Last thread: >>81362276
(UPDATE NEEDED)
Past threads:http://pastebin.com/HfiHHQ4u
MAIN TOPIC: Part 4 Development.
READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)
>Canon Stand Info for the Ignorant and Forgetful
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands
>Plot summaries and character list
http://pastebin.com/vbD28iMx
>Abilities and Stands
http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QycIbBT6L7Ny5elmmnhI4OdQYk-yJ-mGJC6TrdwBii8
>Every part, in order
1 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 -https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 -http://pastebin.com/eqPVKMgJ
6 -http://pastebin.com/jUsLRrx1
7 -http://pastebin.com/gq9SjBtj
8 -http://pastebin.com/KqiBUwav
>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7
>Images
http://ccba.booru.org/
>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0BzsuKz5EhsUkQjlNaG5UQmxDcTA
>Vocaroofag's Dialogue
http://pastebin.com/ctG7NsC6
>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL0rToV4jvAVAnamBNW_KGUrKXvhTM7n0E
>M.E. LeTerally's Over Heaven: Chapters 1-3
http://pastebin.com/4mfBbVxS
For clarification on what needs an update, past threads is what needs it.
>>81431751
Yeah, they're set for a role in part 5.
And I figure the reason why Kevin is the jawbreaker distributor here is because of that episode.
They'll need to find out who Kevin's supplier is, which would be easier if he wasn't dead. The supplier probably isn't Farnsworth himself, he just made the things because of some kinda string theory box or something (there's greentext for this somewhere) and the Red Guy bought them off of him.
So anyway, I've been filling in the cast section in the part 4 doc with the stand abilities from the pastebin since no one did that yet and it's making me realize we're missing a bunch of info.
What is the red guy's stand?
If he doesnt already have one, [DEVIL IN DISGUISE] would be a good name if it's not used already.
I heard that most of the stand suggestions for the gang members in part 6 are going to be scrapped for less clutter.
That's a shame.
>>81434334
really?
i thought only the gang concept was being removed.
>>81434334
>>81434398
Gangs are staying, they will just have less of a role than the anons who came up with the Stands probably intended.
so is the part 6 end going to be a universe reset?
id personally would like the warden to come close to resetting everything but for him to be stopped before time is out.
i just dont think a universe reset is necessary in /co/co/ as it was in the original jojo
>>81434534
It won't be, Dora and co will just be spat out into the old universe but with new roles and identities. Like Dora isn't a drug smuggler anymore she is just a normal girl on a camping trip with her friends.
Then she turns on the radio and hears TOM talking about the Part 7 race.
>>81434584
sounds great to me
ties up the part 6 ending and connects it to part 7 nicely
>>81433884
So last thread Reviewfag posted googledoc links for the rest of the parts since discussion is usually all over the place anyway, this way nothing will be lost in the future.
Part 5: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg/edit?usp=sharing
Part 6: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY/edit?usp=sharing
Part 7: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ/edit?usp=sharing
Part 8: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ/edit?usp=sharing
I'm working on updating the Stand doc with last thread's suggestions too. Suggestions that didn't get feedback from Reviewfag will be at the top as usual.
>>81434496
>>81434398
Instead of completely scrapping them, how about those suggestions should instead be put aside for a sidestory to that respective part, i.e like Purple Haze Feedback.
Since most of those stands belong to the redhead gang members, it should be titled "War of The Roses" or something like that.
>>81435000
That sounds fine I guess, could be an option should we want to take this further after we're done with the 8 Parts.
I still think they should at least get a small role as a minor obstacle Dora and friends need to get through though.Eyes of Heaven anyone?
I really like this shit!
But wasn't there a comic being made too? Where can i read that? all the OP stuff seem to be texts
And should i have read some JoJo to get it properly?
>>81435727
Of course, my dear anon. I'd recommend watching the anime of part 1 & 2, then read the manga from part 3 onwards.
There were draft panels for the first part in previous threads but they haven't been uploaded to the booru.
Old Thread Update. Neglected for 2 threads. But it's pretty simple to update.
http://pastebin.com/5SJvb9gq
So um, a quick question because I'm trying to work in the Tadashi Death Scene from last thread into the Part 4 doc, should Hiro know that its Jawbreakers and be actively looking for the source by the time the [Men at Work] attempt to scam him, or should he be completely oblivious until the [Men at Work] find it out from Gumball later at tell him about it?
>>81437878
From the short greentext an anon posted in the last thread, I'd say he'd be aware someone killed his brother, but not really sure how. After the fight with the CoCo he tells the story and the Eds realize it must have been a jawbreaker.
>>81438350
Hmm alright, I'll edit the doc under that assumption then.
Since discussion seems to have slowed down for some reason, here are some suggestions for the trapped Stands that Stan has to deal with when he tries to scam Madam Foster.
>「I’M BLUE」: Generates a noxious blue gas from its head that causes headaches and skin irritation.
>「BASKETBALL」: Can double or half the length of anything it touches, which can be used to cause crippling deformities or to extend its own reach.
>「FEAR OF THE DARK」: Gains immunity to any form of attack as long as the Stand fears the source of the attack, can be circumvented by making the Stand feel at ease.
>「COCONUT WOMAN」: Traps objects it passes through in invisible ‘egg-like’ balloons that restrict movement and can only be broken by piercing them with a sharp object.
>「BETTER THAN YOU」: Boasting about an ability one possesses in this Stand’s presence will cause it to gain the same ability of a level that surpasses the initial boast.
>「YELLOW SUBMARINE」: Body is comprised of a sticky substance makes any surface it touches function like quicksand, sucking things into it.
The idea, if it wasn't immediately obvious is that they are based on some of the original residents of Foster's Home.「BETTER THAN YOU」and 「FEAR OF THE DARK」are suggestions from previous threads that were tagged to Imaginary Friends so they are also included here.
Thoughts?
>>81438992
I like it.
Hey, what if the Disney princesses in Part 4 aren't killed or otherwise defeated by the Conman Coalition, and instead they get rubbed out by Jay and Bob?
They were going to crusade against the serial killer society and kill Cruella, and if we let them fight against the three princesses individually they have more of an impact.
>>81439587
J&SB could take out one or two of the princesses, and then take out Jumba or Glomgold so they don't hog up all the princess fights.
Let's remember that not all Stand battle end on someone dead, the mayoritiy does but not all of them
>>81440388
Also, many don't start out as direct confrontations. Often times a character has to figure out what the hell is going on before they can fight back.
I'd suggest that some of the Stand users that aren't killed act as temporary allies, or at least help steer the protagonists towards their goal.
>>81438350
>>81438377
Wait, but the Eds don't know about the jawbreakers until after they confront Kevin for the first time.
Then they piece it together that it's the jawbreakers giving people powers, but don't know this for sure until after Gadget develops his stand after they sell him one.
>>81440776
Yeah I got it, the Eds only call Hiro & Gogo about what they found after Gadget confronts them about the Jawbreakers in the current script.
>>81438992
Speaking of Madam Foster, what if the first time we focus on Stan, he's looking around town and notices some kids with imaginary friends and wonders where they got them, then he tries to buy out Foster's so he can sell imaginary friends.
If Stand tries turning something imaginary into money, does it create fake monopoly money?
>>81440849
Why would Madam Foster be giving out imaginary friends if shes pretty much under lock and key in her own home by the LHC?
>>81438992
I don't think we have to worry about naming or giving too much construction to the Stands trapped in [Hotel California] since they aren't the focus, they are more like stage hazards, to complicate matters for the gang while fighting against the LHC member(s) in the house.
>>81440905
Maybe they are imaginary friends whiout usefull power
We are implying that imaginary friends are Stands rigth?
