this show.
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>>84030062
Well there's every chance that, when season 2 threads come around, the increased presence of posters could look into older content like the Nudist Saga and make content related to it.
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Good morning everybody, hope everyone is doing good.
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>>84030062
That's one very specific selection of (lewd) fics, Mackle! Anyway, glad that you liked the "Saga": it was actually a "collaborative fic", and the individual chapters were prompted by Anons here on /sveg/. I always feel I have to point that out and share the ownership, when people compliments me about the "Nudist Saga"!

>>84030113
I always love when fics and drawings become inspiration for other works.

>>84030160
Good morning WF: welcome back!
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>>84029933
we have to show Amarillo that image
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>>84030113
Yeah that would be cool. But what I'm talking about is something like an animated special specifically based off of those Fanfics that's like an episode of the show. Another fanfic I want something like this done for besides Diaz Plan, Nudist Saga, and Bride of Monster Arm is Writefriend's As Long As I Want You. I don't know if we could ever do an animated as a general.
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>>84030185
Hi folly, I'll be heading in a bit but still wanted to say hi.

>>84030231
Pretty sure she has that in her Sabco folder.
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>>84030290
Glad you did: have fun watching "Independence Day"!
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>>84029989
>>84030064
sup you guys how you've been? I've been good, I browse the threads but don't comment that often
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>>84030091
what would a pregnant sabrina even be like now that I think about it
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>>84030290
I don't know if she has this image. It's lewd as fuck, literally
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>>84030090
He is drawing more pedo cartoons. He is much love them.
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>>84030320
Haven't gone yet, just literally woke up haha.

>>84030342
Maybe but I can't help shake the feeling she has it. She'll deny it probably tho, but come on it's sabco... How can she not?
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>>84030238
Maybe not fully animated, but something like that could be done as a series of stills in Ren'py. All we'd really need is the art.
Of course, if an actual animation project were to take off, I'd be down for that.
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>>84030342
>Implying Amarillo is in any way innocent
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>>84030401
Just don't look at me, guys!
>A: I'm already over my head in work drawing STATIC images.
>B: I would definitely suck at drawing lewd stuff.

If I weren't a fraud, I would have at least drawn that illustration from the "Saga" that I've been promising for months! Sorry guys!
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>>84030421
im pretty sure they have lewd fantasies about her being sabrina
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>>84030421
At minimum we know she has a collection of asses that Haich draws. More or less confirmed to me by the Sabco Queen herself.
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>>84030328
Well, all I knowis that the baby wouldn't survive because Sabrina falls over all the time.
After a few months, the only thing that would come out of her glorious vagoo would be a mush of brains and flesh, the fetus crushed by constant injuries, Sabrina and Marco sad and crying.
Marco shouldve played it safe and not try to be the misunderstood bad boy
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>>84030474
dude... what the fuck is wrong with you
also they would have been kept safe by marco inside of the safety bunker marco has in his house
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>>84030458
I don't know, you know how to draw some tits and thighs. Surely in that case you wont have to worry about drawing the clothes
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Hi again /sveg/

As usual I am striken by bad luck and last night my computer froze on me and now windows won't boot up, classic!

Posting from an intenet cafe, I will probably miss on the weekend if I can't find a solution before sunday, but just posting to say Hi and let everyone know I am not dead.

So see you whenever I can solve this mess, /sveg/! have a happy weekend.
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>>84030522
look at this image >>84029933
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>>84030469
No nutters got the asses. He has to have somewhere to nut
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>>84029505
>britain took back its country and crashed the EU's stockmarkets 3 times harder than there own
I fail to see the problem in there.
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>>84030522
Hey Ama we were just talking about you. It's like we say your name three times and then BAM here you are.

Are you Beetlejuice?
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>>84030537
I AM ON A PUBLIC PLACE ANON!

And Sabco is not for lewd! Is not for reality either...
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>>84030522
Hi, Ama! It really sucks your PC betrayed you, and right on Friday of all days: good luck on getting it to work again, and see you! Remember that we love you!
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>>84030580
look at this fucked up thing Mackle said >>84030474
go get mad at him
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>>84028660
>If there is, I'll find it.
Nice entrance there, amigo

>>84028255
Whatever is keeping me from writing part 2 of my Brittco
Let her hold onto it, I'm actually drawing!

>>84029308
Thanks Nutter!

>>84029505
Heeeeeeeey Red! I'm so sorry, man. At least they had the balls to do it, unlike Texas

>>84029933
ayy
>>84029986
Welcome to thread, Mackle. Happy Friday! I know you started the thread, but I forgot to say hi.

>>84030522
Hey Ama, good luck with your computer. I'll add in some Sabco, just for you

>>84030575
Anon, I see you're quite of a fan of the Brits

<///>
Man it feels good getting some sleep after staying up all night. And now that I finally remember, Anyone here go to other general and check 'em out? Why was /woyg/ more cringey than /sug/? Nothing but ship posters and roleplaying. And it's such a comfy show, too. I guess it's my fault for wandering over.
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>>84030504
>>84030601
He's right though.

