Donut Steel strikes back
Let's have another good ol fashioned OC thread.
Post your original characters and story ideas, give feedback, make requests, etc
>>79099569
This guy isn't mine, he's a friend's character who I redesigned a bit.
He has water/ice abilities and can transform into a dragon.
>>79099569
I could really use some feedback on this one design.
Mrs. Faythorne. She's supposed to be the head of a town council that basically controls the place. She's a close descendant of a coven that used to lord over the town, and as such, she grew up drinking in good ol' granny's stories of the golden days, and has a hidden obsession about it. As a hint towards that, she arranged the council to be made entirely of women who are bloodlines from the old coven, but really, it's only her that believes so hard. So, when magical shit starts to get confirmed for real, her obsession possesses her, and she uses everything she can with her position to bring back the good ol' days.
She's the antagonist, by the way, and these colors were just here to flesh out the concept, not final. I'm having trouble designing her head mostly. I wanted the annoyed witch bitch expression that hid the wide-eyed obsession she's got.
Holy shit that was long.
>>79099569
She came to me in a dream, she's a sweet Robot chick named Neutra.I fucked up on her left hand
>>79099969
the design is actually pretty nice, man. I'm liking it. Is she a character for anything in particular?
>>79100090
This is the original Art of her.
I was planning on making a comic for her, but I wanna reboot another comic series of mine.
This is Rococo Feathersworth, she is really good at one thing, kicking ass, but actually not much else.
She isn't particularly good at stuff that she wanted to do, like running a bakery, or baking in general, but she does her earnest best.
>>79100282
I like her. She's got kind of a Skull girls vibe to her.
Here's an Album of some of my concepts for Rabidtha/Tabitha. It's a comic series about 2 magical sisters and the world around them.
http://imgur.com/a/URYub
>>79099569
Solaria.Trapsuperhero with the power of a sun. Costume is created from their energy.
>>79099895
Looks and sounds cool. Reminds me of One Piece.
>>79099958
Interesting design. I'd like to see something a bit more finished to give a better analysis of her look. I don't see anything wrong, though. As for the bio, maybe it'd be best to sum up her backstory a little better and keep it simple.
>>79099969
>>79100147
Interesting. What's her powers and what's her story?
>>79100282
Does she get herself in violent situations or do they just happen to her? Does she like fighting or is it like work to her. That'd be an interesting thing. Her work is like a hobby and something like fighting constantly ends up being her job.
>>79100434
Looks good, keep it up! It's probably best to post more info in the thread in case there are those that don't want to click on the link.
>>79099895
Channeling some serious darksteel there
>>79099958
I dig the hair but not so much the scarf. Try that with a shawl. If you're going for a powersuit thing add some lapels, if not add some buckles. Plain spandex is pretty boring.
>>79099969
I like this one a lot. Care to show us more angles? This one >>79100147 underplays her. Her posture in the second is very manlike with the short neck and the stout shoulders.
>>79100282
good stuff. Will you colour it?
>>79100434
I'm getting some Templar Assassin vibes here. I like, your faces all look the same though so maybe work on that
>>79100505
There's something pretty unnerving here but I can't quite put my finger on it. Post some more pics of them so I can make a verdict.
I've been meaning to draw one of my OC's for a while, I'll go take a bath and have a go at it. Keep this thread alive until I come back.
>>79100282
That's a terrible name for a character.
>>79100738
Unnerving? This? Nawwww...
Finally, I can get away from the smut donut steel and into clean/fun one.
His name is Arthur Aetheron and he is an elf with technomancy powers. He'd like to join the magical academies nearby so he could have a better chance at entering the Imperial University to research on more arcane efficient golems.
Sadly, Arthur is currently confined to public schooling due to many expulsions involving "human test-subjects".
>>79100681
Alright so I don't have much about Neutra, but like Both her story and Rabidtha/Tabitha deal with 8 elements. R/Tabitha deal with Magic USers of the 8 elements of Water, Fire, Earth, Wind, Lightning, Light, Dark, and Poison, and the secret ninth element Neutral. Magic History and lore and shit.
Neutra on the other hand so far only has robots named after the 8 + 1 elements, Neutra, Boreas, etc... It's gonna be action based and hopefully a lot more fighting. If there will be more characters, they would have decent development time, but seriously don't know which direction I'm gonna take it.
