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Few weeks ago, I made a post about a Short 3D movie that me and my friends are making.
I would like to show /co/ what we plan on doing, and I would love some critique.

It's a movie about a girl who loses her self-confidence.
No dialogue nor written stuff, just audio and visuals.
I hope you enjoy it, and hope you take your time to tell me what thought about it.

TL;DR: Storytime, tell me what you think about it.
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>>81638139
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>>81638139
I thought this was gonna be an elaborate shitpost but this actually looks legit

good on you
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>>81638342
The end.
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>>81638216
Looks good. Just wondering if some of the frames where she's gazing into distance would look more interesting if she's positioned more left (or right) instead of mid screen?
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>>81638361

haha thanks.
Did you enjoy the overall "story", even with these crude storyboards?

>>81638716
Certainly!


>>81638246
Corrected version
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>>'̀-'́
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And some of our concepts
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>>81641473
pretty cool f.a.m.
keep us updated :^)
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I remember you from last time.

Another animatorfag student here, you're not going to get this done. It's fun to plan but you need a large studio for the scope you want made, you could only make one or two of those pages of storyboards at best.
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