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Hey stupid, whataya doing in dis thread?

>>83655598
It's 4 o'clock in the morning.

Who on earth wants to work on a /co/ project at 4 in the morning?

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>>83655718
Oh boy 4 AM!

>[Tiny Dancer]
>The stand is a butterfly knife with wings and a pair of googly eyes.
>When the stand is stabbed into someone, their blood will flow out unnaturally and turn into small humanoid figures that dance in time with the opponents heart beat.
>The amount of blood drawn out from a wound inflicted by the stand is equal to the amount of time the stand was within a person. Once it has drawn out the amount of blood equal to the time it was inside, the wound will close itself and heal.
>The generated figure's size and shape is determined by how much blood has been drawn.
>The stand can also cause blood to heat up by firing lasers from it's eyes. Blood cannot scald or burn a person it is from however.
>Blood creations dance randomly and cannot be controlled expect by steadying the heart of the person they are from.
Destructive Power: C
Speed: B
Range: D
Durability: E
Precision: C
Developmental Potential: A

>>83655718
>It's 4 o'clock in the morning.
Dammit, i forgot I was five hours ahead of America.

In the meantime it do have one suggestion for Part 7; V (from V For Vendetta) and [Dear Darcy]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pn6MrzEzt7U

The idea is that for first half of the race V is on the side of Nobody and his ideals, but he defects when he realizes Nobody is a bad as the people he's fighting against.

>>83655718
Because we've lost control of our lives.

>>83655873
>The idea is that for first half of the race V is on the side of Nobody and his ideals, but he defects when he realizes Nobody is a bad as the people he's fighting against.
I can't see V doing that. He's entirely dedicated to ideals, no matter what is done to achieve them.
Plus, we've got quite a few side-switching characters so far.

>>83655718
>Who on earth wants to work on a /co/ project at 4 in the morning?
British people who use 4chan? Seriously, while it's 4 in the morning for you it's about quarter to ten on my end.

>>83655908
Guess that shows what I know about V, that's to say, nada nil and nothing.

Does Demongo still need a Stand? There are several userless Stands that could work, like Life During Wartime.

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What's a JoJo thread doing in /co/?

>>83656367
Oh hey /a/

>>83656367
They still complaining about us in /a/?

>>83656423
apparently not.

>>83656367

To be fair, we usually have a more fitting OP image.

>>83657333
OP here, it's my fault, I just grabbed the one I thought would look best.

>>83656367
IT JUST WORKS

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Here's something I drew a while ago. It sucks but at least you guys can get a glimpse of what Vicky's stand would look like and someone else redraws/redesigns it like Steam Machine.

Bampu.

>>83655925
>>83655908

If anything, he'd be working against Nobody at first, but defect to him, seeing him as a kindred spirit. Rationalizing it as am evolution of his ideals.

He got super excited when he went from a justice guy to an anarchist. Nobody is someone he'd like.

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>>83659288
SEKAI ICHI

>>83659332
His Stand should basically let him be anyone or anything as long as there is alliteration involved, this makes him the Number None of Nobody's inner circle.

>A box labeled 'Adrian's Anchovies' slips and plummets towards Crazy Jane
>As it is tumbling, it turns into V holding a dagger.
>Cliff pushes her out of the way as V hits the ground in an explosion of splinters and cans.
>The impact sends the 'Adrian's' and the 'Anchovies' in two separate directions, breaking the alliteration and meaning V cannot use the box.

Why not have The Toy show up in Part 8?

>>83659670
Too many DP characters already, unless there's another Toy you're referring too.

>>83655598
>focus: Thief fight, Morrocco vs KND, Looniversity
I already did all of that last thread.

The real focus is on the markets and the 4 businessmen.

>>83659696
It's not like anyone reads the main focus anyway.

We still need a stand for Demongo, but the Four Businessmen all have stand already.

>>83659730
They're still not on the doc, so I thought their stands were still being worked over.

>>83659695
It was supposed to be a play on the fact the DP Toy was late to everything, the character slated to receive the Stand referencing her (Phoney Bone) is late to the part he's SUPPOSED to be participating in. this would either mean he shows up during Part 8, or appears right at the end of Part 7.

>>83659609
Also he's the only member of the inner circle who isn't really killed, purely because of how his Stand works. this nod to Number None is...slightly less subtle.

>>83659758
No, they have stands.

>Doug Dimmadome
>[HEY SANDY]
>A squirrel in a retro-futuristic spacesuit sipping lemonade. It can spit onto surfaces and turn them rubbery. This works in combination with Doug's Speedwagon hat attack.

>Monorail Man
>[BRING IT BACK HOME]
>A cane. It can generate spherical creatures with arms similar to his based on his movement. The more active he is, the more entities he can create. They can attack people, build things, or disassemble things with ease. Additionally, the cane can stretch to become like a whip.

>Toffee
>[DURCH DEN MONSUN]
>A bladed prosthetic finger the user wears. It can allow him to harmlessly separate his body into as many pieces as he desires and reassemble himself. He can also do the same thing to any people or objects his finger pierces, but the limit is five things at a time. However, he can't do this to his head, which is his most vulnerable part.

That's what I remember them being anyway.

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Hey there. Decided to voicefag for the announcer for a bit. Here are the current results. The only mic I have right now is the iPhone's so the quality might be bad:

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-Td-mSKpaCvYUxkNEVjTUlYNGc

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-Td-mSKpaCvaXROZ0N1ZDJDZHc

>>83659872
For some reason, I don't really like the idea of V surviving. If he's in, he should die I feel.

>>83659936
Alright.

So we still need to take care of Demongo >>83656257 so whoever said they were going to do the market can get on with it.

Any suggestions for that?

>>83661167
Well eh does die, [Dear Darcy] on the other hand lives on in alliteration (the fact it also looks like V when it manifests only makes things more confusing)

>>83659936
Ok, I'm adding them to the doc (and any other that is currently missing)

>>83662001
and of course, the darn site is down. Anyway, what was the name of Chernabog's Stand?

>>83662387
[Night on Bald Mountain] IIRC

While waiting around for whoever to write the market, might as well revisit the second Gangreen fight.

>this time the Gangreen Gang is using teamwork
>Ace and Zorak's Stands working together: Zorak spawn extra limbs and tosses one of these limbs to Ace while fighting an opponent, all 「GREEN BEANS」limbs get attracted to Ace, allowing him to place them on his opponent
>Roger has LGB spew out things that Ace's stand can grab and attract
>Meanwhile RR and Shego's stands work together too. Shego's flames can spread and Shade of Green is combustible, they can send a giant, sharp, freezing cloud of hypothermia at enemies.
>Rancid Rabbit's stand is constantly producing heat as it moves and grows, acts as a sort of armor for the gang so they don’t freeze to death

>Cartman is covered in green arms and feeling ill, Squidward makes him his dance partner again, the extra arms, though poisonous, are proving useful for deflecting things thrown at them
>Rolf and Plucky are up in the vortex of things flying around, they're working in tandem to get closer to the gang
>Taffy and Toph are playing defense, putting up barriers and removing the poisonous arms by either cutting them off or turning them into cheese
>While this is all happening, the burning freezing cloud of suffocating death descends upon them
>They find out what it does when one of the extra arms stuck to Squidward gets hit by it, causing the green arm to flash-freeze and burn away
>Pluck manages a lucky hit through his holes on Shego, disrupting their teamwork for a moment
>Squidward has Cartman dance his way under all the stuff in the air and kick Klotz in the nuts, stopping the flow of things into Ace twister, and also the suction necessary to maintain the air speed for it
>Rancid Rabbit tries to shove his cloud stand down Plucky's throat, but Plucky is wearing a mask with holes on the inside for air flow and holes on the outside to disperse it through all the other holes he made while in the vortex,
cont.

>>83663824
>With the cloud and twister out of the way, the UR close the gap and take out Rancid Rabbit and Zoark, Ace also goes down when Taffy turns his shades into cheese, blinding him long enough for Plucky to knock him out
>The only one left standing now is Shego, who is super charged with the area around her being too hot to enter
>Plucky notices several of his holes are still near her and gets an idea, asking the others to stall her for a bit
>Shego is shooting beams of napalm at them now
>Toph is keeping her from running using glass walls she's constantly rebuilding
>Rolf is about ready to go into the hot zone when water starts shooting up all around Shego through Plucky's holes
>Plucky reappears near the UR through another hole, he linked the holes near Shego to holes he made in a water tower
>Shego is now surrounded by steam and having a hard time breathing before finally passing out

>The UR beat the shit out of the Gangreen Gang to make sure they're not going to pull another fast one, then interrogate them
>they find out the gangs are just small fries hired by the WB through a third party
>before long they hear sirens and leave the Ganggreen gang to be arrested
>The Gangreens have broken bones now, so they're not going to be able to escape so easily
>Rex Banner steps out of the cop car and sees the Gangreens beaten and tied up
>He knows they're in league with the other gangs since he just got done interrogating the Firesides
>He remarks he's in for a long stay in this country as he takes them into custody

>>83663824
I'll write the Market, I just need someone to write a stand for Demongo.

Could someone else do it? Plase? I'm tired of writing stand suggestions after the mall.

>>83664138
Dude if no one is writing a stand for him pick one from the doc that hasn't been used or cut him.

>>83664220
I was going to say that, we still have a good amount of userless Stands in the doc (and some on the older threads that I forgot to add to the list)

>>83664138
His stand lets him put a price on anything. Everything is for sale, even your soul, especially your soul.

Prices are subject to current market value and, if it's an individual, their morality. If the target is a living thing and not sapient then the cost of buying it is represented in terms of sustenance.

Demongo can possess anyone he has bought out.

How does that grab you?

>>83664220
>>83664321
Ok, one more question that I may foreshadow here, how does Max die again? The doc doesn't say.

>>83664524
That works. What do we call it?

>>83664525
He was in the WB tower when HIM knocked it over.

Donald survived the collapse, Max wasn't so lucky. That's what I was going to go with anyway.

>>83664525
I suggested that a lesser demon takes a cheap shot at him during the finale, but other anon prefered that he dies due to collateral damage

>>83664554
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qMxX-QOV9tI

>>83664554
Victim of Changes?

>>83664568
>>83664590

Ah.