>>81440905
I don't think its Madam Foster giving out imaginary friends per say, but the kids talking about a house filled with weird beings just like the ones they have with them, which is what gives Stan the idea to go and try to buy out the house to sell Imaginary Friends.
>>81440939
Yeah but even if on the actual comic they aren't named they do still have a name. Things that the reador only gets to know on the side novels and the like
>>81440957
I think [Hotel California] would be way too powerful if it could give out Stands. We already had to nerf Coraline's because of that already.
>>81440849
I kind of want to use Billy & Mandy for this since their currently assigned Stands are both their 'imaginary friends'.
>>81440995
[Hotel California] "stores" stands rigth?
>>81440939
We still need some idea of what they can actually do if they are to serve as interesting obstacles to overcome, also [Hotel California] isn't involved in the LHC plot in the current script. It shows up a lot earlier now and is the subject of a Stan-focused Chapter.
>>81441048
Well yeah, but the idea is that they are trapped inside house so it can't just 'give' them to people. After all, "You can never leave".
For part 6, is Ms. Fizzle going to get beaten to death at some point in the part? I can picture a riot happening and her bus gets caught in the crossfire and shit goes down from there.
>>81440905
That idea really needs some development since it hasn't come up much in the story outline.
I figure when Stan is running around the house being chased off and Gadget is having tea with Madam Foster, there could be some background things to establish something sinister might be happening somewhere in the house, but it won't be expanded on until the serial killer part of the story when they re-visit the house and Stan knows the layout from his first visit.
They find out Foster is just a pawn in all this, maybe Frankie is being held hostage by the LHC to keep her compliant. Once they get Frankie out of harm's way, the madam flips the tables on any LHC members inside her house, trapping them forever.
>>81440969
That works just as well for getting Stan to the house for the first visit.
Which characters are confirmed to appear on part 8?
>>81442152
None, anything can change from here to there
>>81442094
Isn't Frankie the leader of the redhead gang in part 6? Unless of course Frankie ends up in superjail inbetween those parts and makes her way to the top using her friendliness, charisma, and of course her stand [Girlfriend].
>>81442787
I honestly am not aware of who is or is not in part 6 outside of the main players since I haven't put much thought into anything past part 5.
I tend to stay focused on whichever part we're currently working on.
I thought including Frankie as way for the LHC to control Madam Foster would make for a good way to have Madam Foster go full calm rage once she's rescued and dismantle much of the LHC who are inside of her house.
I suppose Mac could work just as well in Frankie's place for this idea if having her in both parts 4 and 6 would cause a problem.
>>81442152
so far, the main villain: that guy from the Loss comic
>>81442152
CWC is going to be in.
>>81438350
there is something about that scene that i dont get, It says Tadashi was unable to control de jawbreaker power and thats what wreck the place. So, did the jawbreaker went nuclear for some reason?
Reading the doc and:
>I see you like to live dangerously Jorge
I do what I can. If i get an idea stuck in my head I absolutely have to put it out there.
Speaking of which, I was brainstorming names for Cliff and Jane's car.
「COMPLETE CONTROL」
「COLOURLESS COLOUR」
「COME TOMORROW, COME TODAY」
When Jane meets Cliff, she could overhear someone yelling the name of the car at Cliff and think it's his name. Even after being corrected, she still calls him "CoCo" affectionately.
Oh. and are the Spies still in this?
>>81443724
Maybe the Stand is one of those that activates once the user dies or something. The Stand kills tadashi and then, i dont know, make it a ghost or something that follows Hiro or something
>>81443724
I thought he'd go the Holy Kujo route where he couldn't properly manifest his stand and it kills him.
So he was only able to partially activate it and it just broke him from the stress causing it to go wild right before his body gave out.
>>81443834
>>81443995
i was thinking something similar: Tadashi eats the jawbreaker and gets a Stand, but lacking the power to harness it, it goes berserk and ends up killing it's own user.
>>81443724
Basically what >>81443995 said. I wrote that part to imply not everyone who ingests a jawbreaker will get a Stand. Tadashi lacks any real fighting spirit so I don't see him really getting a Stand.
>>81444117
The reason why the same doesn't happen to Hiro and GoGo is because they have determination to find out who killed Tadashi.
A lot of the kids in town have stands, but do you think the ones who couldn't control them got help from Madam Foster who took possession of their stands before they could kill their child users? This is what put her on the LHC's "people to blackmail" list.
>>81444219
I think Coraline would be the one to help them just based off her stand, but she doesn't know what to do with the stands after catching them. She takes them to this nice lady down the block who loves all the local kids for advice, and that's when they realize their stands work well together and they go from there. Might require some tweaking of Coraline's powers, though.
>>81444540
Right now Coraline can only keep a stand if the person she trap in her dream world dies/has their soul eaten.
It would need some tweaking for it to not be malevolent.
>>81434875
Just a head-ups. In Part 7's "other racers" section it is missing Obelix.
>>81444982
Yeah, that's true. So much is going on in the doc off the threads I need to catch up before I can contribute too much.
>>81446346
It's more like we're finally dumping all the stuff discussed in the threads into the doc.
What if Stan gets into a fight with Billy and Mandy thinking they're some kind of demon spawn before finding out about Foster's Home?
Bampu
Alright, so building off my suggestion for Felix in the last thread, I was thinking he could become a minor ally in Part 5, since Part 4 is pretty crowded and already has Hiro. Maybe he's married to a police officer (Calhoun) who recently visited a crime scene that was caused by the villains. Since Stand users tend to attract each other, he could become curious and accidentally gets involved in a fight where he discovers 「BUILD ME UP BUTTERCUP」. He wouldn't necessarily have to be a major ally, just show up every now and again.
>>81433884
>>81408928
>/co/co/s and are supposed to be prioritized
>Side characters are the only ones with movesets complete
Not that I'm complaining though
>>81448365
>/co/co/s supposed to have priority
>Stan and Scrooge aren't in
Plus the part 6 representation was nuts, last I saw.
>>81448647
That was just one guy, I think.
Everyone else just wanted the main party and Warden
Whoa whoa whoa, Wait a second, why the hell are Taffy and Handsome Squidward are under question in Rolf's gang? Weren't they generally accepted?
>>81449051
I don't even know what's going on with part 5's cast list yet, so where are you seeing this at?
>>81449051
Oh, wait. Never mind. I just remember that earlier in part 5 pastebin they were under question. Dunno why.
How do you feel about me writing the meeting of Tom and Taffy? Perhaps make it an introduction to Taffy and his stand.
>>81449051
I have literally seen no elaboration on Taffy other then his stand, so I'm not even sure why he's in Part 5 at all.
Same with Squidward.
>>81449051
>>81449167
Personally , I think Squidward and Taffy should be associates of Donald rather then full party members, and have Shaggy and Scooby fill that space in the party.
>>81449167
Well since they were sitting in googledoc for quite a few threads... I guess they are being accepted? Plus it is part 4 now. Part 5 just is not there yet.
>>81449280
We'll worry about 5 and the inevitable shitshow that will result from it later. Let's keep focus on 4 right now.
>>81449424
Okay. Then, I shall make a scenario for Tom and Taffy's encounter.
And one more question, how do you greentext?
>>81449496
put an > before the text
>like this
>>81449628
Thank you, good Anon.
>>81449628
just
LIKE
>THIS
Do you guys think there should be a female?
>>81450502
What?
>>81450502
I don't know what you mean by this but read the fucking OP before you post
>>81450502
We have more females than fucking Araki himself
Is there an explication of Stands replacing harmony in this. I hate how they did it in JoJo.
Threadly reminder to read Jojo's Bizarre Adventure if you haven't read it already.
It'll help you understand the concept of stands and their powers a bit more, and give you a better grasp on the plot line of the story.