>>79100738
There aren't anymore angles because I simply haven't drawn her enough yet. The first image was like the second time I've actually drawn her outside her initial concept, which was the second picture I posted.
As for the same faces, WORKING WORKING WORKING! Shit is difficult. Fiare is a Fire Mage and thats seriously all I have for her and of her.
Thanks for the Feedback.
This is Angelite Miller, xe's the great-grandchild of Sadie and Lars Miller, and grandchild Pearl and Stevonnie. Xe's super calm all the time which is why xe never opens xer eyes to see, because xe's so in tune with the environment. Xer weapons are The Peace Orb and Goalie Gloves, and when not jamming on the guitar with xer Great Grandfather and Grandmapa, xe's conpeting in intergalactic soccer oturnaments and is a one gem team. Xe got offered a promotion to BLue Diamond a literal dozen times but turned it down every time to spend time with Amethyst. Also xe can walk on water and surf good.
>>79100892
He kinda reminds me of the Eleventh Doctor.
>>79100959
Forgot to mention, as for powers, this is at the top of my head and is subject to change: Super Strength, (as much as I hate it) Flight, repulsion shields, Maybe limited adaptability.
I made this.
>>79100681
yeah, her bio is a bit much. how about,
Mrs. Faythorne, head of a council of witch descendants formed from her own design. Due to her obsession of the days when witches lorded, she uses everything in her power to regain that state once magical things happen before her.
Is that better? Ah, and here's some sketches of the protag, but I don't have time to type out the bio right now.
>>79101009
Its the hair and his outfit that does it.
>>79099569
Here she is, Morganelle.
A modern-day english maid that's starting to get somewhat tired of her job, and the people she lives with.
She's rather self indulgent, but deep down, Morgan really does care about the people she serves.
>>79100892
I love this one. I imagine him being sarcastic and having a very nasal voice. Post more?
>>79100975
Please go. Just leave
>>79101051
Is this a kid or a squid? I like. Post more?
>>79101073
Pretty generic
>>79101389
At first glance she appears to be fapbait but your story makes her interesting. Your writing will be the make or break deal for her in my opinion.
>>79101487
>fapbait
Shit.
Crank Fastle, The Retaliator
most of his stories revolve around blasting away guineas, daegos and wops to smithereens (set to an 80s soundtrack)
>>79101487
Thanks, anon. Glad you mentioned that too, because really does have this really nasally and pretentious sounding voice. I've got to go to a D&D session soon, but here are his two friends that I've posted now and then on these threads.
Lu Lu: Standoffish, she keeps to herself and is not reluctant to punch people. Lu-lu hopes to join the Town Guard or of some sort law-enforcement agency when she's older. But she's cool with Soren because they've been close since childhood.
Soren: A 14 year old kid with a bright head and a kind heart. He is dragged along on many unnecessary adventures.
If I'm back home in time, I'll post one more character.
>>79100738
What do you mean by "darksteel"? If you mean coldsteel the hedgeheg, this guy's not actually edgy.
He's actually pretty optimistic and cheerful.
It's his brother who's the edgelord.
>>79101487
I'd rather not leave.
>>79099895
more characters from the same story/universe; these two are angels.
>>79100809
Looks terrible.
>>79101629
We have a a winner.
>>79101487
Okay...Do you want know about her character?
Alright here's my thing, it's an old photo though (19/08/2015)
I don't have a name for him yet, maybe I'll call him Gareth.
His primary motivation is fame, bards singing his name and bad guys shuddering at his ire etc.
He acts hard but he's actually very unsure of himself.
His weapon is just a staff with lenses on top, no mechanical properties, much like his wand-sidearm. He casts spells with them, fireballs etc.
Both his parents were max level characters and they raised him from childhood to be a successful adventurer. When he had a fight with a kid at school, they made him break into his 'dungeon' (his house), beat the other kid and 'loot' him (take all his stuff). His mother was a necromancer and used raised skeletons to teach him about the importance of brushed your teeth.
I plan on making a comic where he's one of the protagonists and he slowly discovers that maybe he doesn't want to be an adventurer.
I'll draw a resign of him right now so maybe you'll get to see your feedback take root live.