Might be too dark, but I was thinking about doing something with Donald off to the side where he's seen training his stand and unintentionally setting up some sort of thing that winds up killing Max in the finale (like making a heap of scrap metal that Max gets thrown into or collapses on him or something), but I don't if that'd be too dark or how it would work. Thoughts?

>>83664648
>>83664662
I'll go with [PRICE TAG] and make it something like Double D's labeling thing I guess.

>>83593721
>The UR reach the new floor of the tower; Forte is there with numerous attendants, already using [MOZART'S HOUSE] to [insert power here]
>Cartman yells that he's so fucking sick of fighting music guys
>"I am no mere "music guy", child. I am the great Maestro Forte, and unlike those idiotic Boogiemen and those banal celebrities, my performances ALWAYS bring the house down!"
>[MOZART'S HOUSE] intensifies
>He's eventually defeated after yelling at one of his attendants about how he's BOLTED TO THE WALL
>Taffy, with the rest of the UR acting as distractions, manages to get close enough to convert the bolts to cheese, which isn't strong enough to hold him up, causing him to fall down and shatter

>>83664688
Damn...
I like that, though. Maybe he, like, punches a girder in half, which ends up going through Max's chest?
So his rage against hell is also a way of raging against himself, trying to redeem himself. Or maybe he's just angry so he doesn't have to think about his role in things.

>>83664801
Maybe setting up Max's death is what lets him in Hell in the first place. Max would've survived if not for his actions, so he's technically enough of an unrepentant murderer that Hell has to accept him, even if he's going to fuck shit up on an apocalyptic scale.

>>83664880
I also think Max should show up at the trial, and get to have a heartwarming moment with Goofy before he heads to the Afterlife and Goofy gets resurrected.

Silly suggestion for part 6: Dora has a Joseph-style mad libs catchphrase, "Can you say ____?"
She uses it to talk shit like "Can you say "soy un pendejo"?", to which the usual response from her non-Spanish-speaking opponents is "Huh? Soy un pendejo?"
It's also the only thing she's willing to say when she's first brought in, otherwise making good use of the Fifth.

>>83664944
Isn't the mystery of where Max's soul went part of what's motivating Goofy in part 7?
Goofy should be present and testifying during the trial, though.

>>83664944
As touching as that would be, Goofy's motivation in the race is saving his son's soul. He believes that his resurrection was caused by Max dying, and not because Donald saved him. He's currently under the impression his son is in hell and will do whatever it takes to save him, even aligning with scum like Nobody.

Though he still turns on Nobody at the end and tries to kill them both, Nobody survives this however.

>>83665032
Do we ever reveal what happened to Max, or is it just Bad End for everyone?

>>83664688
I was going to have Max start at the bottom and work his way up while Donald starts at floor 100 and works his way down. So they're never really near each other in the tower.

The plan is to get as much as the building's security as possible in the first 100 floors so the UR can go up from there with less things in the way.

>>83665129
Goofy's ghost and Max's are shown reuniting in the afterlife as Jane happens upon the scene. Like Iggy and Abdul.

At that point, Goofy hd started to change his side and become good. Jane and Goofy would probably have a moment where they discussed his past and motive. Jane breaks down crying when she finds out what happened to him, but the corpse parts give her a vision of him and Max ascending into heaven.

>>83664974
Heh. Put it in.

>>83665200
Well when HIM topples the tower, Donald pulls himself and from the rubble (the other members of the UR were presumably able to avoid being chunky salsa'd), looks over to something in the almost completely buried in some of the much denser rubble and then breaks down in tears.

Then the tears start to boil...

>>83665351
What if he hulks out into PURE RAGE Donald?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p7O22GuSc58

>>83665351
The UR jumped from the top of the tower when The Red Guy showed up.

We haven't worked out how they survived that yet.

>>83665484
Bobo, coupled with Rolf doing some Stand trickery with falling rubble to reduce his speed?

>>83665466
That is exactly what I was going for. He then flies up on a jet of steam from [Steam Machine] and wallops Giant HIM in the jaw so hard that he punches one of HIM's teeth out.

>>>/qst/

>>83666200
Oh hello /a/, how are you doing? This is not really a quest, so I am unsure as to why you are directing us there.

>>83666300
Do not respond to shitposters.

Do these threads always slow down this much on weekends?

>>83667436
kinda, and at random times becomes very active

>>83667480
Ah, OK
I was getting worried
Keep going /co/
I know you can finish this

>>83665537
I don't think the doors work that way with momentum, but Rolf did just get a remastered stand right before they jumped, so maybe.

>>83667556
Right now it feels like we're just waiting.

Anon writing the market, you don't need to make a master piece college essay, just shoot from the hip. I came up with everything on the fly (using what we had as a base) while I had the reins from the city to the start of the market.

You can do it in the span of an hour or less probably.

>>83668296
I know. I'm just busy right now. Expect the Market by tonight probably. I'll let you know if things change.

In the meantime, you can work on the Four Businessmen.

>>83668405
Can't, I need details about Telephone Avatar since Rolf answers a phone call from it after they get back from the market.

I need to know what kind of effect and changes it makes to Rolf, and I expect this to end up being something that should generate interest, so I was waiting to bring it up after the market was done so we'd end up with less confusion.

>>83668513
>Less confusion
>In Part 5

>>83668513
What you need? his Stand?

>>83668596
Different type of confusion.

The story can be as confusing as you want, but it won't get made if we end up being too confused to make it.

Save that kind of meta shit for the last part.

>>83660340
But we already have announcer stuff done

>>83668678
That would be helpful since it's not on the doc.

But I need to know in what ways Rolf should be different. How much should he begin to obsess over the dream he had? Does it interfere with his ability to fight?

He should get more obsessed with it each day, but it only lasts I think 3 days before TA takes physical form.

>>83668802
Is an old-ass version (one of the first Stands made for this part) so it was never revised:
The Telephone Avatar
[Telephone Line]
Appearance: itself
The Telephone Avatar, or Telephone Line, is a useless stand bound to information. It can switch what form this information is when it is able to, turning from flashing beams of light to crackles of sound, although it prefers to travel as information inside telephone lines.
It can manifest a humanoid form only by "infecting" the minds of others with bits of it's information into their brains. Over time, they will get a more complete mental image of the Avatar, and when it is perfectly accurate, it will appear in the physical realm
When it is physically, it can no longer turn into information that us not abstract, like thoughts or computer data, but it gains the ability manipulate abstract data when it touches the medium it travels through
When it's physical form is destroyed, it reverts back into pure information and must infect more minds to manifest, but it is weaken in this state and can be captured

>>83668296
Oh, shoot, I forgot he'd switched to Secret Doors. There's probably some bullshit he could pull with Revolving Doors, but that won't work with the Remastered Stand.
Is there anyone else in the party who could pull that kind of bullshit? Closest I can think of is Taffy, cheesing the falling rubble and bouncing it off other things to slow their descent.
>>83668854
IIRC it was revised a few threads back, but I can't remember any differences from the one there.
Unrelated, but I'm still kind of disappointed that its stand is Telephone Line rather than [DIAL-A-SONG]. Maybe we can use that for, I dunno, Manteau in part 7.

>>83668854
My idea was it infects someone's mind with in the UR to better spy on them, it just so happened to get Rolf.

So the only changes it makes to Rolf are him talking about that dream he keeps having then.

>>83668973
I was under the impression that a remastered stand kept all of its previous abilities on top of the new ones it gains.

>>83664974
Perfect for a fight against the Warden.

"Can you say, done esta the pocket sand?"

>>83669109
Chariot Requiem didn't seem to have any of Silver Chariot's abilities, but GER uses Gold Experience abilities a grand total of once, so who knows. Maybe remastered stands keep their previous powers in a more limited form. Maybe it doesn't matter, and we shouldn't limit it down until it's needed or not for a fight. Who knows?

>>83665008
I agree with this.

>>83668758
Really? Didn't see all of it then. And the things I saw were... Not sufficient. Plus, it was kinda fun doing it.

>>83669382
Let's just say that remastered stands, for our purposes, retain all of their previous powers.

It's just easier that way to write it.

>>83669382
It should be very limited.

Sorta like how Star Platinum got weaker over time.

>>83668679
I'd imagine it appears in dreams and starts muddling with his mind.

In his case, it makes him coherent. This worries his friends.

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I'm still coding the game. It would be nice if other people other than Spriteanon could help with the sprites since I still have to use time for the coding. The next character to gain a basic spritesheet is Courage (which should probably look like Iggy from Heritage).

Is pic related how you guys imagined propane nightmare to be?

>>83669406
>During the fight with Plucky, as a last ditch, Red Guy summons fake "ghosts" of those that LeTerally was responsible for the death of, but Plucky sees through the illusion and punches them into being real with [WAYWARD SON].
>The now-real ghosts side with Plucky and grapple Red Guy, and pull a hole in reality that a whole load of ghosts and courtroom furniture comes pouring out of.
>Beetlejuice appears, and cheerfully slaps Red Guy on the back, which also slaps chains around him and knocks him into the defense's seat
>"Red Guy! Good to see you again, you fatassed old bastard! What with all the anti-ghost protections surrounding all your WB properties, I was thinking you didn't want to see us any more!"
>Jack Skellington's the judge, Beetlejuice is the bailiff, Lydia is the prosecutor, and various dead protagonists (the Dead Man's Party) make up the jury; the witnesses/audience consist of minor dead characters, characters dead in their source material, and maybe a few cameo characters we can get some jokes from in a witness montage
>I don't know what would be funnier: having the defense attorney be a recently deceased Big Guy, or someone who obviously hates Red Guy's guts like Hades
>The charges: excessive meddling in the world of mortals, overstepping of temptation and soul-buying mandates, creation of dangerous supernatural power sources, and copyright infringement
>Through a montage of witness statements - with more extended ones from major characters like Toph - a picture of the extent of the WB's crimes is built up. In the end, the jury votes "guilty", and Red Guy is sent to a personal punishment realm. As he falls into it, Hank comments "That's a clean burnin' hell, I tell ya hwat."
>As things conclude, we get some heartfelt moments between the living and the dead, before going into Plucky's final conversation with his dad.
This work? I kinda made it up on the fly just now while thinking about this shit.

>>83669622
That's pretty damn bulky for a Stand sprite, and it looks kinda plain.
I've been busy, but I'm still working on the sprites where I can. If you need sprites to work with for the code, just pull them from Heritage for the Future as placeholders.