>>81451139
The concept of stands is the concept of devil fruits is the concept of nen is the concept of power plot necessity.
I the project actually benefits from having anons who haven't seen Jojo in on this since it pushes it further away from just copying it.I'd watch Jojo if I could find a decent place to watch it the doesn't spazz about adblocking. I just don't have the hard drive space for downloading series anymore.
>>81451267
>Daffy's stand name isn't [LA CUCARACHA]
>Stan's stand name isn't [LOADSAMONEY]
>Johnny's stand name isn't [MONKEY BUSINESS]
>Ed's stand name isn't [SPOON]
>Father's stand name isn't [CAN'T STOP, WON'T STOP]
WRYYYYY
WRYYYYYY
>>81451239
>Tfw you hear Roundabout in your head every time you see this.
>>81451416
I think those name changes were made after this .gif was made.
>>81451504
I still watch the video just to feel the chill of the guitar plays as he walks up and poses.
If Double D has a shirtless scene anywhere in part 4, he should be riddled with bullet hole scars.
>>81451416
>>81451601
I'm pretty sure that gif was made independent of these threads.
I see a lot of art of part 3 and forward, but not a lot with part 1 and 2. Can anyone dump some.
>>81451800
Part 1 has 9 pages of a comic adaptation so far.
Part 2 is the one lacking in art among the parts that have the most development.
I assume the booru has been updated.
>>81451800
It's probably because parts 1 and 2 don't have too many stands. I'll try to whip something up later tonight.
This reminds me, there are some small character things I want to see.
>part 1, Beetlejuice is riding in the back of Hank's truck with Jack. He keeps trying to make Jack laugh because he's so serious all the time, but Jack just acts annoyed. At the end Beetlejuice finally gets him to crack a smile
>the Johnny Bravo pilot had Johnny wrestle an alligator into submission. Would love to see that referenced in the animal Pillarmen fight
>Bluto raving about how only one other person has been able to beat him after losing to the Eds in 3, or at least some mention of Popeye
>in 4, would love to see a background stand that looks like Captain Cutler from Scooby Doo, especially if we do the door gag in Madame Foster's. I just think he'd look cool Arakified
>>81452031
Booru's been out of date for a while. One guy was going to fix it but apparently he never got around to it.
>>81451373
Generalization like that forfeits any and every idea conceived right off the bat. To describe something you're ignorant of so simply is silly, anon. I mean it so genuinely when I say Araki's work is a pretty good representation of the word unique.
http://moetube.net/anime/106314/jojo39s-bizarre-adventure-2012
This site is pretty amazing and manageable. You could evenwatch it with friendsif those are things you have in your life. Watch this and read Parts 3 and onward.
>>81442181
>>81443553
>>81443632
I was thinking adding Rex Salazar to part 8.
It might be a little bit too late to change things or I may be missing something here, but I think it would be nice if Daffy could cameo sometime early on in part 2 wearing this
Stand name: [Move things over]
Stand user: Stick, from Daredevil
Appearance: A pair of dark sunglasses that Stick can wear. [Move things over] is visible to ordinary people.
Ability: When Stick activates the stand by tapping the glasses twice, everyone in the proximity of 50 meters will get their visual perception switched with each other, and they will see through each other’s eyes. This includes Stick himself as well.
If a stand user has the ability to use his stand’s eyesight for himself, then this eyesight will also be switched.
[Move things over] doesn’t have any other abilities.
Destructive Power: N/A
Speed: A
Range: N/A
Durability: D
Precision: N/A
Developmental Potential: E
Since [Move things over] does not have any type of attacks, Stick needs to use his own physical strength and wits to battle his enemies.
During the switch, the person who switches eyes with Stick will be blind. Stick can use this to his advantage.
I could see him as a early minor villain in part 5 or maybe part 7
Any news if any new characters got added to Part 7?
In fact, Part 7 seems to be missing minor villians...
>>81454501
Maybe on the cover of a book either Milo or Nigel has.
>>81455032
I think we got Crazy Quilt, Obelix, Mad Hatter & March Hare, Aunt May and Mirror Master added in the last threads.
As for minor villains, I remember the DIC anon recommended a whole lot of them. I think they just haven't been added in the Part 7 doc yet.What happened to him by the way? I haven't seen him in the threads anymore.
>>81455859
"DIC anon"? I feel a bit out of the loop. Who are they?
Stand Name: [BANANA MAN]
Appearance: 5 floating heads with clown facepaint and big googly eyes, with the colors being gray, blue, red, yellow and green. [BANANA MAN REQUIEM] takes the form of a man wearing a button shirt with a red tie with the same big googly eyes and clown face paint similar to the floating heads, except this time it's white.
Abilties: [BANANA MAN] asks another person if they want a banana. If they accept, they will be given a banana. When eaten, the person who ate the banana will fall under control of one of the stand's floating heads. Along with taking control of the user, it can also gain control of their stand too, the stand can break free from the curse however.
[BANANA MAN REQUIEM] brings in all bananas from a surrounding area of 500 feet and sets them on fire. Banana Man (the user) then begins to dance around the fire. This activates the [SPIRIT GAME]. When Banana Man shouts out a defeated stand users name, a weakened version of them and a weakened version of their stand jumps out of the fire. Keep in mind these are weakened versions of both the user and the stands. They will then fight any stand user Banana Man tells them to fight. Banana Man can only summon 3 users at once. If he summons a 4th one, the 1st one jumps back into the flame and disappears. The [SPIRIT GAME] is deactivated if the fire is extinguished or it goes out.
Destructive Power: C→B
Speed: D→C
Range: D→B
Durability: B→A
Precision: D
Developmental Potential: D→B
I figure he starts out as a minor villain in part 7, not seeming like much of a threat and being easily dispatched by the protagonists. Upon gaining [BANANA MAN REQUIEM] though, he ends up as a major villain later in the story. One that requires the protagonists to do their best to defeat.
>>81456129
He was the guy who suggested Captain N to Part 3 and some other characters like Game Boy and Link.
>>81456129
DiCsucker was a namefag that dumped a whole bunch of character suggestions from DiC cartoons, hence the name. He also wrote the Carmen Sandiego fight for Part 3.
>>81456197
Yeah, I liked his gameboy suggestion.
>>81444540
>>81444982
I was thinking the exact same thing, so would there be any objection if I changed the criteria for how 「Grass Is Greener」absorbs Stands? Like it can only take the Stand if the user gives them up willingly and is also in a weakened physical state? If we are going for Coraline as a Stand-user who is helping people who can't control their Stands I think this would work without it being too powerful.
>>81445634
Right, wasn't sure if Asterix & Obelix were accepted as being racers or corpse part guardians. I'll get em in there and maybe take some time to elaborate on Asterix's Stand a bit.
>>81456137
[BANANA MAN REQUIEM] would also not be able to resummon stands he has already summoned in the fight.
>>81456725
Yeah, I'm more in favor of Coraline and Madam Foster not being members of the LHC. They team up to keep the city's population of children form dying since it's mostly kids getting stands from the jawbreakers.
The LHC can take notice of this and take some kids or loved ones hostage to force them into aiding the club if we use that idea.
While Gadget is having tea with Madam Foster, she could be subtly dropping hints to Gadget as to what's really going on and how she's being coerced, but Gadget doesn't pick up on them until much later. Coraline not working for the LHC, but still trying to get Stan out of the house works this way too since she doesn't want Stan or anyone snooping around and seeing the kind of stuff that's been happening in the house, if she fails to run them off they'd be sent a kid's head in a box or something.
It'd also be a reason why Stan gets away while keeping his stand.
In fact, a lot of the rich people dying could be attributed to them eating the jawbreakers. It gives the rich people who ate them and lived a superiority complex.