Attempting to make a Samurai Pizza Cats OC. Not a hero or villain, just an extra. She works at an arcade, and has a few elements reflecting this in her design (joystick hair pin, JAMMA harness comb, coin slots and buttons on obi backpack, and belt-mounted coin dispenser). At this point she still looks a little generic, I want to come up with a few more things to make her more unique. I've already given her whiskers and a "3" mouth, which most of the typical "cute" females in the show lack, so that's a start.
>>79102023
Yes please
>>79101809
I mean't the design, not his personality. It's all the spikes and purple I think. I like these >>79101987 ones much more, they're more down to earth. Not saying everything needs to be dull and ordinary but you don't need spikes and bright colours to make something stand out
>>79101640
They're cuties, but maybe the femme fatale thing is a bit overplayed. She needs something more going for her. What period is your story taking place in? I see ties and suspenders but you said there's magic so I'm curious.
>>79101922
Okay maybe I was a bit hard on you, don't leave but I'll be honest with you.
It's a shitty SU recolor, you can work on that by making your own thing instead of filing in the lines. I know it's safe to stay in someone else's shadow but if you want to be your own artist you'll have to depart from other people's artstyle.
The only thing she's got going for her is that she's a trans pacifist, work on that by giving her a real identity instead of one defined by gender. I'm talking about traits, flaws, motivations and aspirations.
Lastly, that pronoun thing is very cringey, you immediately label yourself as a tumbler. If you're insistent on using neutral pronouns you can use 'they' or 'it'. 'Xe' is not a real word.
>>79101629
Is this ironic?
>>79102245
I love this one. Maybe the waist is a bit busy but overall it's great. Post more?
I'm having trouble coming up with clothing that isn't boring or gaudy. Realistically the characters would never wear the headdresses, but it gives you the general idea. A neurotic cult leader and a fake sun goddess.
>>79102723
I dig your artstyle my man. Show us some full bodied ones so we know what you're talkning about the clothes.
Also what makes her a fake? Is she scamming people or she just doens't have powers?
>>79099569
my friend and I worked on one a while ago, unfortunately neither of us are drawfags but I can give a general quick description. She was a girl whose power was that her whole body was hyper dense, to the point where she weighed a little over a ton. because of this her pigment was concentrated enough that her skin, hair, irises, etc were all pure black and anywhere with no pigment (like sclera) was red due to the blood vessels being so densely packed. The whole idea with her powers we were going for was showcasing the upsides and downsides of her density, including things like whenever she got cut her blood was under such high pressure that it fired out like a pressure cutter. The general story thing was that she was traumatized by the events of getting her powers and so had two different "worlds" the story followed, the real world where she went around with an animal-like mentality working for the shady group that made her as a war machine and the inner world in her head where she rationalized it all as random college antics.
>>79102827
i dig this. I'd draw her but I'm not good at drawing reflective surfaces.
The human-warmachine is pretty overplayed but the second premise sounds fun. With some good writing this could be really interesting.
Why don't you have a go at drawing her for us? It doesn't have to be any good, just try to show us what she looks like in your mind. Don't be afraid of drawing shitty drawings!
>>79102956
uuuuh. sure, but it will be shit. I'll go try to draw that, be back later with the failure.
>>79103004
That's okay! Even the shittiest drawing is better than no drawing. It's not that you shouldn't strive to be good, just don't get frustrated that it's not as good as you'd want and scrap it.
>>79102790
She just wears a white dress, for now. She does have powers, but she lets rumors spread that she's a literal God, to boost her own ego.
>>79102496
Got it. Make her fatter, 20 more pronouns, three eyes and all are closed.
>>79102496
>I love this one. Maybe the waist is a bit busy but overall it's great. Post more?
Things sometimes get a bit busy in that show's designs due to the mecha aesthetic. I suppose in the waist area I could tone down the folds at the top of the side kimono skirt plates (that was sort of an attempt to give that area something different from similar designs in the show). As far as more stuff, that's really the only donut steel I have at the moment. Everything else is just fanart of actual characters in the show.
>>79103228
Well that's why I said 'maybe' and 'a bit', it's not really glaring, I just wanted to bring to your attention so you can purposely choose whether to keep it or not. It's your character afterall!
>>79103189
You really don't see how it's basically fanart? You tried your best to make a character that would fit in with the rest of the crowd if it was in the show. That's not just having training wheels in your drawing but in your writing as well.
>>79102154
Okay I'm pretty tired so I'll just go to sleep and maybe redraw this tomorrow. If you have any suggestions just leave them here and I'll see them tomorrow on the archive.