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>>83669622
The chest size on your sprite needs to be shrunk a bit, and it looked like it skipped leg day. The large P doesn't seem necessary, and it needs a lot more detail, such as tubes or valves. It needs to look tough and [menacing], just like in this pic.

>>83669722
In that moment, Hades is busy trying to calm down Donald, who is still wrecking hell. So probably one of the Big Guys

>>83669838
Maybe instead of a "P", the logo of Strickland?

>>83670045
>In that moment, Hades is busy trying to calm down Donald, who is still wrecking hell. So probably one of the Big Guys
Still in his gay porn gear?

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Hey, I was watching the Foster Mansion cartoon and I just realized something.

In the /co/co/ universe, is there a link beetween Stands and the materialized imaginary friends? Maybe in this universe, they're kinda what happens if someone prematurely develops a melody being, like a "proto-stand", which not only has a distinct personality, but also can live on their own somehow. Maybe Stands are just the adult version of an Imaginary Friend.

Have we ever thought of this show and this situation in older threads? It could have some lore potential.

>>83671095
Foster's is a major location in our part 4, all the imaginary friends in the house are stands of children who ate stand jawbreakers who would've died if the stands had not been removed from them by Coraline and then stored by Madame Foster in her house.

>>83671095
in part 4, Foster Mansion and the imaginary friends are Stands

>>83671434
Oh wow, that seems pretty interesting, yet why doesn't it have any art on the booru though?

>>83671555
Because drawfags like drawing things that are more iconic to the parts.

>>83671555
Drawfags are hiding, mostly. There's a lot of stuff that isn't in the Booru.

>>83669622
Make the crotch sexier and you are good.

Make it super thin and mechanical

>>83670233
Of course!!

Alright, finished the Markets. I cut a lot of stuff from it, so that's why you don't get any references to price fluctuations until the end. It's sorta inadequate feeling? If anyone want to change anything, please feel free, but otherwise this is what I have.

Ok so, the group, having learned Gideon's office location, decide to visit the Markets. Rolf invites Donald to join them as they make their way there, however Donald says he has other things to do, but points out that the Financial Market is often ignored by the rest of the WB, for some reason. They leave without him while Donald goes off somewhere on his own.

They arrive at the Markets. They know two things, one, Gideon is listed as being in the Stock Market, two, there is an info broker lurking inside the Farmer's Market who could give them more info about him. Taffy suggests they split, he'll take the Stocks and they take the Farmer's Market. Rolf isn't sure about this, but relents when Taffy points out it's probably the fastest way to finding him. Toph and Squidward go with Taffy, while Cartman and Dexter head with Rolf.

Taffy finds the Stock Market and goes in. The place is huge and filled with flies. Toph continually complains about being bitten by the bugs, but can't seem to get them off, and laments she didn't bring bug spray. A guard recognizes them and attacks, sending all the generic looking guys into a frenzy. Squidward convinces a group to dance with him. Taffy is turning them and their weapons into cheese. Toph, feeling strangely energized and slightly more vicious, notices a glass chandelier (covered in flies) and brings it crashing down on the stock brokers, covering the group in blood. Taffy looks on at the carnage, and is disturbed to see the businessmen's mangled bodies crawling out from beneath it. Demongo is then seen, leaping from the rafters. He mocks the group for their efforts, saying that the dead don't stay dead here, and fights with the zombies.

cont.

>>83672322
Toph begins using Bye Bye Babylon to stab their heads and bodies, while Demongo slashes at them, teleporting around. Toph growls and stabs at him with the various glass lighting fixtures on the walls. One glass bullet grazes his cheek, and Demongo gets pissed, and unveils his stand ability [PRICE TAG], which places price tags on the group. Demongo says that he can buy them out if he has enough cash to do so, and points out that the damages they've placed upon the Stock Market will cost them quite a bit. If they break or destroy one more thing, he will gain control of them. Squidward challenges him to a dance-off. Demongo accepts, and is forced to do the Thriller with the group of zombies with Squidward. Toph, still being bitten, grows increasingly impatient, and uses the multiple glass shards on the floor to impale Demongo. He screams and melts away, taking the tags on them with him. Then Toph shatters the windows and uses the pieces to cut every zombie into pieces, laughing manically. Taffy is concerned, Squidward says he should've gone with the other group.

We get a cut to Cartman saying the same thing as Rolf barters with a man. They see Red then, and believe he's suspicious, only for Chuckie to show up and interrupt them. He says he's lost his mother and needs to find her. Cartman says she's a lost cause if she's a ginger, annoying Rolf and putting him on babysitter duty, but says he can have a stand if he does. So Chuckie and Cartman traipse around the Farmer's Market, while Rolf continues looking for Brains!

cont.

>>83672371
This next part is kinda optional since it deviates, but I just wanted some extra story. Azazel in the Captain's body is watching everything from his room within the Stock Market, drinking tea, despite wearing a creepy white mask that prevents him from actually drinking it. He puts it down on a table and picks up a bell. Examining it in his hands, he rings it, and suddenly eleven doors appear from the ground surrounding him. Five of these doors open and some people come out. They are Alexandra, the Coachman, the Sheriff, Richie Rich, and a mysterious Masked Man with a shirt bearing the number 62 on it. Azazel asks why someone is missing, and the Sheriff says that he's currently collecting taxes from the future president, which evidently, the WB care more about.

Azazel discusses the situation with them, saying they are being attacked. He claims he will reward the one who kills the UR members with a raise, but Alexandra scoffs, saying that they already know how dangerous the UR are and wouldn't take them on even if he paid them, and pointing out that's a lame motivator and how HR already did it before. Azazel tries to reassure them by saying there are only 3 members on the hunt, but the Masked Man tells him to fuck off and agrees with Alexandra. These guys are dangerous as shit. Azazel threatens to fire them if they continue showing this much resistance, but Alexandra points out that the entire department has already been killed. They're the only ones left. The Masked Man says to stop using office politics as a motivator and let them do what they want, and he and Alexandra exit through the doors they came in from.

Richie, the greedy dick he is, says he'll gladly do it, but the Coachman isn't sure. The Sheriff is also cocky about killing them, that is, until Toph breaks down the door and sends a glass spike through Richie's head. Sheriff promptly turns tail and runs out his doors, while the Coachman just shakes his head and follows.

cont.

>>83672439
Taffy comes in and interrogates him about Gideon, but Azazel doesn't say anything. Azazel gets up instead and draws out a rapier, as the flies in the office begin going wild and start buzzing around madly. Azazel moves at supernaturally fast speeds from places to place, and begins stabbing them with his sword, while the bugs are flying everywhere and biting them. Toph angrily shatters the office windows and turns them into glass bullets in an effort to cut him to pieces, but he cuts through them all with ease. Toph then locks up and begins foaming at the mouth, before falling to the floor.

Taffy asks him what he did, and Azazel explains his stand ability. Taffy turns his mask into cheese and removes it, revealing his skeletal face, shocking him and Squidward. Azazel begins moving more intensely now, unnaturally bending and twitching as he slashes at them. Squidward challenges him to a dance, but Azazel impales his shoulder and knee, before sending flies after him. Squidward tries to crawl away, but soon the flies are covering him and he starts coughing up blood. Taffy is soon picked up by Azazel by the tail, before trying to skewer him. Toph, with what little energy she has left, sends a glass shard through Azazel's hand, causing him to drop Taffy. Toph chokes out that she's realized the rapier is somehow a stand. Taffy quickly runs up the Captain's jacket and turns his arm into cheese, causing him to drop the rapier. Squidward weakly picks it up and has his stand snap it in two.

Azazel screams as the flies begin to leave the Captain's body, which erupts into flames. Toph and Squdward's injuries are healed. Azazel's real form shows up, begging for forgiveness, but then the Captain's spirit appears and says he can go to hell, summoning a rapier and stabbing Azazel in the eye with it and sending it out the window, before vanishing. Taffy takes a few breaths and notes an employee of the month portrait on the wall of Gideon.

cont (almost done)

Dang posting going down when we're n the middle of stuff.

>>83672322
Taffy turning people into cheese is a bit much. He's still fighting crossing that line.

>>83672371
Change "can have a stand" to "can have a badge".

There's stuff I want to add to this to show the stock fluctuations having an effect, but 4chan has been broken for the past hour.

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>>83672825
Oh, so thats what was happening.

>>83672439
>wearing a creepy white mask that prevents him from actually drinking it
Maybe something like the ones of the Hellfire club mooks?
>mysterious Masked Man with a shirt bearing the number 62 on it
Who is this guy? I need to know!

>>83672935
I would've made that post over an hour ago if posting didn't break and the other anon would've already finished posting the market stuff.

So here >>83672371 at the end when Cartman gets stuck with Chuckie, he should knock over a cart in anger, could be anything, even cabbages. Back in the stock market the prices of produce can start swinging widely causing people fighting the UR to abandon their fights with them which screaming "buy! sell!"

Finishing off Demongo would be better put after we've cut back to Taffy after seeing Rolf in the farmer's market.

>>83672512

Elsewhere, Rolf sees Red again, and heads after him, cornering him. They somehow believe Red is somehow connected to the WB and attacks him, but before they get any further, Chuckie appears again and explains that he's not really, just a thief, pointing out that Red was leading them into a trap. Alexandra appears again, calling him a killjoy. Red angrily tells him to shut up. Rolf confronts him and asks if this is true, and Red admits that he was kinda trying to steal from them with Alexandra, but only so he could buy out the markets and provide for Chuckie. Alexandra just says that this pays better than her real job honestly, but doesn't elaborate. Rolf asks him about Brains and says he'll forgive this attempt if they lead him there. Red takes them to him. Rolf goes in and asks him about Gideon, but Brains says that he'll only do it when paid. Rolf calmly hits a mook with his cane and points it at him threateningly, convincing Brains to help them. He gives them the info they need and they leave. Cartman is in a food coma and has been binging himself on ice cream this entire time, after having got it with Chuckie. He wonders where the kid went as Rolf picks him up and leaves the Market. The exhausted Taffy group meets up there and they leave.