>>81438992
>「BAT OUT OF HELL」: Stand manifests itself as a metal bat with flames. Anybody that suffers a full swing from the bat gets heavily injured, close enough to the brink of death; if the user misses, they are brought to the brink of death.
>>81457103
So the fight with Madam Foster would be similar as of Super Fly's in Part 4?
As in, while she is antagonistic to Stan she is not really malicious and instead was just being manipulated by the actual bad guys?
>>81457260
Pretty much, but she's busy talking to Gadget while Stan is in the house, so Coraline is the one trying to chase him off.
They don't want Gadget to go snooping in the house since he'd get killed, but they do want him to pick up some of the hints they're laying down so he can find the LHC members. If Gadget and Stan meet in the house, it'd cause problems.
I figure this can come into play when Penny is going through her uncle's notes, he really did pick up on the hints, he just didn't understand them until after he got his stand.
>>81457374
I kind of want a scene where a killer gets locked in the house and Foster's stands go berserk on them after one of the heroes weakens them.
>>81455032
>>81455859
Also Melusine, from the French comic.
Dr Eggman
Stand name: ｢WEIRD SCIENCE｣
Appearance: A large, mechanical egg with robot feet.
Ability: When the stand is activated, it turns any inanimate object the doctor touches into a mechanical weapon, regardless of it's size or shape. It can also weaponize any vehicle as well.
I think he would be best fit as a reoccurring minor antagonist in part 7, trying to sabotage the other racers but ultimately failing spectacularly every time.
>>81457528
Well I'd like to set up a scene where after whatever hostage the LHC are using to keep Foster and Coraline in line with is saved, a group of LHC members are in her house.
All the doors shut, the windows close, the lights go out, and all the LHC members trapped in her house can see is a rabbit dressed as a judge with a jury of angry stands and angry stand audience members.
Fade to black and the screaming begins.
>>81458072
>the heroes enter the same room with Madame Foster later
>no evidence of what happened except skeletons in the corner
>"Oh, there they go! They've wanted revenge for a while, you know!"
>she continues on cheerfully, everyone else is horrified
>"Oh relax dearies, one and done! Now, who wants cookies?"
So did we agree on whether or not Obi-Wan should be allowed in this?
>>81458373
Too be fair, those are some damn good cookies.
Which LHC members would get the Herriman stand justice treatment?
>>81457975
Which Eggman though? There's like 5 of them
>>81457975
The power is used by Ramshackle Man, and the name used by CWC. I like the idea for Eggman, though.
>>81457975
I like the idea of Eggman for part 7 but the Stand sound kinda boring, like, it sounds like something he would do whitout it.
>>81457975
Stand has essentially been done already. Sorry, buddy, that's a no go.
>>81458600
>>81458627
>>81458794
I see. Eggman can still be an asshole during the race without a stand, right?
>>81458836
Now thats an idea, an asshole whitout a Stand that stills is a problem that the characters need to face.
Or we could give him a stand
>>81458998
Wasn't that Joker's thing?Or is Joker even still in part 7?
>>81459032
i dont even
>>81459098
What? Anon that response makes no sense.
Here's a thought.
If Fred tries to turn something that Double D has labeled into a razor, would he fail to do so?
If their final battle against Fred happens on Danny the Street, and if Double D labeled absolutely fucking everything on that street as a trap for when they get Fred there, would Danny be unable to manipulate the street while it's labeled? If Fred removes a label, would Danny be able to use whatever he removed the label from to fight Fred with?
I'm just unclear as to how Danny works, and I keep thinking it was Danny Phantom instead of whatever Danny it's supposed to be because he's Danny and a ghost.
>>81459161
He's Danny the Street from Doom Patrol, and his ability basically amounts to controlling the layout of the street he is inhabiting. Though I am not particularly familiar with Doom Patrol so it might be more complex than that.
>>81434875
It might be smart to mention the detail someone added about Jane and Tempo in the Part 7 doc:
The two could butt heads, but their Stands get along with each other just fine.
Can Tina be a character?
>>81459727
Let me answer that question with a question:
Do you think you can make her a 「Stand」?
>>81459727
>>81459797
「ANACONDA」
Any part of a living organism the Stand hits is transformed into a shapely, smooth butt that anything can slip on.
>>81460038
11/10
How about a Stand that takes the form of a glove? Whenever it's user cracks their knuckles, energy is released.
>User gets smashed into the ground
>Massive explosion happens due the energy being released while their bones were cracking.
Did we ever sort out Miss Frizzle and Reptilia? The Retarded Alligator Beats are a must.
>>81461799
sounds like it could be an interesting fight to me.
bumping.
one of the best features of DiU was the character development and interaction
what ideas do we have for the coalition and detective interactions so far that arent in the doc?
>>81463610
I don't think Jay and Bob taking care of Penny is in there.
>>81459797
>>81460038
Taa daa
>>81451373
fuck you
>>81454501
>>81455498
Being yourself
Written by: Leterally Me.
>>81463739
>>81463610
Jay and Silent Bob genuinely befriending gadget is a must, as they'll be the ones going with Penny until Shaggy and Scooby arrive to lend needed support.
The Part 8 stand user that literally NO ONE asked for:
Claire Augustus (Questionable Content)
>「TENACIOUS D」
>Appearance: A blue-and-pink patterned buff humanoid wearing a suit for its top and a skirt for its bottom. It has a massive D-shaped head, making it look kind of like some sort of walking taco person. The stand is also covered in make up, with black beady eyes, making it look like a doll with a shitton of lipstick and eyeliner.
>Abilities: If Claire grabs an object in her hand and squeezes it, it will 「become one」 with her body and she'll gain its properties. Example: if she clutches a sword, punches she throws will cut and her skin can rust. If she grabs a rock, her skin becomes rough and unbreakable.
>「THE POWER OF LOVE」: 「TENACIOUS D」 gets stronger from acts of love. Whether that be through flirting, kissing, hugging, sex; if it's an action based out of affection for another, it will become an incredibly strong punchghost. This goes away if Claire is defeated/recalls her stand.
>「DUDE LOOKS LIKE A LADY」: Claire's stand holds an ability that some see as useless, but others see as valuable. Once Tenacious D has been active for long enough, it can shoot a gender-sign shaped "sticker" of sorts from its mouth and onto others. This changes the gender of the affected person, and also makes their Stand slightly weaker.
>Intended Role: Part 8 villain that could possibly turn into a semi-ally. Because we gotta hit as many /co/ web comic memes as possible. And this lady is a LITERAL meme character.
>Stand Stats:
>Power: Varies
>Speed: C
>Durability: A
>Precision: C
>Range: D
>Learning Potential: A
>>81463610
i dont think daffy's effect on toontown is explored enough.
>At the beginning of the story, Gadget explains some of Daffy's effects on the world
>Shot of Bugs Bunny being interviewed by a reporter
>"To be frank with ya, I don't know what made him snap. He seemed to be just your average everyday loser, doc. Then one day he just went on about cockroaches and LITERALLY ME, so to speak. Then he just disappears and this happens. It makes me feel bad because I feel sort of responsible for it, ya know doc?!"
>Bugs looks sad and depressed at this moment.
>"Carry on, doc."
>News cuts to average stuff like weather.
>>81451373
>watch
fucking pleb read the manga goddamn it
>>81464172
>Bugs Bunny never learns about Stands and Daffy snapping.
>He never realizes that he was under [La Cucaracha]'s power and remembers nothing of his time as a Daffy clone.
>To him his longtime partner and sorta-friend just died one day.
I didn't ask to feel this.
>>81464172
You know, this gives me an idea for how Bugs developed his stand.
Daffy may have tried to Cucaracha him, and his stand naturally unlocked in response. He used it to change the identity Daffy had overtook with another, and managed to fight him off until he withdrew it's effect from him. His new stand power then lead him to wander, until he eventually joined up with the Warner Bros.