Good night /co/
>>79103369
Fanart is what I was going for yes
>>79103555
fanart =/= oc
>>79103555
This gemsona guy has posted in other OC threads. Ignore him, he's a rusemaster.
the best gem OCs ever made
>>79104165
>Onyx is just an intentionally-shitty knockoff of Raiden from Revengeance
Gets me every time
>>79100282
I hope you see this.
I going to try drawing her again
>>79104165
Where's Onxy's gemstone?
>>79104374
more importantly is his weapon the weeb frequency blade
>>79104374
Eye gem, of course.
>>79104471
Oh.
It looked like a glued on eye patch.
>>79099569I hope i am able to post this without any problems. But i'm spoilering the picture just to be safe.
Those two are Greg and Lillian. I don't have much of a backstory for the two yet, but they work on an antique store, and do some treasure hunting on the side.
>>79101629
Is he serious sam's cousin?
>>79103660
Damn, my dastardly plot has been unveiled!
On an unrelated note, this is an actual OC of mine. His name is Joey and he's a mechanic in the Mushroom Kingdom.
Meet Stephanie and Daniel Count. She's 18 and he's 22. They're siblings and both still living at their parents'.
Stephanie is a techno freak who sleeps in a sleeping bag on the floor because she transformed her bedroom into a sound/movie studio. Her ambition is to make it big someday as a tv/movie producer. She is skilled and could get a job any place, but she'd rather work full time on her own projects. She might be a lil' flaky, though.
Daniel Count (or Count Dany Hell, as he is known on the net) is a Fedora-Neckbeard and he has the personnality to match: Into anime and girl cartoon series, describes himself as a Nice Guy and wonders why his being a Gentleman-Knight still hasn't been covering him with girls yet. You may mock his weilding a katana but you'll soon regret it because he handles it with surpsising skills. Writing fanfics since he was 12 made him a skilled writer who doesn't need to rely on other people's creations anymore. He lives on little writing/illustrations contracts here and there, and is always ready to help his sis with her crazy plans.
>>79105317
>neckbeard hero fantasy with qt little sister character
>>79105612
Of course. I know what you think: "Hey, that must be his Marty-Stu." Nope! But one day, I realized something: These guys read lots of comics. And, they are represented in a negative way. They'll probably appreciate to see a fedora-neckbeard as a main character, for once. Not as a great hero, not as a total loser, but as something in-between. Just like in real life.
I'll bite but there's probably gonna be hate.
As of yet unnamed, she's a dungeon boss in... you guessed it, a dungeon. Would-be wannabe heroes and adventures enter the dungeon for the loot, battle their way through endless traps, she's the end game.
Dargon lady doesn't lose.
I have a lose concept of a comic in the works.
>>79105775
>You may mock his weilding a katana but you'll soon regret it because he handles it with surpsising skills.
> Writing fanfics since he was 12 made him a skilled writer who doesn't need to rely on other people's creations anymore.
sure.
>>79105892
Also unnamed.
Dargon fem-dude who works in the dungeon. Repairs shit, resets traps, and cleans up all the dead adventurers after the fighting is over. Jack of all trades type deal.
He's the protagonist.
There will be /ss/.
>>79106017
if he doesn't get molested by an adventurer then your series is shit
>>79105775
they don't want positive representation, they want to pretend they are someone better than them
>>79106058
The thought had crossed my mind.
>>79105892
>scaly tits
get rid of it
>>79106102
paladins need to smite the evil from his nether regions./tg/ says hi by the way
>>79106017
>resets traps
I bet he does
Otis Leadbelly
The whole thing is based around his bar.
He's a fat angry dwarf who's beard is connected to his eyebrows.
The town is the cross roads of dimensions, where all those mages and heroes that teleport and use portals end up before continuing there destinations.
>>79106240
Well, I'm a weirdo, so their species of dragon is female-dominant amazonites and the males are mostly sissy-fuccbois.
Because muh /ss/.
>>79105892
The mega-boobs are turning me off just a teeny bit, but I like everything else.
>>79106017
>There will be /ss/.
There better be
>>79106248
Picture wouldn't upload.
He has a iron nose.
here's a group of misfits that are part of a fighter's guild. they end up saving the world or something eventually.
>>79106316
I like the grey in the beard, but the mustache is weird. Did it start out grey and then grow in red? That aside, I like it.