Patrick is reading some things from an old stock machine, saying that these numbers are all wrong, before it explodes, as does the rest of the Stock Market. The last thing printed is an increase in peanut ice cream, which he's seen eating. Donald sees a mushroom cloud coming from over in the direction, lifts a steel girder with his stand, tosses it in the air, and beats it so severely that it snaps in half and part of it is embedded in the ground in the shadow of the WB tower. Rolf steps into the home base with the rest of the group. As they get settled the phone begins ringing and he picks it up. There's just some unsettling static on the other end. He puts it down nervously but doesn't talk about it.

Finished.

>>83673599
Threats wouldn't work against Brains!, Rolf should approach him like an old friend.

They offer up the information they got from the WB computers in exchange for where Gideon is.

>>83672825
Those were typos actually. Sorry.

>>83673173
Ok, sure. We can rearrange those things and add in the cabbage cart bit.

>>83673936
Alright, edit that to that. It works better.

>>83672935
Hellfire mask works.

And I'll never reveal the Masked Man's identity!

It's Eddy's Brother making a cameo. He was discussed for the part I think? But we have too many EENE characters already, so I left him ambiguous if we ever decide to use him in the future.

In the meantime, dwell on his identity with some music.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DS_5Wj_AUiI

>>83669481
No one said we can't have more than one announcer. You also mispronounced some names.
Take off the name faggot, it's not nessecary to wear one if you aren't contributing anything, especially if you're calling yourself one of the characters you fuck

>>83674682
It's better than his older cringier one.

As it stands he should drop the name. It's unnecessary. If we all start wanting to get credit for this project we'll end up having too many chiefs and no Indians.

>>83665200
We should have Max and the Warner siblings get a few moments of fighting in the Tower.

They consider actually going to the top floor when they get the chance, but decide against it. The UR have kicked their asses and will do a better job anyways.

>>83674028
Alright, we're pretty much through the market now.

After Rolf gets that phone call the UR all go to bed, they have had a long day. Donald gets back from wherever, Tina asks him where he's been and he tells her he was doing recon as he puts something into [Steam Machine's] furnace for a slow burn, the steam coming out of it starts healing the UR and making them rest better.

We cut to Plucky, still with the flickering glow around his head, inside we see him fighting Gideon tooth and nail. His mind is kind of a mess, but he's holding his own. We can expand this more if we want to.

We then see Rolf's dream, he's in a field tending to his flock, a strange figure is on a hill in the distance, Rolf strains his eyes to get a better look at it, he rubs his eyes and it seems to be closer now, his sheep are startled, Rolf raises his staff, but then he wakes up. It's a new day.

Day 3 of Plucky's coma, he's still stable, he hasn't gotten any worse, but he hasn't gotten any better either. Donald tells them he has more things to do today and heads out early. The UR still have some time to kill before the location Brains! gave them will contain their targets, so that gives them time to eat and prepare. Mr. Morris is surprised at how well Rolf's group is holding up after they've been through 3 small scale wars in 2 days worth of time. All Rolf can talk about is the dream he had. The others dismiss it since if it were Gideon, Rolf would've had a glow about his head.

The UR set out to where Gideon is hiding.

Now I gotta think about how that goes down.

>>83674913
I just realized that we never established what their hideout looks like.

In my mind while thinking about this, I kept going back to it being an abandoned house in some remote locations with overgrown lawns.

Is that a good setting for this?

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>>83676013
Something like this?

Dunno why it'd be in the Old Country though.

I thought originally we just had them staying in a old barn.

Dammit! this site broke again! Well, several pages later, I found Jem's Stand: https://desustorage.org/co/thread/81851952/#q81853440
>Jerrica Benton, aka "Jem"
>Stand: 「SUN KING」(name change for the userless Day Tripper in doc, since another suggestion with that name was given, though it can be changed back if the other suggestion doesn't make it)
>Appearance: Bubblegum pink and red humanoid with spikes on it's head in the shape of a crown. Should probably look as 80s as possible
>Ability: Short range Stand that converts rays of light into solid objects. These can be used as blunt or sharp weapons, or allow convenient escape routes, as it can turn light rays into "steps" for the user to step on. If a ray of light is hitting the target, and it is within reach, Jem can convert the ray and impale the target.

Destructive Power: B
Speed: C
Range: D
Durability: C
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: C

>>83677179
I guess a house like that is what I've been thinking of.

>>83674913
Dexter goes over the information they got from [Brains!] with the rest of the group now that they're rested enough to process it. Gideon is part of a group that call themselves The Four Businessmen of the Apocalypse, the other three most likely with him are Monorail Man (The Simpsons), Doug Dimmadome (Fairly Odd Parents), and Toffee (Star VS the Forces of Evil).
Together they represent Liquidation, Outsourcing, Acquisition, Competition. COAL for short. [Brains!] didn't have any specific information about their stands, but the UR feel confident since they have surprise on their side.

As the UR work their way through another abandoned housing project, an oddly shaped shadow is seen following them. By the time they get to the location, the bizarre figure is close enough for Toph to notice. She tells the others that their element of surprise might've been blown, they see Xavier (Renegade Angle) emerge from the shadows, glowing with stand power and looking menacing. The UR immediately assume he's another assassin since he doesn't fit the description of any of the COAL members.

Toph says she'll handle this and the others should take down Graves before he has a chance to escape. Toph begins marching over to him, glowing with stand power herself, while the others follow Rolf, who has altered their original plan of approach.

It was true that they're element of surprise had been blown, but not by who they thought. Rolf makes a door into the basement under the house and they enter it from below. Taffy turns the ground floor into cheese and manages to get the initiative by dragging Toffee down into the basement through the floor as the res bust up through the floor catching Monorail and Dimmadome by surprise who were waiting by the door to ambush them.

>>83678421
Toffee and Taffy square off in the basement, Taffy already has a lot of cheese ready to use, but Toffee is nonplussed, calmly brushing himself off. Taffy grabs him with a giant cheese hand, but Toffee pops out of it by pulling himself to pieces and slipping through the fingers. Taffy things this guy might be a hard fight after all.

Back up on the ground floor, Dimmadome is getting hospitable "Now where are my manners, would you boys care for some lemonade?" His stand appears and starts spitting, it's already turned the whole inside of the house rubbery, and Dimmadome's bladed, super impossibly huge hat is flying around the room. Meanwhile, the Monorail Man has started doing a jig and has been getting an extra bounce him his step from the rubber, his stand is popping spherical creatures like no one's business that start mobbing the UR. Dexter takes control of one of them and begins batting practice.

Outside, Toph has A LOT of glass to work with and is just pummeling Xavier with it who is putting up almost no resistance. Toph keeps asking who sent him, and Xavier keeps making a serious/confused/concerned face each time she asks. Whoever is good at lines for him can fill this in with something appropriate.

Back in the basement, Taffy is missing an arm and a leg, they popped off of him like an action figure's joints when Toffee stabbed him with his fake finger. Taffy is off balances, at Toffee's mercy, and decides to try something crazy. He turns his own detached limbs into cheese (at great pain) and manages to land a hit on Toffee's eyes with them before turning the places there use to be also into cheese (very painful) and reattaching them, then turning it all back to normal. They reattached just fine. Taffy does not want to do that again and knows that probably wouldn't have worked if they had been cut off and bleeding by normal means.

Back on the ground floor, Rolf has made a door in the walls to trap Dimmadome's hat
cont.

>>83678798
and is now dueling with Monorail Man, trying to keep him from moving so much, while Dexter, Cartman, and Squidward fight the horde. Dimmadome pulls out some throwing knives and uses some geometry to make the UR's lives even more perilous (think billiards only with knives and over the space of a room). Monorail Man turns his cane into a whip and snatches one of the knives out of the air, he's duel wielding now.

OK, question time. Should the Xavier fight conclude now, he say his lines to Toph, and then she rushes in to help, or should that be after all the members of COAL are down? I think it'd be best to do that now since only she is supposed to hear what Xavier has to say.

>>83678887
We can do it now i suppose. I don't see the harm in it.

>>83678994
Because I want to something like

Toph enters through the basement and takes over the Toffee fight, telling Taffy to go check on the others since it's taking them too long. Taffy mentions they guy can reattach his limbs and separate at will. This makes Toph crack a "Reaaallllly now?" with a devilish grin.

Taffy heads up and sees the bouncing chaos, he turns the rubber into cheese and alters the geometry, causing a knife to glance Dimmadome. Taffy stats catching knives in cheese and using his improvised morning star to smash a number of the creatures Monorail Man has made. With the horde thinned, Squidward clocks Monorail Man, commenting that he just kept doing the same 5 steps over and over again. Dexter has gotten Dimmadome wrapped in [3 feet high] now and is doing the old "stop hitting yourself" routine to Cartman's immense enjoyment.

In the basement, Toph has been slicing up Toffee to her hearts content, this is like therapy to her, but she's also been mixing in glass shards into Toffee's body to keep him from reforming easily. She's not letting him close the gap between them, so he takes an alternative and starts separating the foundation that's already been severely weakened. While he's doing that, Cartman uses his stand to push a piano down one of the wholes in the floor right on top of Toffe's head.

The UR march Dimmadome out of the house and demand to know where graves is. They know he's not in that house since Toffee tried to bring it down around them. It takes them destroying the contents of his wallet to finally make him talk. Graves is in the the safe room of the house, the room designed to withstand the house going down and also earthquakes and the end of the world, but he's not giving up the code. Rolf just looks at him with a "Do not insult Rolf expression" as he makes a door into that room where they take turns beating the shit out of Graves' sleeping body.

I guess we need to cut to inside Plucky's head here again.

A lot of this was already in the doc, so I'm just making adjustments for flow purposes.

>>83679251
Inside Plucky's mind, Graves's dream world self begins to show many injuries. This is just the distraction Plucky needed to land a finishing blow to [BLACKSHEEP]. The dreamscape then blanks to white, Plucky thinks he's finally going to wake up, but then Bill rises from the white void like a giant pyramid holding Graves' soul.
>"Too bad, kid, you botched your contract. I was enjoying the show too, but it was really starting to drag. Now your soul is mine, so don't mind if I do!"
and he eats Graves' soul while Plucky tries to stop him.
>"So you're the unlucky duckling, what do you care what happens to that guy? Besides, his role was over the moment he got me into your mind."
before warping the dream world to begin the torment anew.

Outside, the UR see Gideon briefly wake up, screaming, then burst into blue flames before his body is reduced to ash. The UR begin heading back to Sector V to check on Plucky.