>>81464302
I prefer this over
>>81464309
>>81464401
Well, then who should we give Thrift Shop too if Bugs is no longer the user?
>>81464172
I think Daffy should be the catalyst for people developing stands on their own without jawbreakers, like what happened with Fred.
Farnsworth making the jawbreakers could've been accidental, or intentional because he saw what was happening to certain people when confronted with people they knew turning into a duck, so he wanted to see if he could make something that would cause a person to undergo the same awakening.
Then he forget what the machine that makes them was for and sold the jawbreakers before remembering and doing it again.
>>81464172
some more things.
>While Gadget is walking down the sidewalk, there's various missing posters, like Captain Arrow from Treasure Planet, Carl Fredrickson, etc.
>TV screen shows Donald Duck ranting about Daffy and having to fight an array of clones.
>Rioting at a court about "LITERALLY ME"
>>81464448
Give it to someone in Part 7, and make it The Fog for the Brotherhood of Dada. Just give some tweaks to it's appearance.
>Stan and Scrooge are at a restaurant near the edge of town.
>Having a friendly conversation while eating spaghetti.
>"So Scrooge, how did you get your stand eitherway?"
"Ah, mate. I've had it for a very long time."
>"It was way back then, back when I traveled thw world"
>"I cant remember how but I angered a few gang members. Oh boy laddie, they were so mad they got their entire gang to just chase after me!"
>Flashback of Scrooge being chased by a mob
>"They cornered me in an allyway! There was no hope! This was it!"
>"Just when hope seemed lost, my stand emerged!"
>"It just started smashing them all. At least 29 gangsters were injured."
>"Since they couldn't see the stand, they just all ran away. Scrooge lives to see another day!"
>"Cool story, but you just punched a hole in the wall re-enacting it."
>"Whoops, sorry laddie."
>"It's fine, we can both easily pay for it."
>>81466130
Scrooge's stand is just his number 1 dime but the mental picture of a dime flipping through the air and knocking out gang members is too good to pass up.
Do we want to put more detail into Courage and Eustace's first fight in part 1? And speaking of fights in old docs, is there anything that needs expansion or touching up?
>>81466322
has porky's fight been done yet? or has that been scrapped in favor of daffy killing him
ok, give and take time, because I did some writing and have some questions
Eds vs Hector summary. Fuller version on the doc:
>boys go after Hector, Boskov and Stomach
>Stomach eats the force behind any attacks they throw at him
>Boskov and Hector's Stands keep them on the run with gunfire and projectiles/launching them away
>Edd won't shut up about how impossible the Stomach is. He shouldn't be intelligent, and he shouldn't be able to make energy just disappear due to conservation and thermodynamics and all
>Eddy gets an idea
>Edd makes him a suit of armor out of the debris, goading Hector and Boskov into attacking him instead ("GIVE me your best shot!")
>Ed, Edd, and their Stands bombard him from the sides, though Stomach keeps cutting them off
>Eddy points out that the energy doesn't just vanish, but the Stomach literally absorbs it. It's starting to look fat and complains about being too full
>gives Edd the opening to use a spare shotgun that Boskov made to blow a hole through its gut
>Boskov goes into a blood rage instead of dying, smacking the group around
>backhands Edd, bites into Ed's arm, turns Eddy's armor into a bunch of bombs to go off in his face
>piles the boys up into one corner and readies a huge grenade
>Eddy's TAKEN enough hits to make Boskov remove Hector/his brain and hold it
>Hector scolds him and makes him pull the pin
>Ed distracts them both for a second, letting the timer on the grenade tick down
>Hector panics and orders Boskov to throw
>Ed turns his attention to Hector
>he throws him
>the grenade goes off in Boskov's hand, finishing him off
>Hector goes into a fury about losing his Stands and powers
>Eddy speaks in disgust about how he refers to his "comrades" and smashes the brain jar
>Edd discreetly thanks Eddy for the hidden compliment before they pass out
>>81466475
Looks like the first part needs doing. I'll get on that.
ok, next up some questions that I feel like aren't clarified, or I missed somewhere
Ramshackle Man: a medival armored or militaristic-looking bear
Lick It Up: a demonic, gremlin-like stand with a massive tongue (not mind-blowingly long, given its short range; about the width of a pizza box and say 5 feet long)
Nasty Piece of Work: a blank-faced humanoid punch ghost, missing the top of its head and its stomach. these parts show several gears, which rotate whenever it is in action (changing energies or simply attacking)
Is gadget incompetent? is he full blown idiot with cyborg parts like the cartoon, or more of a capable, almost noir-ish guy who's just out of the loop with Stands and this weird town?
Roughly how old are the eds supposed to be? assuming it's a short time from part 3. We talking aged up to their twenties, or they still just teens who know how to bite off more than they can chew?
Can people see Stands' affects, like Stan's money? might be more of me not knowing Jojo enough than anything else, but if Stan, say, turns a piece of candy into a quarter, people will see it and assume it was a sleight of hand trick, right?
How does Nasty Piece of Work... work? My understanding of physics is pretty garbage, so the best I've been able to come up with is he could tap a stationary object and rocket it into whatever direction he wanted proportional to its mass
>>81466596
There was a picture some drawfriend did of them, not sure if its in the booru.
Gadget's kind of a bit of both I think, he's a bit of a chump most of the time but when it comes right down to it he can solve cases just fine.
I was imagining the Eds as Teenagers, since Kevin would have to at least be that old to be selling Jawbreakers
Stand effects are probably still visible
I think that's probably how Hector's Stand works.
>>81466596
i was always thought gadget was the latter
to be frank, im not sure.
im pretty positive on stan's money being visible. not sure bout everyone else.
not sure.
>>81458374
Seriously, I really wanna know the answer to this after proposing him.
>>81458374
i think /co/ versions of obi-wan would be okay.
>>81466885
He got in anon, he's in the abilities doc as a possible character for Part 5.
>>81466750
boom
I write half my stuff at work, so the good stuff's not always accessible
and spitballed a few of the potential waifu gangs, and a few examples if we need to namedrop any of them
goths/goffs/midnighters; Gaz and Creepy Suzie, Gwen from TDI, Raven, Dylan Beekler
Inhumans/Metas; queen Tyr'ahnee, Gravitina (Buzz Lightyear), Ben Ten waifus, Starfire (cartoon and comic), Calico Briggs, Pavita, Fifi, Ghoul School girls, Leggy Lamb
The Cuties/Puritans; Gwen Stacy, Dawn (TDI), Rapunzel
The cheerleaders/alphas/the bitches; Brittany Wong (Star vs), Heather (TDI), Sandi Griffin (Daria)
the thorns/blood reds: redheads. Summer, Kim Possible, Candace, Gwen Tennison, Red Hot Riding Hood, Merida, Franky Foster, Jessica Rabbit
valkyries; all about fighting. futurama amazons, Ruffnut/Astrid, Ty Lee, Honey Bee (Black Dynamite), Grieve-Tan, Harley Quinn, Wonder Loli
The All Mothers/Matrons: Dexter's Mom, Mrs Fenton, Elastigirl, Cass Hamada
the loli’s /The Jail’s Baiters
>>81466885
>>81466912
I left it to the jury. I'm personally more or less cool with it if it's the cartoon version with the cartoon design, but I'm a bit on the edge just because of how ravenous Star Wars fans can be.
Speaking of characters, there's something I wanted to throw out there. We know Doc won't be around for much longer, and we have google docs for every part now. I'm wondering if maybe we should just decide the characters for each part now and then cut off stand suggestions. Would take the pressure off Doc, and it's honestly easier to write a story when you know all the players. Thoughts on this?