At the moment anything featuring Sabrina that DOESN'T feature her getting horribly injured is a shit characterization based on all we've seen in canon.
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To my British sveg counterparts, good luck.

https://youtu.be/qbmWs6Jf5dc
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I feel like Marco has a safety bunker
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>>84030648
I'm not into punk, but I fucking love this song
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>>84030612
Well generals of a dying/ending show always turn especially negative; doubly so if there was possible controversy into how exactly the ending decision came about, as was the case with both GF and WoY.
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>>84030744
I dunno, other than everything hating the blue balling ending and the statue search in gf, they seemed pretty fine. Especially compared to woy. Maybe it's just me, though.
I hope we don't fall down that dark path.
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>>84030579
It's another creepy coincidence! I will just be here for a couple minutes and you guys somehow were able to tell exacly when I arrived here!

/sveg/ magic.

>>84030589
>>84030612
Thanks guys! such a shitty timming too but hey, I hope I can at least save my OH SO HUGE sabco collection.

>>84030601
He is right tho!
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>>84030858
cant Marco just protect Sabrina and possibly put her in a safety bunker, and besides we all know the condom would break with Sabrinas luck
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>>84030858
You can always remake it

<///>
Oh man I forgot my name, whoops. Though I'm sure people knew my typing style, right?
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lets have Sabco be the flavor of the week
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>>84030888
Heh, you're the only one that uses "<///>" in his post, SN! Nice trips BTW.

>>84030858
Now, if only we found the way to channel /sveg/ magic in order to heal your computer, that would be really awesome!
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>>84030888
It was obvious it was you, SN.

Well /sveg/ I take my leave, I will see what I can do, I could just buy a hard drive and reinstall windows on it and set my old one as Slave so I dont lose my files. if all else fails I may try to find a cheap computer or something, it can't be much worse than the one I had before!

So see you whenever I get that sorted out! Happy Friday everyone! I love you all! Not in a creepy way, don't worry.
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>>84030474
continue
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>>84030921
Yes, let's do that. Ama earned it
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>>84030921
>>84030976
That's kinda cruel: I propose to at least wait until Ama can participate to the general, before getting a Sabco weekend, lol!

>>84030946
Once again, I wish you good luck!
See you soon, Ama!
Also, I think nobody would worry if you loved us in a creepy way.
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>>84030931
Thanks Folly!
>Heh, you're the only one that uses "<///>" in his post
It so that my own talking doesn't confuse people as another response to a comment

>>84030946
Be safe Ama, try not to break the bank with your new comp, if you get one.

>>84030976
Well you know what you have to do for next thread, Mackle!

>>84030995
I assumed the flavour was per thread, not weekend.
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>>84031015
>Well you know what you have to do for next thread, Mackle!
Oh yes: LEWD SABCO EDITION
Just kidding, but even so I don't think I can make the next thread. In an hour I'm going to work for 8 hours and the way this general is running now we are going to have a new thread way before I get off
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>>84031015
>I assumed the flavour was per thread, not weekend.
From what I can remember, the flavor is for the weekend, mostly to give time to the content producers to get something done in time. But I could be wrong.
In any way, I think it would only be fair not to have the Sabco flavor before the main shipper can be present!
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>>84031066
Have fun at work, whenever you go and whatever you do

>>84031073
That's not a bad idea. Maybe when we get the a-okay from Ama, we'll go for it.
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>>84031073
True. When she comes back, spam Sabco and call the thread sabco. She'll have a welcome home present
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I'm not really feeling this "crying" pose: any suggestion?
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>>84031298
Maybe have one hand on the side of her head, pulling her hair? What level of "sad/distraught" are you aiming for?
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>>84025028
Know what'd be more fun?
If she assumed he was going to go on an ego trip and basically projects onto him that he's doing it when really he's just kinda enjoying being respected for once.

It'd give him a chance to have a 'What the fuck Star' moment, equivalent to her 'What the fuck Marco' during Bloodmoon.
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>>84030328
Likely she's be super careful and defensive of the baby. Add that with Marco's safe nature and the baby would live in world with zero chances of danger with obsessive safety parents.
>>84030474
Damn Mackle, the sad part is that your most likely right. With all the damage Sabrina has suffered, who know's if she can even have kids.
>>84030522
Hey Amarillo, how's it been?
>>84031298
Looks rightly sad, though I can't help but feel like Jackie would make a diffrent pose. Though I can't name it, I'll have to think on it.
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>>84031383
>What level of "sad/distraught" are you aiming for?
Something comparable to pic related.