>>83679447
>Outside, the UR see Gideon briefly wake up, screaming, then burst into blue flames before his body is reduced to ash.
>That's not good."

>>83679447
>He tried to rescue Gideon's soul
Damn, he's one brave tomato

>>83679553
I gotta make the most of what little screen time I'm given with Plucky.

In all honesty, I really like his powers, the way we've set him up, and I would like to do more with him, so I have to pack cool shit in whenever he actually gets to do something in this part.

He's become my favorite since Gadget, who I also piled cool scenes on because I knew his screen time would be limited.

>>83665032
>As touching as that would be, Goofy's motivation in the race is saving his son's soul.
We should also make a point of him decking anyone who tries to use his sons death as part of their own political agenda.

>"...so report anyone you suspect may be a Stand user. It's what you want, it's what I want, it's what Max Goof would want-"
>*WALLOP!*

>>83679447
OK, so now we're at the celebrity boss rush part.

Here's what's in the doc for the start of it:

>The Rangers head back to Sector V’s base to check on Plucky, whose condition isn’t any better or worse, but is now just different altogether (the glow of an enemy stand around his head is gone, but he still hasn’t woken up)
>While the Rangers were out fighting, someone set up a stage nearby and people are flocking to it, trashing the surroundings of Sector V's base. It’s a huge mega-concert hosted by the WB.
>The UR go to break up the concert, but the concert goers are all mind controlled. They need to beat Jem who is currently on stage.

So Jem is the opening act, followed by who?

We know Jan Mouse and Powerline (Max Goof) are also going to take the stage, but who else? How many should we have? I'd say to keep it under 5.

>>83679897
Jan is OP enough that I think just those three should work. Most shows like that have three bands anyway, right?

>>83679897
If we are keeping them under 5, then the other two are Sunny D and Rockzilla. Both have Stands, iirc.
Probably Jan and Max are the last celebrities (Jan has the hardest hitting Stand)

>>83679985
>>83679992
Well figuring those fights out can wait until tomorrow since it is past 3am here.

Should Donald join the rumble part way through a fight before Powerline, during Powerline, or after powerline? Does he need to see Powerline before he gets the realization later when Max comes back and takes off his sunglasses.

>>83680130
I dunno, there's something during the fight that makes Max's mind click, splitting him from the Powerline persona and allowing the UR to beat him.

>>83679826
I'd imagine he'll have his fill of sleazy politicians wanting to use his story for positive press by the end of the part.

>>83679251
We should have Doug rage quit at one point before turning up the heat and saying " I am Dimma-done with your shit!"

>>83678887
Xavier not saying much but still confusing Toph and fucking shit up for her is something he'd do.

>>83678798
When I get home from my trip I will personally write that or will edit and review whatever is written.

Expect cracks about Tiph's blindness past any point of humor, Feet licking, sexual flirtation, and Xavier being more like the Beavis and Butthead fight more than anything. If he wasn't getting his shit kicked in he wouldn't know he was in a battle.

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Question about Gaz for part 6: will she still be a kid, or as a teen/adult? And will she have a reasonable chest size?

>>83681733
It's an adult's prison, so I'm assuming everyone there is at least 16.
And thanks to you asking she's now flat as a board. And that's canon.

>>83674028
I feel like Eddy's Brother would be best suited to part 6, mostly so he can tag team with Vicky.

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Heya

I've been looking to design some stands for this project. Name some stands that need a design and i'll try to come up with something halfway decent

Pic related my attempt at an Oc stand

>>83682911
Neato.
Uh, you could try drawing Cartman's Amerika?

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>>83681733
>>83682542
A bump on her chest is fine but we definitely shouldn't reach to the levels of cowtits Gaz.

She needs thick hips though. That's what matters.

>>83682911
Aren't you from /a/? Just browse the docs (preferably before part 6 since 6-8 are under rework) and draw the stand(s) that you find most interesting.

You should practice by taking some cues from 7SU2: http://7su2.tumblr.com/tagged/Stand-Feature

>>83679447
>>83679628
>Plucky manages to catch Gideon's hand with his Stand as Bill drags him into his eye-mouth
>Gideon looks shocked and relieved, Plucky looks determined... and Bill bites down, slicing Gideon's arm off and swallowing the rest of him
>The arm goes up in blue flames

>>83672371
>They see Red then, and believe he's suspicious
I presume this is due to his Stand?

>>83680130
>>83680241

Powerline gets kicked off stage by Toph, remember? His stand will be useless in a fight against the UR.

He comes on, gloats, and gets his ass beat and thrown off-stage. His "fight" is a joke.

It's because of this that Patrick strikes Powerline's contract from being renewed. Thus letting Max remember who he is, and letting him keep his Powerline stand as well. After his performance, Patrick could care less about him and his will.

This comes back to bite him when Max joins the heroes, and starts awakening his own natural stand, which begins merging with I2I. He dies before we see the finished product though. Goofy should have something similar in part 7.

>>83679992
I vote for this. Jan's stand will give them the most trouble, the rest are more of an opening act for her. They shouldn't be super easily dispatched except for Max, just difficult enough to fight so they expect the same level form Jan and wind up with her stand tearing apart the battlefield.

Jem is first fought. Her stand is hard-light manifestation. A bit tough, but still easy to maneuver.

Sunny D's stand lets him turn the place into jello. His stand is good for defensive purposes, but not really useful for battling.

Rockzilla's stand manipulates electricity and makes stuff explode. It's a watered down RHCP. His fight probably ends with him making something blow up too close to him (his guitar?) which knocks him out.

Powerline does nothing.

Jan tries to end them all.

>>83682568
He's just a cameo here anyway. He can appear if we ever want to use him anywhere.

>>83683661
That's the idea. Red tries to rob them, but is interrupted by Chuckie.

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Alrighty, here's my take on Popeye's [Seven Seas of Rhye] This was definitely fun to make.

>>83684583
There's an idea I had that every time someone tries to claim Max's soul, a memory of Goofy making the deal with Hades will be projected. It'll burn the would-be soul reaper like fire or give them something like an electrical shock.

The harder and longer someone tries to claim his soul, the more of the memory will be played. If the whole memory gets played, then whoever is trying to claim his soul will take severe damage.

Max usually doesn't notice this because having someone try to take your soul is painful.

>>83680241
I thought him just getting his ego smashed is what brought him back to his senses.

>>83680472
Yeah, I didn't really know what to do with Xavier since I don't know what his stand is or if he actually fought.

>>83684583
We can't have his contract torn up by Patrick because the invasion of the film lot rides on Max's position still being intact since Mok is unaware that Max is now a traitor.

>>83683223
I like it.

>>83682911
If you wanna make an easy one, try with Loeb's [TOOL] (basically an orb with tentacles inside the user's eyes) from part 4. Most Stands have an appearance description, if they don't and you wanna draw them, feel free to come up with a design.

>>83683136
>7SU2
Holy crap, that's some darn fine artwork

>>83688055
The contract is intact, it just won't be renewed if Max dies, so he's the last Powerline.

>>83685986
Awesome work, Anon

>>83688055
Xavier IS the stand. He possesses someone, replaces their stand, and brings bad luck to them until they either die or they outsmart him in a verbal battle of wits. For the sake of hilarity Toph could do this accidentally or just by making basic sense.

>>83688517
I thought he was a legit angel in this setting who was just too mentally destroyed to be of any real help to anyone.

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>>83689067
So he's an angel that possesses someone, turns their stand into Xavier, and then acts through that?

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Here's a rethought concept for the Bionicle characters guarding a Corpse Part in part 7.

「ALL AMERICAN REJECTS」 (Toa Mata - BIONICLE)
>A group of ancient biomechanical beings brought through unknown means from an island in the Pacific, who have become guardians to one of the Corpse Parts. They speak a language none of the heroes can understand (rendered as normal text in the Bionicle script). Their Stands are bound to their masks, and they are capable of damaging Stands with their weapons in addition to their other abilities.
>Tahu - 「FACE ME」 - can create near-impenetrable walls of fire.
>Gali - 「CLOSER TO THE TRUTH」 - can condense water from the air around opponents, effectively allowing her to drown enemies outside of water.
>Lewa - 「GRAVITY HURTS」 - can manipulate air currents to push opponents, and himself, through the air; however, he can only move them upwards, having to drop anything he raises rather than lowering them down.
>Onua - 「BREAKOUT」 - can create fists and claws out of earth to attack with.
>Pohatu - 「MOVE ALONG」 - (fuck, I can't come up with a way of combining stone and superspeed powers. Any ideas?)
>Kopaka - 「CRYOSHELL」 - can create ice spears capable of homing in on a target's weak points.

The fight would probably start when the heroes approach the apparently-undefended Corpse Part, causing the 「All American Rejects」 to explode out of 6 huge stone canisters like in those 2001 Bionicle commercials.

>>83691075
>(fuck, I can't come up with a way of combining stone and superspeed powers. Any ideas?)
Can travel over any surface at incredible speed as long as it is stony in nature?

>>83691237
Kind of boring, but it works if nothing else does.

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Do you guys have any ideias for this stage? Maybe some /x/ memes or foreshadowing?

Who is the King Crimson of /co/co/'s Bizarre Adventure?

>>83691593
What was the CGI dude's name? King Ramses?
Would be funny to have his silhouette on the background

>>83691594
You mean as the big bad's Stand of part 5 or that his power just works?

>>83691716
yes, King Ramses (the man in gauze)

>>83691594
An earlier revision had Plucky Duck's Remastered (Requiem) Stand with the ability to create plot holes, which pretty much would have run on "it just works".
We tossed that out because it sucked.
>>83691593
Yo, nice work! That's an excellent stage.
If... if you want foreshadowing, you could always have a subtle Loss formed from stars.

>>83692309
>We tossed that out because it sucked.
And because it made even less sense than King Crimson.

>>83692309
I didn't think Loss was really an all consuming concept anymore, at least, not until Ethan lies and says it is.

I think the stars should remain until we start adding part 8 characters in, then things should retroactively be altered to Loss. Or alternatively, have the stages change to Loss references when Ethan fights on them.