>>81467082
Keep in mind that the majority of these characters and gangs proposed by sandcastles will probably only be cameos, so there is no need to worry that this is going to clutter up Part 6
>>81467151
im okay with it. part 8 might need more development though
>>81467156
at most, right. just a resource list of ideas
>>81467156
Who do we have for prison staff so far?
>>81467082
>Honey Bee
>Shunting a Black Dynamite character to background status
How could you?
>>81467210
Judge Dress
Droopy
Lord Dominator.
Queen Vexus
Rocko
Kuffy
>>81467151
As much as that would help I actually don't think we can cut off Stand Suggestions. I say this because I've been trying to get some of the unassigned Stand users assigned to parts and realized that not all of them can be bashed into the roles required of them.
To clarify, we are potentially in need of a corrupt law enforcement officer for Penny to fight during the LHC investigation and the identity of the assassin that Scrooge fights off with Gadget is still unknown. In addition, as >>81467188 said some parts either need more cast members (Part 8) or more variation in cast members (Part 6). The scripts of the project will also always be in flux until eventual finalization, potentially creating more roles that none of the currently suggested Stand users can actually fill.
I also don't want the project to wind up killing creativity on my account, so if there must be a limit perhaps we could explain the specific character types we are looking for (i.e. Prisoners for Part 6, Villains for Part 8, Corpse part Guardians for Part 7 .etc), that way we don't end up with more characters suggestions than we need.
>>81467151
Sounds good but i don't think we should do it just yet, maybe next thread whit the main topic being decisive stands
>>81467438
Don't forget Snatcher.
>>81464448
>>81465091
>Thrift Shop
>user: Jenny (from Les Nombrils)
>takes the form of a floating wardrobe covered in glowing eyes, with a thick fog seep in from between the cracks of it's door
This good?
>>81467562
i love it
>>81467188
>>81467452
>>81467481
Alright, just thought I'd bring up the possibility. I'm just worried that if we don't put everything under lock and key by the time we get to writing part 8 a bunch of people will come out of the woodwork pushing THEIR special stand that TOTALLY SHOULD'VE BEEN IN BY NOW GUIZ WHY ISN'T IT IN YET GAWD.
>>81466596
I'm pretty sure this version of Gadget we're using is based off of an old /co/ project where he was Noir-ish. He's not incompetent, he just looks that way.
People should be able to see the money Stan makes with his stand, parts in the story don't work if they can't (paying at the dinner, donating to the gala).
The Eds are probably early 20s, they're probably around Tom's age. I think at least a year should've gone by from the end of part 3 to the beginning of part 4 since Double D got shot full of holes near the end of it, and you don't heal from that in a week.
>>81467648
Yeah, that was why I wanted to use up all the unassigned Stand users as quickly as possible. I might try to toss out a list of them into the thread along with suggestions for parts they would be good for if I have some free time later. .
Something that would help a bit would be for some anon (maybe the one who suggested Ethan as the Big Bad if he is still around) to come up with a basic idea for what Part 8 is going to be about. Otherwise its going to be too easy to put off characters till Part 8 instead of making effort to work them into existing Parts.
>>81467815
Well that really is a big job and something we should all agree upon, the basic idea of part 8 i mean
>>81467785
By the time Part Four has started, the Eds have already blown all the money they conned out of Daffy.
>>81467937
They didn't con the money out of Daffy, they took control of and then sold Fantasy Island.
It doesn't take long to blow through money once you start spending it.
They beat Daffy, during this time Fred's stand awakens since he's fighting a Daffy clone.
Some months later (let's say 4) the jawbreakers start flooding the town.
Around this time Tadashi dies.
Several rich people begin dying (jawbreaker "poisoning")
The LHC comes out of hiding and resumes their activities now that Daffy (and by extension Lowly) are dead.
Double D takes like 8 months to heal because he took machine gun fire to the torso.
By the time everything is in place, a year would've needed to go by minimum.
this felt like it was a lot harder than it should have been and i'm not 100% satisfied with it, but i felt it was good enough to post anyway
>>81468108
Niceu anon! Niceu!
>>81466582
Okay, here's the first part of the Porky fight. It's simple, but Porky was never really meant to be tough anyway so I think it works.
>after the fight with Lowly, the remaining party members trek deeper into the city
>everyone is tired but determined to stop the madman and avenge their friends
>they enter what appears to be the heart of the city. Graffiti is all over the buildings, and there’s a jazz club which has been thoroughly trashed (Ink and Paint club?)
>”Bet that place used to be swingin’, eh pops?”
>”Just keep an eye out, son.”
>suddenly, the gang hears a faint HOO HOO
>Ed: “DUCK MAN!!”
>they catch a flash of Daffy’s suit dashing into the worn down club
>Ed, still pissed about Clifford, stomps towards the club yelling “You killed my doggy!”
>Edd tries to stop him, but Ed’s on a mission and barges in
>Edd and Eddy follow him in
>Tom turns to Johnny
>”Trap?”
>”You betcha. Be careful.”
>the two nod and creep carefully into the club
>cut back to Ed, who is trashing the main room of the club looking for Daffy, screaming “Where are you duck man!?”
>Edd catches up to him. “Ed, you can’t just rush in, that’s what he wants!”
>the two argue briefly as two orange rings fly towards them…
>cut to Eddy, who’s walking in a somewhat cramped hallway. Curtains cover up the walls
>”Ed? Double D? Where are you guys?”
>he steps out into the main room
>”Oh, there you guys… wait, what the…?”
>the reader doesn’t see what he sees as a shadowy figure (Porky) pops out from the curtains and places an orange ring over his head
>cut back to Johnny and Tom creeping through the hallway we just saw Eddy in
>”Something feels off, pops. Where’d Dumb, Smart, and Dumber go?”
>”Not sure. Keep your eyes peeled.”
>they both step into the main room. The Eds are all on the stage, standing as if in a trance with the rings over their heads
>”Enemy stand?”
>”Looks it.”
>>81468200
>they step forward to investigate, but Porky gets the drop on them and places rings over their heads
>”Sorry about this g-g-g-g-g-fellas…”
>flash to white
>we cut to Ed, playing in a chicken coop. He’s pretending to have a kaiju fight with Spoon, and they’re having a wonderful time
>cut to Edd, reading a book in a perfectly clean room. Safety Dance has just finished putting labels on everything. Edd seems completely at peace
>cut to Eddy, who is cradling a gigantic bucket of quarters. Ed’s got a wheelbarrow full of ‘em, and Edd’s got a few jars of his own. Eddy’s praising the gang for their first scam gone entirely right, and he offers to treat the guys to a load of jawbreakers. He’s completely happy
>cut to Johnny, enjoying a peaceful moment on his deck with Captain. Kronk calls from the kitchen, saying food will be ready in a bit. Kid Tom from Tom and Jerry Kids runs out to the deck, wearing the hat he’ll one day wear as an adult. He asks his dad to put on a jazz record. Johnny laughs and obliges him, and the family sits together, watching the sunset. He’s the happiest we’ve seen him
>cut to Tom, sitting at a piano, his girl resting her elbows on it. He’s playing her a love song and joking with her, saying “I love you. When I’m with you, I’m, what you call, a hip cat…” and so on and so forth, same general speech as in The Zoot Cat cartoon. She’s laughing at him and calling him a square, but they’re clearly in love, and Tom is just happy to be near her. Tom smiles
>zoom out on Tom’s smiling face to show what’s really happening. All the heroes are trapped under the orange rings. Porky is standing there, looking ashamed
>”Well, there ya go Le-Le-Le-Le-Le-boss. They’re b-b-b-b-bound and distracted.”