>Maybe have one hand on the side of her head, pulling her hair?
I'll try something like that, maybe it will give a nice result: thanks for the suggestion, Anon!
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>>84031438
No worries! Big fan of all your work, don't ever stop!
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IT'S HAPPENING!!!!!!

https://twitter.com/DaronNefcy/status/741443545421086720

STARCO TRAILER MOTHER FUCKERS! WOOOO
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>>84031497
>https://twitter.com/DaronNefcy/status/741443545421086720

Nice try.
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>>84031432
put her in Marcos safety bunker
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>>84031497
Sure, whatever floats your boat


<///>
See ya everyone. Gonna go to the beach and draw. Inspiration in nature
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>>84031492
I'll try my best, Anon!

>>84031557
Have fun SN, see you later!
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Hello /sveg/, glad to see all if you around. Unfortunately, my laptop charger died so I'm not able to do edits nor stay around shitposting as usual. And it's sad because I was mildly inspired this week-end. If I'm lucky, I'll get a replacement in some hours, so wish me luck again. See you around and take care.

>>84030522
So, Ama also has PC problems. What a creepy coincidence, indeed.
Good luck, Ama. Let's hope you can solve it soon too.
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>>84031604
Hi DC, nice to see you!
>my laptop charger died
Good luck on the replacement charger: we need you here with us, Don!

>a creepy coincidence, indeed.
Holy shit, now I'm getting paranoid myself: once my decrepit PC finally breaks, I'll have no way of connecting to internet at all, let alone continue to draw stuff! I don't wanna think about it…
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>>84031604
Hey Don, sucks to hear your charger is bust, hopefully you can find a replacement soon. Take care until then.
>>84031549
>put her in Marcos safety bunker
Why is it all too believable to think that Marco took the time and resources to build a Safety Bunker /sex dungeon? (Janna's doing, she helped him make it and included her own ideas.)
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>>84031497
get out Alex
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what would it be like in the show if the way Marco and Star met was by way of a blind date vs the canon show?
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>>84031755
>"Ok Sabrina go into here, you and the baby will be safe in here, its certified to protect you"
>"Ok Marco, I trust you on this one, you are absolutely sure I will be safe"
>"I am 100% positiveon this one"
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>>84032133
>Sabrina manages to get into no less than fifteen accidents in her nine month pregnancy.
>Against all odds, the baby is completely unharmed.
>Turns out all of her luck is in her ovaries.
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>>84031708
Thanks, FC. Damn, and this week-end I actually wanted to contribute. Oh, the irony...
> now I'm getting paranoid myself
Don't think too much about it, FC. My charger died but it's 5 years old and from a korean brand, it wasn't meant to last forever. As long as you take care of the hardware side of your computer, everything should be fine. And even if that happened, life finds a way.
Last week, a friend of mine had issues with his pc. He said it was slow and sometimes it reseted without warning. But before he decided to take it to a technician, I told him how to open in and clean the dust inside. He's never done that before, and after he did his pc was back to normal. We care so much about the software side that we ignore it's a two sided device.
>>84031755
Thanks, HB. I'm leaving right now to find one. At least it's not an expensive piece of equipement, so my savings can afford it.
But to be honest, even if it were expensive, I'd give an arm and a leg to get my pc running again...Well, maybe I wouldn't give my amrs but my legs are for sale any day.
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>>84032210
15 is a huge imporvement than what it would have been if she was outside the safety bunker
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>>84031298
I'd suggest either having her turn away slightly, brushing her eyes clean of tears or have her leaning forward with both hands in trying to cover her face. Those match up closest with what I'd imagine a young lass would do if they were crying whilst talking to someone, for whatever reason that may be.
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>>84032508
>both hands in trying to cover her face
It would break my heart to see something like this.
Excellent suggestion.
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>>84032210
The child grows up to be reckless dare devil that likes a rough and tumble life
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>>84032677
>Sabrina dedicates herself to protecting her as much as possible
>Marco tries to help, but keeps getting her into trouble whenever Auntie Star comes to visit
>Adorable scenarios resulting in Sabrina receiving numerous minor injuries ensue
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>>84032508
Both are nice suggestions Anon, thanks!

Call me lazy, but I would prefer not to draw a new pose from scratch: so I'll have to see which of the default poses can better adapt to one of those ideas.

In the meantime, pic related is what I've been cooking up until now.