>>83692724
Right now Loss is something like a lesser version of the Anti-life equation: it fills his victims with a sense of loss and makes them spread the concept (the symbol of Loss being the more effective form of spreading).
How Ethan makes Loss real during the finale is something I'm trying to figure out, depending of the fruit's powers (if they are the same of the Rokakaka)

>>83692724
>Or alternatively, have the stages change to Loss references when Ethan fights on them.
Perfect.
The Pillar Men stage changes to have the hands reaching for the crystal in Loss positions.

>>83693189
>Pillar Men
might I suggest we call them Picture Men?

>>83693337
The thread screams when you suggest any alternative names for them.

However Picture Men could work for our Stone Men. They still need a rename.

>>83693384
Let's see:
-Stone men/people
-Ancient cartoons/toons
-Roto(scope) people
-Barberas
-Celluloid men
-Picture men
that's all the names that have come up during discussion. There may be more that I forgot

>>83693480
Celluloid men were suggested earlier IIRC, but I don't think the thread liked it. The Hateful 80s were suggested too.

>>83693480
I'd be down for Scope Men, given how a lot of pre-modern animation devices had names ending in "-trope" or "-scope", plus the rotoscope angle.

>>83679897
>>83677821
>The Rangers head back to Sector V’s base to check on Plucky, whose condition isn’t any better or worse, but is now just different altogether (the glow of an enemy stand around his head is gone, but he still hasn’t woken up)
>They can't make sense of why he hasn't woken up, but Ford tells them another power is at work here
>Doof confirms this isn't the work of any stand and Plucky will have to fight this off on his own
>More urgently, the UR are informed that a stage was set up nearby while they were out and people are flocking to it, trashing the surroundings of Sector V's base.
>The KND have been doing recon on it and have learned it's a huge mega-concert hosted by the WB.
>The UR head out to break up the concert, but the concert goers are all mind controlled.
>They can't even get close enough to the giant speakers for Taffy to turn them into cheese
>On stage currently is Jem (Jem and the Holograms) and the crowd is going crazy
>Cartman knows who she is and wants to get another autograph for his autograph book, so he's on board with crashing the stage
>Dexter and Taffy are on crowd control, Taffy is trying to keep anyone in the audience from getting hurt, Dexter is trying to snap them out of their frenzy

>Rolf gets the rest of the UR back stage using his doors
>Squidward distracts security (generic dog people from A Goofy Movie) while Rolf and Toph make for the stage
>Cartman has split off from them to find the dressing rooms because he really wants autographs for some reason
>Rolf and Toph get on stage and start breaking stuff, Jem incorporates it into her act as if it were part of the planned show
>She's dancing on top of light to dodge them while still preforming
>They can see a stand behind her so they know this will be trouble
>The spot lights begin shooting hard light at them and Rolf has to work extra hard to keep Toph from getting hit
>Toph takes control of some glass and forms a prism with it
cont.

>>83694692
>She may not be able to see, but she knows how light works, kind of
>The prism actually does disperse the hard light beams being shot at them

>Back behind stage, Cartman has found the dressing rooms and is actually getting autographs "Sweeeeet."
>While Sunny D is signing it, he's told he'll be on soon and heads up

>Rolf assists Toph with the aiming and Gem dodges her own shots... until the scaffolding above them comes crashing down, forcing her to jump off stage and into the crowd who carries her
>Rolf and Toph don't go after her because the stage has suddenly gone dark

OK, what is Sunny D's stand and who actually is Sunny D?

>>83694692
I believe the original intent for Jem's stand was for the UR to be struck and injured with light rays without even realising what's hitting them.

>>83694811
That was back when there were only 3 people to deal with, now there's 5.

And Gem isn't beaten yet.

>>83694797
Sunny D's the guy from Class Of 3000. He's basically Andre 3000, if that helps.

Sunny Bridges (Class of 3000)
Stand: 「PET SOUNDS」
Ability: Causes objects to react like sound waves for any sound created while in contact with them. Tapping a building causes the walls to fluctuate like measured sound waves, bullets that hit the user fluctuate as well. Sunny can use this on himself, making him very agile and hard to get a hold of.

>>83694982
That reminds me, why does Araki have a huge hardon for Andre and OutKast in SBR? There's the stand AND horse named Hey Ya! and also Tomb of the Boom.

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>>83694797
I think is the black guy from class of 3000, i'm not sure

>>83694982
To be more accurate, Sunny D is Lil' D, Sunny's student in the show, who sold his soul to the WB and took on Sunny Bridges identity like Max and Powerline.

>>83694982
>>83695040
How in the hell did they get him to...

>>83695121
Ohhh, that makes more sense.

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Just a reminder that Mr. Hollywood has a stand that uses sound-based attacks and he was added a long time ago.

>>83695345
With 6's rewrites, he could be in as a guard.

>>83695345
We might not be using him in part 5 since we have far too many stand users already.

>>83695121
So was part of the deal Lil' D made with the WB to get his teacher's power? Was he that consumed by envy?

>>83692724
Geez, I already added a swastika-loss and a stars-loss on the day and night versions of the stage, respectively. Can't we imply that Ethan had been starting his cult ever since he grasped his Stand?

>>83694797
>>83694982
>The stage starts to rumble and a huge collection of instruments rise from below the stage (think that episode of Regular Show where Benson plays that drum solo)
>Sunny D (Lil' D from Class of 3000 dressed as Sunny Bridges) takes the stage playing the saxophone and the entire stage begins to fluctuate like ripples on water
>Rolf and Toph are caught off balance by this and nearly fall off the stage if not for Sunny switching to the drums
>Now the stage is acting more like a trampoline, bouncing them into the air
>Sunny is saying "Then it's settled, I'll be the one to take you down." while his backup dancers arrive on stage, but Squidward is with them
>Two of the dancers are under his power and tip the drum set over ending the effect
>Toph sends some glass bullets at him, but they fluctuate and veer off
>The backup dancers are also wobbling with fluctuations since they tried to attack Sunny
>Rolf notices that Sunny always picks up another instrument before the effect takes hold
>Toph begins targeting all of the instruments on stage until Sunny is left with the saxophone
>They're all off balance again, but Squidward was sent upwards by Toph using a pane of glass so he's able to land on him from the air, and he has suction cups, this stops the music and the fluctuation powers letting Squidward tackle him off stage where they fall out of site when the stage goes dark again

>Now the stage lights up, there are lasers and colorful lights and fog machines
>Rockzilla rises from the stage holding a guitar

What's Rockzilla's stand?

>>83695461
As long as it's subtle enough, I don't think it really matters.
Having Ethan start his cult early on isn't going to help because part 8 is, like, 30-35 years after part 1. That's longer than Ethan's probably been alive.

>>83696589
Rock's stand was last thread. Basically a komodo dragon that blows up stuff with electricity.

>>83636426

>>83691716
>>83691784
I added him as a ghost-like Stand forming through a slab. I tried to draw him like a reference to the Anubis Stand.

>>83696589
>>83696659
>A large lizard is seen behind Rockzilla, it's feeding on the electricity coursing through the stage lights and repairs the damages done to the scaffolding during the Gem fight
>It begins electrifying the surrounding area and the crowd becomes more energized
>Before Rolf can Toph can do anything, the hard light lasers are back and hitting them, so they have to take cover while Rockzilla is playing, they can't even get close to him
>In the crowd, Taffy has been protecting them from the arcing electricity with cheese and Dexter points out these people are all going to die if they don't do something fast
>Squidward is in the mosh pit trying to fight his way out, but he's stuck there
>They've managed to find the place where the technical stuff is happening
>Jerrica Benton (Jem) is the lead technician
>Taffy turns some of the power cables to cheese, but the show continues because of Rockzilla's ability
>Dexter takes control of someone behind Jem and knocks her out, then takes control of the stage, redirecting where the power is going so nothing near the audience is charged
>Rolf and Toph make their move, using glass to block the electricity and doors to get inside the pedestal thing Rockzilla is standing on before Toph sends a glass spike through up through it, launching Rockzilla into the sky where his stand explodes like a fire cracker
>The stage goes dark again and a glass ball is rising, it has Powerline (A Goofy Movie) inside

>Before he can even begins Toph breaks the glass
>When he tries to start his routine, he can't since Dexter has applied a noise canceler to the stage and then angrily tosses him off stage saying she's getting sick of this
>The crowed catches him, but they're all worn out by now and drop him into a mud puddle face first

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>>83683136
As she is a prison guard now, I suggest that Gaz should control her stand as if she is playing an RPG character in a video game, and that she has two parts to her stand; one's a "controller" resembling a portable video game device, and the other is the stand itself resembling what's in the original description, with its eyes giving a first-person view that is broadcasted to the controller. Her stand gets progressively stronger as she "levels up" by defeating or killing more "monsters" i.e. inmates, without a set limit.

In most video games, the RPG character is usually given a set amount of lives or sometimes only one which means game over if they lose, but Gaz has basically "hacked" her "video game" stand; it has infinite lives, and when it's "defeated", it simply respawns back at a checkpoint, usually beside Gaz, with no damage transmitted to her, as a nod to how infallible she is in IZ. The stand can only be truly defeated by knocking out Gaz herself, but how to get to her (and then confronting her infallibleness) is another question entirely.

Her cold and apathetic nature means she treats the world around her as if they were nothing but mechanics in a video game; she treats objects as if they were obstacles or breakables containing loot, inmates as monsters that give XP and more loot, and her own colleagues as if they were NPCs or expendable party members.

It would work because it allows her to sit back in a closed room, working as if she is playing a real-life video game and casually eating pizza, without having to deal with unnecessary shenanigans such as interacting with other people.

>>83691075
I'm not sure,just throwing in their elemental powers as stand abilities sounds a bit lazy, it's like using capeshit characters and just using their superpowers as stand powers.

>>83686221
I like this

>>83690591
Exactly. For the sake of this story, the sheer amount of concentrated evil made him very VERY confused.

It turned him from a heroic angel into well...

Xavier

>>83693671
I prefer this name for them over all others.

>>83692724
Having a subtle Loss in most stages when Ethan fights in them is a pretty neat way to go.

>>83691593
Have the gypsy caravan, and Hank's restaurant visible I'm the far distance. Little beacons of light in between weird darkness.

>>83695345
>>83695421

A Strickland associate that's overseeing the jail, and has a dark secret in his closet.

No he's not homo. He has a Stand.

>>83696598
Wasn't it close to 50?