>”Excellent, Porkster…”
>a familiar duck’s wing grabs the lamp from Tom’s side
>dramatic shot of Daffy holding up the lamp. “Just what I wished for!!” (end chapter here probably)
>>81468238
>cut back to Tom’s dream world. Tom’s girl creeps up and puts her hand on his side. He grabs it, but pauses.
>”Something wrong, hon?”
>”I just feel like… somethin’s missin’, toots. Somethin’… important…”
>back in reality, Daffy slips Porky a knife
>”Even if they’ve killed the worm and the nerd, they’re not worthy of my attention. You do it, Scatman (which I really think should be Porky’s assumed name, not his true name).”
>Daffy leaves. Unbeknownst to Porky, he stays behind to make sure he follows through with it
>Porky takes the knife and holds it up to Tom’s throat, but hesitates
>cut back to the dream world, where Tom keeps patting that same side
>”Honestly, don’t be a square, hon. What could possibly be more important than me?”
>”It is you! Or, it has something to do with you! I just can’t quite figure out what it is…”
>”Hmmph! You have all the charisma of a lamp, you know that Jack?”
>”A lamp…? A LAMP!!”
>Tom snaps out of the ring’s illusion and yells “The lamp is missing!”
>Porky is startled and drops the knife. He has no idea how Tom managed to escape
>before he falls back into the dream world, Tom summons OMT, who socks Porky in the face
>this breaks the remaining rings, freeing the rest of the heroes
>when they wake up and realize what happened, they send their stands to beat on Porky
>Porky pretty much just takes their hits, only blocking a little bit
>cue the rest of what’s in the doc
That should do it.
Well this doesn't seem autistic at all.
>>81468200
Should Johnny have a car for them to drive around in?
I saw that the guy drawing the Snoopy fight has them approach Snoopy at the start of it in Johnny's car and that makes some sense that Johnny would have a car in the ship and take it out when they land on the island.
That's just something that's been bugging me for a bit, mostly unrelated to the good stuff you're doing.
>>81468338
>should Johnny have a car?
Maybe? I just kind of figured they found it somewhere in the city. I'm hip either way, it would be a badass shot it Ed jumped out of a moving car thanks to his rage at the duck.
We need a Google doc youtube playlist.
>>81468379
The license plate is what made me think it must be Johnny's in the comic page it's on, but I guess they could find a car after beating Porky, tired of walking everywhere.
>>81468338
I don't see why he wouln't have a car, but it needs to be a cool car, something to "catch some babes"
>>81468446
I'm just bringing it up since he has one on the page here, and it's a good idea that they have one, but it's not mentioned in the doc.
We should probably change it so they're riding in Johnny's car instead of walking everywhere on the island.
>>81468418
I think a Spotify playlist would be easier for everyone to contribute to.
>>81467785
the noir Gadget was what I'd actually assumed when we first started it, then him screwing up and missing clues came up in the doc recently. also cuz i fucking loved the dark Gadget art that was trendy for a while
think I did some nameless writefagging about it on here too
>>81466596
Anon who made Hector's trio.
Nasty Piece of Work works like this, easiest way I can explain it. Say NPoW touches a bullet that is fired from a gun. Now, eventually the bullet loses too much of it's kinetic energy and begins to fall until it just putters out and hits the ground. If NPoW uses it's power, at any point in the bullets trajectory it will 'switch' energies, and will just drop. Now, as the bullet is falling, it will gather potential energy. At any point in this phase, NPoW can 'switch' again, and all the potential energy the bullet gathered from it's fall will convert to kinetic energy, and thus it will return immediately to what it was doing before; shooting, of course it will shoot in whatever direction it was now facing, so it has to be timed properly, but essentially NPoW can completely dominate moving objects and release projectiles that can possibly fly around endlessly.
>>81468851
so what can Lick It Up do that NPoW can't?
>>81469289
Lick It Up just completely erases kinetic energy, where as Nasty Piece of Work converts kinetic energy into potential and vice verse. They are very closely related Stands, but have a very important difference, which fits for the fact that Stomach and Hector's brain are from the same body, but have developed different personalities. Lick It Up is mainly used as a defensive measure, but I'm sure with enough thought it could be used offensively. It's main weakness is it's abysmally short range.
>>81456137
I love you.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yModCU1OVHY
This isn't funny anymore /co/ you seriously need to stop
>>81469833
anon, /co/ hasn't been a board for 40 years
>>81468851
So it's like Kraft Work but with more math?
posting character again
Jan Mouse
>stand:「BLACK MAGIC」from the famed band slayer
>appearance: a dark humanoid figure, mostly shadow like and demonic in nature punch ghost. the stands strength comes from the users willpower into singing and how she does it during combat
>abilities
Sub-bility 1: stand is able to repair the damaged body of the user in heaviest cases the stand user having severed limbs or even vitals ala head cut off
Sub-bility 2: Stand is able to shroud itself on the user and make the user invisible and disappear out of exsistance in her own dimension for only minutes at a time
Main Ability:「RAINING BLOOD」The user can cut herself and and have her stand manipulate her own blood to form as objects and/or be used as projectiles or bombs. with sheer force it can decimate any living being leaving destruction in her path. blood is recyclable as stand has blood levitation powers in close proximity
how should i balance sub ability 1 and what part will she have a chance in as a villain?
>>81470055
Have it tied to the heart.
As long as her heart keeps pumping, the blood keeps flowing and it's able to repair. If anything stops her heart, the blood powers stop working entirely.
>>81469907
In a sense, but with NPoW Hector doesn't have to touch any of the objects he influences except for the one time, since they can self propel and energize via the swapping.
>>81470104
thats actually pretty sexy for a ability thanks
>>81433884
So the whole story is written in a message board format? I could try to write it out in a proper narrative if no one else is yet.
>>81468846
>>81467785
That's sorta why I pushed him so hard last month, familia. I think /co/ never managed to atually make that gadget, so I deided to continue having him in this project.
>>81468108
if you could give me a shot of the rest of Genie's chest I could animate this for you.
>>81472613
We could always use more manpower. Go nuts.
>>81454501
Yes please, some kind of appearance.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pgvge3RThvg
[Keep Singing] would be perfect for someone like Ariel if she was in part 6.
I have the perfect idea for someone in part 5
>Now presenting the Mysterious Stranger!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BpaRouocBes
>>81464448
Chicken Boo.
>>81474155
The best part for this guy would be this: He isn't even a Stand User, yet he can see them just fine.
>>81467481
>Jenny acts as Nobodies spymaster, switching between identities to infiltrate anywhere and preform almost any task as needed
>>81464065
So I've been trying to develop the Part 4 script and worked a bit on Jay & SB during the scam section of the Part. Just going to summarize what I came up with for their role during that.
>Jay & SB meet Gadget & Penny, offering to guide them during their stay so they can mooch off the well-to-do tourists.
>They aren't malicious, just streetwise slackers who take whatever opportunity they can get for free stuff
>Gadget thinks guys like them make good contacts and he's also generally the same nice guy he is in the show when he isn't on duty so he isn't bothered by the mooching.
>Penny doesn't really approve of them, but her uncle has had far worse local contacts in the past on account of being noir!Gadget so she doesn't make much fuss.
>Gadget monologues a lot about his past on account of being noir!Gadget, so J&SB end up getting to know him in spite of themselves while accompanying him.
>Since Gadget can't see Stands, Jay & SB try to steer him away from Stand battles. This goes from mostly being because they don't want their money train to be cut off to being because they genuinely care about him.
>This comes to a head when they encounter Professor Pyg
>Gadget is the first to get hit by Pyg's Stand, he still hasn't developed his own Stand at this point so he has no idea what is going on
>He tells Jay & SB to run, but they decide to stand and fight because he is their friend now and not just the guy who pays for everything for them.