>>84032233
I clean my PC somewhat regularly, and even oil the fans!
>And even if that happened, life finds a way.
In my case? I don't think so.
But yeah: I couldn't do anything about it either way, so let's not worry about it at all.
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>>84032133
>Sabrina walks alone down into the dark bunker.
>Right as she gets to the bottom, a loud whip crack sounds out throughout the enclosed room.
>The lights flicker on suddenly and reveal Janna in the middle of the room, dressed as a dominatrix and laying on a velvet couch.
>Around her are various devices of torture.
>"Ready for your daily submisson, Marco?" Janna asks while licking her whip.
>Sabrina just stares at Janna in shock, who in turn notices the girl and also becomes suprised.
>Marco then walks in, notices Janna and her set up, and proceeds to push a swich on the wall.
>Janna lets out a surprised yelp as the room moves into action, reverting back into a safety bunker while Janna is caught in the middle and disappears with the couch as it's lowered into the floor.
>"Sorry about that Sabrina." Marco apologizes, "Me and Janna agreed to share the lease to the bunker. I had my idea's for it and she had... hers."
>>84032233
Good luck with finding something affordable Don, stuff for Computers can be so pricey nowadays.
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>>84032133
>>84032808
>>84032210
>>84032740
so this is the order of the story then huh
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>>84032788
I'd suggest keeping the hands on her face, bunched up just below her eyes or over them. That's the most natural expressing I can think of whilst retaining the default pose, outside of her hands and head obviously. Keep up the good work.
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>>84032967
That's a bit much like Star's crying face, I'd say, but good suggestion.
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>>84032788

I think the pose here >>84025978 would serve a better purpose, like she is turning away, hiding her tears, also I think it would look better if both of her eyes are closed.
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>>84033016
>>84032788
Ah true, that's likely what was fueling the idea. Perhaps it could be changed up to having her arm across her face, trying and failing to keep her sadness hidden, with a few tears underneath that give away the reality. Her other arm could be purposed somewhere else, perhaps on her hip, or even held out with a flat palm as a kind of 'stop' gesture. Or as >>84033027 said, using the side pose so you can have her turning away.
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>>84032967
>>84033027
Thanks for the suggestions: the "default 2" pose and the hands covering the eyes sound good choices.

It also paints quite a heartbreaking, as Jackie, normally an outgoing character, would then appear kind of isolating herself out of sadness.

I don't know if I'll complete the expression today, though: my eyes are a little tired right now.
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>>84033141
Well there's a good few ideas here, no need to rush with them. Just try them out and see if any fit better than others. I think the big difference you'd have to make with Jackie crying over Star is that Star holds her heart on her sleeve. If she's going to cry it's going to be flat out sobs, whereas with Jackie she'd likely be shocked she was sad enough to cry and try and cover it up by turning away or covering her eyes and trying to regain her cool. I'd also say much the same with Janna, when you eventually get round to her, she'd likely completely bail from a situation where she ends up crying, can't show genuine weakness and all that jazz. She's even got her hat too as a way to cover up her eyes.
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Generally speaking, there's going to be tears in this VN, and at this rate it's going to be utterly brutal.
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>>84033292
oh dear
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>>84033245
I'm kind of two minds about Janna, so much so that I could make two different crying poses from her: on one side, I agree with you that it would be nice having her hiding her tears (and thanks for the suggestion of using the beanie, BTW!) — but I also pictured her crying while staring directly at the viewer, very bluntly and very sternly.

>>84033292
Our game is gonna be the next Dark Souls!
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>>84033292
Christ, I hate the idea of genuine sadness in the characters; but I respect your inclusion of sadder elements given we're unlikely to get too much from the show due to the feel-good adventures tone it has to work with. I just want Marco to score man, tell me he makes it.
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>>84033366
I thought so as well, so you could have the initial sprite for her covering up her tears with her hat and/or turning away from the screen. Then you have the 2nd one which is full blown unbridled tears when the final confrontation happens. Her persona is likely much more put on than Jackie's is, so the difference in terms of hiding tears would be different to reflect that.
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>>84033366
...Not quite THAT kind of brutal.
Two crying pics for Janna could work well, if you had the basic poses for it.
>>84033374
Don't worry, Anon, there are a fair few Good Ends planned. Naturally I want them to be very satisfying.
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>>84033292
go all out, I don't care let, the drama flow like in this fanfiction story, I've never finished.
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Hello /sveg/
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does Star have a vagina?
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>>84033440
My objective in drawing the expressions for the girls is to make them distinctive, and hopefully appropriate to the characterizations: even the expressions relative to the same emotion vary considerably from a character to the other.
Regarding the second crying pose for Janna, in my mind I picture her being both sad and mad at the same time, like saying: "fine, asshole, you finally got me to cry: happy now?!"

>>84033510
Don't give up on your fic, Anon: the only sad thing would be if you never gave us a chance to read it!
I must admit that I'm a drama lightweight, so I'd probably suffer throughout the read: but don't let that stop you!

>>84033480
>there are a fair few Good Ends planned.
Happy ending? Happy ending, HAPPY ENDING!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HoHQNbGfRDs

>>84033647
Hi, Anon: happy Friday!
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>>84031432
It's unbearably cute
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>>84033292
Tears of joy or tears of "I fucked up real bad this time"?
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>>84033731
assuming from contexts its I fucked up real bad this time
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