Part 2 is 20 years after 1.
Part 3 is 21 years after 2.
Part 4 is 2
Part 5 is 8
Part 6 and 7 are 2 years after 5
Part 8 would be a year after 6 and 7.

If Ethan started his cult in earlier parts he'd be an old man by the time part 8 comes around.

>>83698679
It's their elemental powers combined with their mask powers, as far as possible. Tahu makes fire "shields", Lewa uses air but only to levitate foes, Gali uses water in a way that affects breathing (kind of an asspull, admittedly).

>>83699745
The time between parts 1 and 2 is more like 10 years.

The time between parts 4 and 5 does not exceed four years.

>>83699745
I thought 1>2 was 15 years, 2>3 was 18-20, 3>4 was 1-2 years, 4>5 was 2-4 years, 5>6 was 2-3 years, and 6>7 was... well, some have placed 7 as minutes after 6 ends, but some have the Superjail fiasco as impetus for Nobody's election.

>>83700039
I thought it was less than 3 years between 4 and five?

>>83700068
This makes sense

>>83700068
I'd say Superjail causes Nobody's election.

I don't know how long 8 would be after that. Some have suggested Chernobog's teenage daughters show up as assassins working for Ethan (since Ethan would like as many references as possible in his ranks to make him seem more aware), so possibly however long it'd take from 5 to 8 for them to grow, and that's even if we use that idea.

>>83701817
Let's say Plucky was 10 years old during the events of part 3 and 14 years old during the events of part 5 and be done with it.

Just to finally HAMMER timeline for this area since somehow someone keeps messing it up.

>>83702437
We still need to decide if Daffy is having other kids in part 6 or not too.

We would need a decision on that before we finalize the timeline.

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>>83702346
I (half-joking) tossed the idea that they were still eggs when Chernabog went kaboom.
I almost feel bad for making a reference to that doujinshi.

>>83702497
Let's just have any other "kids" be experiments the Warden ordered for shits and giggles via injecting Daffy's DNA into other birds just to see what would happen.

>>83702747
So like the Specimens or Combaticus? I guess that'd work, and be a reference to Superjail if the Warden keeps them behind doors like the Specimens.

Would he use DNA of other characters in their creation as well?

>>83702747
>>83702900
Actually, thinking about it, maybe the whole concept of Daffy having kids should be scrapped in general.

There are too many mixed ideas and opinions on the subject. I just don't think it'll work.

But if we scrap it, what do we do instead?

>>83703206
Have The Warden release the jail's most dangerous prisoners to sic on the protags who are unknowingly assisted by his subordinates; Vicky assisted by Gaz, etc.

>>83697124
>We cut back to Cartman who is still fishing for autographs
>The last performer is up, after signing Cartman's book, she asks if he'd also like to be in the show
>Cartman is ecstatic

>Back on the stage, the UR think it's finally over, but then something takes control away from Dexter and burns out the control booth
>Dexter and Taffy head to the stage, Squidward has also climbed back on stage
>All the rangers (minus Cartman) are now on stage as the lights focus on one spot
>Jan Mouse and her band takes the stage
>The crowd goes fucking insane
>The UR prepare to attack, but Jan points up (in that dramatic way) and they see Cartman affixed to a cross "Hey, you guys, check me out! I'm part of the show!"
>Jan begins to play, she's playing fast and hard, so hard it's cutting up her hand on the guitar strings
>The blood begins floating around her and then takes off with a sonic boom destroying part of the stage near the UR and gibing some people in the audience to even louder cheers
>The UR duck for cover, Rolf has made a door in the stage for them to duck under, but the blood keeps raining down around them blasting holes through the stage
>As they get closer Dexter realizes the blood is good for more then one shoot and just barely pulls Toph's head down in time to avoid a fatal from behind shoot
>Dexter has worked out the rang of Jan's stand, the UR move to get out of range, but then the blood starts floating around Cartman who finally catches on that he might be screwed
>Jan does not intend to let them get out of her range
>Toph begins sending glass knives at Jan, but they get blasted into dust
>Taffy has managed to turn the curtains into cheese and starts trying to wrap up the show, but Jan blasts it into Swiss cheese
>Dexter realizes she can only have so much blood in her body, when Toph starts smashing the cheese curtain by bringing down all the lights from above, they only find the other band members
cont.

>>83703261
And who would they be? What theme would they have? How many are there? How are they dangerous?

We need a solid idea here or something. We can't just blindly suggest random shit, that's why part 5 is so difficult to write. We need some sort of connection I feel.

>>83703378
i would prefer if we limit the group battles in part 6, that's more the theme of part 5.

>>83703206
If you are suggesting that Plucky not be Daffy's son in this after everything we've already done, I'm going to have to asking you to leave.

>>83703267
>Jan is somehow in the crowd now with all the blood that went into gibing them floating around her as well as all the blood that was shoot into the stage
>Some of it flows back into her and her wounds heal as she begins her next routine
>UR have another ohshit moment when she sends a speeding blood-in-the-shape-of-a-bomb at them
>Most of the stage is in ruins and the UR are surrounded by Jan's blood now
>Worst of all Jan disappeared again and reappeared up next to Cartman, who is now freaking out
>He summons his stand and actually manages to hit her
>Jan being a small mouse, this manages one of her arms
>Her arms then rights itself as if nothing happened
>Cartman has freed himself from the cross using his stand and lands on the cheese curtain
>Taffy uses it as cover so the UR can try running, but Jan appears out of nowhere in front of them and lines up her shot
>It pierces a big stage mirror Dexter had maneuvered using his stand wrapped around one of Jan's band mates and the shards, controlled by Toph cut Jan to pieces
>The music stops and the lights go out
>But Jan's body has disappeared
>The UR freak out, but after a minute, then several minutes, nothing happens
>The crowd isn't going away, so Cartman sets the stage on fire and the UR drive all the people away

>>83703574
No, no, I wasn't saying that at all. I was talking about his theoretical part 6 sons. Do you have any comments/suggestions about it?

Plucky will stay his son either way, I just want to know if he should have more or not.

>>83704335
I don't really know what we're doing with part 6 yet. I haven't look at the doc for it.

I keep thinking "hunger games" mixed with "amusement park" which probably goes against whatever is already there for it. I tried coming up with how I think part 6 would begin a few threads ago right before that thread died, but I don't think anyone took notice of it.

Anyway, we're out of the concert boss rush now and there's already stuff written up for what comes immediately after it in the doc.
I'd like to see if anyone else can come up with a better conclusion to the Jan fight because I really did not know how to end that other than Jan realizing what she's doing after being cut up and fleeing.

>>83704597
If memory serves, Jan dies during the fight but her Stand's healing ability (linked to her heart) revives her. During her time dead, she regain her own self and after wandering through the city finds Max during the night, then Mortos appears and fight ensues.

>>83704769
Yeah, that happens, the way I ended the fight Jan was dead on stage, but then used that ability of hers to disappear when she came back to life, taking her parts with her.

The whole "heritage for the future" speech thing still needs to be written and I'm NOT the guy who said they'd do it.

I figure while Mortos is trying to reap Max's soul, he can catch glimpses of his father making a deal with Hades and get the wrong impression about it from the fragments he sees. Jan sees more of it though and gets a better idea of what it means.

>>83704983
has anyone decided to make that speech? I suck at moving scenes, but I can give help with the Mortos fight if we need to expand it.

>>83705146
That's mostly taken care of, here's what's in the doc:

>Jan’s stand's secondary ability patches her back to life after being killed.
>During her time dead, she manages to regain part of her original self and runs away, her apparent death also makes finances send Mortos to collect her soul
>Powerline was actually Max Goof, he snaps out of the Powerline persona after being beaten and runs off

After they’ve failed and retreated
>Jan and Max meet in one of the many abandoned houses in the Old Country
>Jan breaks down, screaming that she's a monster now, unable to recognize her own reflection
>Max comforts her, telling her that they are the living proof that the contracts can be broken
>"Living, heh. Funny that dancing dog boy mentions that"
>Mortos is looking at them from a window
>"Mortos is here to steal pretty mouse girl's soul and turn it into spooky money" He pulls from his coat a crudely made note made by himself that says: "I.O.U. 1 ZOUL"
>Jan: "What the hell is that thing?"
>Max: "Such a disgusting being, such malefic aura, such eastern europeanness. There is no doubt, that's one of the demons at the service of the Warner Brothers!"
>Shot of Mortos pushing his face against the window, a reflection in it gives a brief glimpse of Mortos' Stand

>Mortos breaks into the room and ram against Jan, seemingly killing her (again)
>He proceeds to collect her soul, but Max interrupts him, dragging him out of the building
>They fight across the city. Meanwhile, Jan's blood begins to return to her body.
>at one point Mortos manages to infect Max with [All Night Long], siphoning his force and becoming stronger.
cont.

>>83705223
>Max is overpowered by Mortos until Jan joins the fight, they beat the tar out of him.
>Mortos decides he's had enough and summons his Stand's golem form, which pierces Jan's heart
>Mortos attempts to collect Max's soul to no avail.
>Jan realizes Max still owns his soul somehow (how does she realize Max’s dad traded his soul to protect Max’s soul?)
>Jan, barely alive, detonates the blood poured into Mortos' stand, gravely injuring both Stand and user.
>Max seizes the opportunity and beheads Mortos.
>Jan's last moments and heritage for the future speech goes here.

There's still some things to be adjusted and changed though.

>>83705223
uh, when I wrote that I didn't know it took place after finances was beaten (and now, blow up), so probably should be changed to Patrick detecting Jan's death and calling Mortos. If we need that scene, I can write it.

>>83705261
Maybe Jan, being a long lived celebrity, has a grasp of how the WB's soul business works and realises something is wrong with Max contract.

>>83705582
Yeah, we could have a scene with Patrick or Jew Producer who goes over the celebrities' performances and sends someone out for Jan since she's now out of her contract having died.

Max doesn't get anyone called out after him, he interferes, but Mortos isn't able to report him since he was defeated. They still get Jan's soul though, so they assume she took out Mortos on her own.

>>83705146
>>83704983

Am same anon who will make Candler dialogue.

I'm on a business trip and it's hard enough to keep up with the thread. As soon as I get the chance later this week I will sit down and crank out both.

>>83704597
It's amusement park meets prison riots that are overseen by a hunger games game master.

