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Post your own work or critique others. Help each other out anons.
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>>81332820
I have a piece of art that I would like some feedback on, but it has some nudity in it so I don't think I can post it here.
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I know that lewd are generally ignored on these threads, but I want to know how to improve my work.

Something like this is me going all out on a drawing, but it still feels lacking.
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>>81333087
The only thing I can think of is more definition on the thighs. I'm not good with art but the thighs in this pic have a lot of life to them. They look like you could reach out and squeeze them.
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>>81333367
Or this
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>>81333367
A lot of different tones in the shading I think is a big part of it.
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sweating
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I was practicing how to draw bodies, what do you think batman ?
pls help
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>>81334349
not too shabby though it does appear you're skimping on your hands and feet. i'd recommend you practice those separately a lot, really grind it in. then obviously connect them to arms and legs.

with hands it might help to consider their entire shape and expression beforehand. another helpful bit of advice i read was to draw the hands first and then connected them to the body, although that's more for keeping things proportional.
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>>81332820
An OC design I'm developing. She's very buff, very tall and has plant based powers.
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I like monster girls
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>>81333456
It's also a good understanding of Volume. Black and white drawings can have a real feel to them if you make the objects feel like they have a real thickness to them, especially in the countours of the skin.
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>>81333367
>>81333456
>>81335353

How does it compare to something like this?
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I made this a year ago, ink on bristol.
Just got around to digitally touching it up.
What can I improve on?
I want to make more art like this but I haven't since I made this. Where can I find similar pictures?
This one was inspired by an /x/ greeentext story about a guy seeping in tree.
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