>Pyg takes advantage of their inexperience, but Gadget awakens [Human After All] just in time to turn the tables.
>Now aware of Stands, Gadget's befriending of Jay and SB finally pays off and he gets them to tell him everything they know about Stands
>In his letter to Penny in case he doesn't make it back from his attempt to lure out the killer at the gala, he tells her to work with Jay & SB because they were the ones who told him everything he knows about Stands and because he knows they can be counted on in a pinch.
>>81474195
>everyone assumes his stand ability is to see stands and is the most pointless stand ever
>>81472613
we have a proper format.
Read the fucking docs you doublenegger
>>81472865
A handful of pics and some stories happened, but that's about it. Same with most of the /co/ AU projects from the time.
In the Gadget Noir setting, Dr. Claw was some kind of human enthusiast who wanted to force humanity to evolve and saw melding with technology to be the greatest enemy to his objective.
Should Dr. Claw be in ccba somewhere?
>>81475109
I quite like this. Although we did have one or two minor fights before Professor Pyg turns shit serious for Gadget and the gang.
We do have Gadget winning one or two fights without a Stand.
>>81475286
Glad you liked it. I sort of meant that J&SB generally try to steer Gadget away from Stand battles when they are with him, like in the doc they keep him from interfering with Stan VS Billy and [Men at Work] VS Hiro & Gogo. They aren't with him all the time though, which is when the two Stand Battles Gadget gets into happen.
The first would be where he pulls the PPG & [Men at Work] apart and flashes his badge to get them to quit whatever it is they were doing. Not really a fight per say, but it doesn't make him any less of a badass to be able to stop a Stand Battle without knowing what they are.
The fight with the assassin Flintheart sent after Scrooge hasn't been elaborated yet (I'm thinking we could use The Beast from OtGW with some tweaking to its current ability) but I presumed that it was largely thanks to Scrooge that they managed to win, and for the most part Scrooge was trying to keep Gadget in the dark about Stands as well because he thought Gadget had suffered enough trauma as is without trying to involve himself in Stand battles.
Its really Pyg that ends up being a real threat like you said because Pyg's Stand would completely shut down Gadget's gadgets if he didn't develop [Human After All] from the Jawbreaker he got from the Ed Boys. I figured it would be a good opportunity for J&SB to have their first real battle here too where they use their Stands for combat rather than mundane utility, even if they do need to get bailed out by Gadget by the end of it.
Should we have a small back-story part with the Warden meeting Daffy in part 6 or not?
It could be how the Warden learns of his stand or how he acquires it
>>81476867
>Warden...
>Do you believe in [Paradise]?
What should part 7's ending song be?
>>81477801
Standing in the Rain by Scatman John
What songs do you think could make good stands if executed correctly?
![[Once In A Lifetime].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/XrPEM1l.jpg "[Once In A Lifetime].jpg")
Got bored so I drew Mandy's stand. Not sure what external ribcage means so I just referenced from that one episode of B&M.
>>81475109
I may slip into the Gogo fight's storytime and fill in some dialogue between them as they're watching, since it's more summarized than the rest of the fight. that and I love their dynamic
>"What the hell are they doing?"
>"Homeboy's usin' his Stand! He's got this big white marshmallow-lookin' bitch (no offense, Silent Bob) and it's pimpin' the everlovin' SHIT out of her bike!"
>"...are you kids on the dope right now?"
>"Yo, man! I ain't gotta tell you nuffin! You'se a cop!"
>"I'm a cop who's paying you for information. You DO 'gotta tell me nuffin, or you don't get paid."
>Bob gives Jay a sarcastic look, then nods towards the scene where the Eds are flinging things around with their Stands as the Big Heroes chase after them
>Gadget stares and starts up the car. "Keep talking, stringbean."
What are the chances of Rick Sanchez getting in on this?
>>81478513
niceu niceu
>>81479701
we already have summer from rick and morty i believe so if you can develop a good stand for rick, he's fine.
No Danny Fenton with a Danny Phantom stand?
>>81480249
pretty sure danny fenton has a stand, i don't believe it's appearance is danny phantom though.
>>81479691
Yeah, this is good.
J&SB probably won't follow Gadget into Foster's though, so that could be how Gadget is on his own when he meets Scrooge.
>>57434742
>no SU stand that can change people's genders and pronouns
>>81480511
I do adore me some JaB dialogue
so before I take another crack at Father, any thoughts on his pyrokinesis thing from the show? that still around? or is he back to being a manly man with manly punches like everyone else?
because that's probably been my favorite part of this so far: we've taken characters with little to no actual powers and then threw powers at them and see how they fared. so I'm curious to see if/how the actual capes fare in the latest chapters
>>81480222
Right, I figured if the stand was based off of the character then for Rick it could have something to do with interdimensional portals. Work akin to Fat Choice from Venture Bros.
>>81480511
Oh, wait a minute, Gadget meets Scrooge before going to Foster's. I guess Scrooge could've scared them off just as well.
>>81481031
Father's stand deals with momentum, friction could be a secondary power to generate heat. If it stands still too long it'll literally burn off all of its stored energy.
Either way, it seems like Scooby's stand powers would trounce Father's in a straight confrontation.
>>81467452
>To clarify, we are potentially in need of a corrupt law enforcement officer for Penny to fight during the LHC investigation and the identity of the assassin that Scrooge fights off with Gadget is still unknown.
The only character that comes me to mind right now about being a cop, corrupt and belonging to cartoons is Chief Wiggum, but even then his corrupt side was mostly used as a gag in The Simpsons and he was never portrayed as overly malicious.
As for comics, I think Sin City has a handful of corrupt cop types, most notably Manute. I'll try to remember some more later.
>>81467082
>Queen Tyr'ahnee
Would be funny if her interactions with the major characters would have a reference to Marvin and Daffy's actions in Part 3.
>>81481480
I've been thinking about Bonkers.
Not all good characters are good in this setting, just like how not all villainous characters are villains in this setting.
>>81481952
Yeah I'm aware, given Cuzco and some other guys are villains in Part 2. Not to mention Snoopy.
It is just putting Wiggum as a villain looks odd, but well whatever. And speaking of more suggestions for corrupt cops, I just remembered of Commissioner Loeb from Batman: Year One. Would be interesting that the officers in the payroll of LHC include a regular officer and a guy in the high ranks.
>>81482406
I think some of the cops on their payroll shouldn't have stands and the promise of super powers keeps their mouths shut.
>>81482406
Wiggum's too obvious too. I think he might make a good red herring, though. As for the actual traitor, it has to be someone no one would suspect at first, someone who no one in their right mind would peg as a villain.The ones that come to mind are Clawhauser, Barney Rubble, and Axe Cop.
>>81482962
Cosgrove from Freakazoid, maybe.
Since we're on the subject of guards, Bad Cop could probably be a neutral guard.
I'm not exactly what his stand would be, but I think it's powers could probably vary depending on whether he was Good Cop or Bad Cop.
>>81483415
Maybe the Stand has it's own personality and can swap this personality with it's user. This is also on top of placing [cameras] in peoples blind spots so he knows exactly what they are doing.
I have no idea what the name should be, but I'm thinking [Private Hell] by The Jam
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NE2fsrK9k8MNo one knows which persona is which, not even the Warden.
>>81483889
I like this idea.
[PRIVATE HELL] sounds fine to me.
>>81483889
I don't think that's a bad idea, but Crazy Jane has a similar gimmick in the part following.
Perhaps a Stand whose powers rely on his current morality?
>>81484286
i also like this idea too.
>>81484347
Make It inverse to his current morality and you'll have me hook, line and sinker.
>>81484286
>>81484488
Make it's stand one of this things that can turn his faces or something
What fights in part 4 haven't been developed as much yet?
>>81486038
None?