Judge Dredd is there too.
>>83704335
Having them be genetic fuckery by the Warden makes sense

>>83702634
About 6 years after part 7, and 7 is 2 after 5.

We just say time passes differently in hell. Sometimes it's slower sometimes faster

>>83705834
ok, i'm working on it but I bumped into something: Only Jan died during the fight, right?

>>83706943
Yeah, only Jan and some audience members.

The rest of them survived, though maimed to the point where they're out of commission for a good long while save for Powerline.

>>83706728
OK, I'll leave that for later then and move on to the next sections filling in what I can around that area.

>>83706728
Fuck means Xander.

>>83705834
I'd imagine Jan manages to figure out Mortos is just after her. That's where the Heritage for the Future speech goes.

I'd imagine it would go more towards her making Max understand he's not just still possessing his soul because his dad felt like throwing his life away.

His dad wanted to give him a second chance at life. He was giving his soul so that his son could be free.

A theme I think we should go for with Max is that he's been dealt a shit hand by fate, he's fucking Max from Goof Troop, he was supposed to be comic relief for fucking Goofy. He shouldn't be here. Jan knows this, Donald realizes this and that's why he rages when Max dies. Max dying isn't just the son of his friend dying.

It's him seeing his friend's sacrifice go to waste. This is the reason him getting Goofy back calms him down somewhat.

The way I'm seeing this is that if we were making Part 1 with Max, he'd have been Jonathan, and Uppercrust would have made a fine Dio.

Max and Goofy should feel like ALMOST protags.

Max has a neat characer arc and back story with him, Goofy, and Uppercrust. And it sets up Hades. BUT he's a side character.

Goofy's quest to sAve his son is interesting, BUT he's a minor villain/character at best.
On a side note I think having the memory thinG happen when Morto tries to get his soul would be neat.

>>83707461
Goofy is a recurring villain in part 7. Not huge, but recurring. He should have a few interactions with the heroes, friendly initially, then he turns antagonistic.

He and Jane should get to know each other at some point. Their conversation causes him to change and he turns on Nobody, intending to kill them both. His plan fails for stupid reasons. Anyway, Jane should happen upon the scene and see his and his son's souls ascending to heaven due to the corpse parts giving her visions.

He came under Nobody's influence when he woke up somewhere, I had Wackyland in Darkest Africa in mind but it really can be anywhere, dazed and confused before coming to the conclusion that Max somehow died and he was revived because of it. He meets Nobody while wandering around, Nobody had probably been out sight-seeing, and Nobody sees him as a potential accomplice and hides him from the world, promising he can save Max's soul if Goofy does as he tells him. When the race starts, Nobody contacts Goofy and plants him in as racer to search for the parts. He has a few others planted in similarly, probably. Whatever the case, nobody had given him a new identity during the years between parts 5 and 7, hence why no one could find him or contact him and explain what happened. Nobody was keeping him in the dark.

There could be a few scenes where he sees visions of Max's death, the first being after he discovers a corpse part, which gives him a vision that's set in a way that makes it look like Donald had killed Max in his Powerline persona, and afterwards Goofy becomes more serious and doesn't bother hiding his alignment with Nobody. The second could come in the part where he and Jane begin talking at some point late in the story. During their conversation, the corpse could give them a vision of Donald bargaining for Goofy and Max's souls in hell, which tells Goofy that Donald never really killed him and so he begins turning against Nobody.

Of course, these are just suggestions

>>83707461
We just need to make it so Max misinterprets what little of the memory he sees so when he talks about it with Donald, he assumes Max accidentally sold his father's soul.

Then when Mok is trying to take his soul the whole memory plays and Donald is there to see it.

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>>83707074
Ok, this one turned out longer than usual:
>After the concert is thrashed, cut to Patrick’s office:
>Patrick is eating more Goofy Goober icecream with a confident smile on his face. Next to him is Jew Producer, who is gloating about the power of his celebrities.
>JP: “I told you sir, there is no way those goyims can stand against a show of this size. The spectacle that I arranged is filled with some of our most talented templates”.
>Patrick: “Yeah, yeah. I don't doubt the skills of our celebrities, speaker man. So, why we don’t sit down and enjoy the show?
>Patrick pulls a remote controller and a flatscreen descents from the floor. He zaps through the channels until he reach a PPV channel that was broadcasting the concert, but the screens only says “Technical difficulties. Please Stand by”.
>JP: “What’s the meaning of this?”
>Patrick (visibly upset): “I don't know, you tell me”
>He browses again the channels and catches a newsflash about incidents on the concert.
>Reporter: “Massive hysteria and destruction as a concert held at the outskirts of (insert location of Sector V here) becomes a literal battlefield. Unknown assailants attacked the artists on stage and proceeded to set the entire stage on fire. Numerous…”
>Patrick loses all his cool now: “The best artists, uh?” he says as images of Powerline being knocked without putting a fight flashes on the screen.
>JP: “Oy… T-this must be the fault of the people in the backstage, security…yes, that is”
>Patrick: “Jew Producer, out of my sight”
> JP: “Y-yes sir, I…I will be back in the studios.” Jew producer leaves the office while muttering in yiddish.
>Patrick: “I swear, if he messes the filming of the movie” He goes to his computer and checks the contracts of the company’s celebrities.
> He stops when he reaches Powerline’s name and remembers what he saw on TV: “Seven…Seven Powerlines in less than a decade!”

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>>83708911
>He presses a button and the words “DO NOT RENEW” appears next to Powerline’s name. He keeps browsing and stops at Jan Mouse’s name, is marked as “Dead”.
>Patrick: “You, on the other hand, had a good run, and I can’t afford to lose 「BLACK MAGIC」”.
>Patrick now checks the collectors currently available; thanks to Finances blowing to Kingdom Come the number of agents was drastically trimmed. “Damn it, not this guy. Well, he gets the job done…”
>Patrick reaches for his phone and calls with a disgruntled expression: “Mortos, this is Patrick. Report your current position and…” he is interrupted by a loud scream.
>Mortos: “YOU SPEAK WITH MORTOS!”
>Patrick (regaining his composure): “Yes, I know. Drop whatever you are doing, you are being deployed to an important assignment”.
>Mortos: “Oh, Big Butted Boss wants Mortos to turn more people into spooky money, eh? Mortos will stop fundraising for new Finances and go after puny people's soul”.
>Patrick: “I already sent you the specifics of your new task. As usual, failure will not be tolerated” He hangs the phone and pauses for a moment. “Wait, Fundraising?”
>We cut to Mortos inside a disco: glass and other reflective surfaces are all shattered with the exception of the disco ball, and the entire room is filled with lifeless bodies.
>Mortos (toying with a bunch of black coins and bills): “Let’s go, ghost buddy, we got job to do”.
>As he leaves, all the mirrors in the disco ball turn black and explode.

>>83708286
>>83708330

I agree and enjoy both these ideas

>>83708911
>>83709015
Nice job. Then we go to >>83705223

Next we'll be working on the studio film lots, but I won't get started on that until tomorrow.

OK, so I'm thinking after the concert boss rush is over, Donald gets back later at night. The healing steam begins and Donald explains he's been doing recon of the WB tower where the WB president is. The UR plan to make this their next target until Max shows up in the morning.

>>83655598
SO when do you make comics out of this ?

>>83712297
The comic of Part 1 is currently on the works. There is already a couple of pages.

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>>83659286
Not bad, man.
Here's my design for Vicky's Stand

>>83712204
We'll also need to include some exposition with Max explaining to the UR how the WB celebrities work.

The fact that most of the talent are brainwashed into their personas should really piss off Rolf and most of the others.

We also need another dream cut away while Rolf is sleeping before all this goes down of the robed figure in his dreams getting more and more detailed.

>>83703206
Honestly, I think it can work, but should be worked out when we're actually working on part 6.

>>83712204
Maybe Max shows up still in the Powerline costume, Rolf recognises it and hits him in the face, only for Donald to realise that it's Max and WAAAUGH over to get him away from Rolf?

>>83712297
Where ? I need links !

>>83712297
>>83715369
It's not happening.

>>83715444
Hahahaha, comedy.

>>83715369
>>83715444
>>83716306
https://imgur.com/a/EtEAh

Sticky this in the OP so that people don't assume it's only in text form. Also, wasn't there like two to three new panels ever since this one was uploaded?

>>83699591
Can you specify where the gypsy caravan and Hank's restaurant appears in Part1? Just to give me some context.

>>83715139
Of course he'll still be in his Powerline costume. It's when his sunglasses come off that Donald recognizes him.

>>83717474
The caravan is a bit away, as Eustace drove towards it and it was a bit of a trip.

The restaurant should be a bit closer, as it was down the road.

Honestly this stage works best if it's on the road.

>>83691075
Okay, hang on, here's a better and more interesting version.
「ALL AMERICAN REJECTS」 (Toa Mata - BIONICLE)
>Tahu - 「(TO BE A) HERO」 - can create near-impenetrable walls of fire.
>Gali - 「CLOSER TO THE TRUTH」 - can condense water from the air around opponents, effectively allowing her to drown enemies outside of water.
>Lewa - 「GRAVITY HURTS」 - can manipulate air currents to push opponents, and himself, through the air; however, he can only move them upwards, having to drop anything he raises rather than lowering them down.
>Onua - 「BREAKOUT」 - can create armor and weapons out of earth to enhance his own strength.
>Pohatu - 「MOVE ALONG」 - can move at high speeds, leaving a temporary stone barrier behind him, a la light cycles from Tron.
>Kopaka - 「CRYOSHELL」 - can create ice spears capable of homing in on a target's weak points.
>Shared ability:「FACE ME」- The Stands of the「ALL AMERICAN REJECTS」 are bound to their masks, and can be swapped between them. The "element" used by the Stand abilities depends on the user; for example, Tahu using 「CLOSER TO THE TRUTH」 would be able to condense heat around foes, and Kopaka using 「MOVE ALONG」 would leave a wall of ice behind him. In addition to these abilities, users of these Stands can damage other Stands with their weapons.

>>83717913
You mean, Shirley's Caravan and Jean Bon's restaurant? If so, then I would have to see if it won't cause problems in Story Mode first.

>>83718323
Working game first, Story Mode later. Stages can be edited later on; let's not get ahead of ourselves.