How'd he lose his eye/ nose? And he better have a guitar.
>>79106518
The grey is to make the stash stand out a little more.
And he's a dwarf so he need to play some stupid made up instrument. So why not a tuba cello?
>>79106454
It's kinda telling that the bird woman was drawn with much more effort than the rest
>>79106673
it might look like that because i changed the other's designs so much. i was pretty set on the bird woman's design by the time i drew her.also i really like the bird woman
>>79100316
Thanks man, that's a great compliment.
>>79100681
She was thrust into violent situation when she was young, its her formative experience, but she wanted to be different, but her past keep catching up to her.
>>79100738
Probably not that one, at least not yet.
>>79100746
Yeah? Why is that? Any suggestions? >>79104327
I see it, thanks. For some reason your version always more hardcore looking than mine...
>>79101987
Last one in the series. This guy is a god who was kicked out of the pantheon and trapped in a mortal form, and now he's mad as hell.
He's also trying to stop Leviathan from awakening and flooding the world.
This one is my attempt at a pokemon OC
This my OC Attarra. She's an arena fighter also known as 'The Scarred Princess'. Once a royal from a far off fallen kingdom, she was captured and sold. Forced to fight, she eventually grows into a near unstoppable champion, yet her hubris and love of opiates ultimately leads to her downfall.
>>79107199
Here is the finish product.
hope you like it.
>>79103138
alright, done. Sorry that took so long, the printer's scanner was on the fritz all day. Also sorry for shitscribble art level of course.
>>79111354
also bonus of when I put it through the scanner on "black and white" mode. should be renamed to "nightmare mode". Also, regarding some of her features- the hair is like that due to her dense structure, her hairs are all practically straight needles. the mask is mostly there for in-story reasons due to weird psychological shit and out-of-story reasons because I'm shit at drawing faces.
Takua-ua and alien from outer space who just looks for odd jobs with the rest of his crewmates.
Aliens who drink together, think together.
This is Rochelle Colvert, youngest child and second daughter of a noble family and knight in training. She's a fairly soft spoken but very intelligent young woman (early 20s) who earnestly wants to become a great and noble knight and champion to follow in the footsteps of her elder Sister. However her competency and confidence in physical combat is fairly lacking and her gentle demeanor leads to others often being very dismissive of her. However she's highly persistent and possess a surprising natural talent for tactics, and often manages to solve her problems in creative ways.
As part of her training, and to more or less keep her busy and out of more pressing affairs within the family household, she's sent off on a mission to investigate rumors of unrest and rising numbers of inhuman creatures. During her wild goose chase, which she takes with the utmost sincerity, she comes across a Dhampir, Ghoul and Half-Ogre trio (the other main characters of the story) who spend their time working as mercenaries and bounty hunters. Deciding they have something to do with the trouble brewing in the country side and elects to follow them.
Eventually, situations lead to them becoming friends and the four of them continue on to discover a secret plot by certain villainous factions to raise an army of unstoppable beasts using the legendary Blood of the Titan. A plot that not only threatens the world with an army of unstoppable rage beasts, but also brings with it the risk of awakening the long thought dead Titan himself.
Spider Scottish Goth
Stupidly old and stupidly ugly art, but this is basically one of my only "full body" shots of my OC hero "Bulletproof". He's gone through some concept iterations since this, and basically he's sort of the premier hero of a whole setting, basically...
>All myths are true
>Metahumans have existed since basically forever
>Super Geniuses like Da Vinci and Tesla (plus one OC scientist who got the bright idea to send back modern medical concepts to ancient Rome) pushed science forward rediculously
>Story is set during the resulting alternate 1960's, with all the nightmares it implies such as...
>Nigh over-the-counter gene modding, easy-access cybernetics, household magic and alchemy and
>Government psychics and a metahuman draft to fight commies/capitalist dogs
Basically, the whole world is summed in the tagline: Superpowers are everyday, but heroes are rare.
Bulletproof himself is not the strongest hero (in fact, the government passed him over in favor for the guy who was basically Superman), the fastest, or the smartest. but he's a delicate balance of these things that he combines with training and quick-thinking that puts him on par with nearly global scale threats.
>>79111419
>>79111354
This thread is dying fast, so I better post this now.
>>79114635
nice work! the 'mouth' on her mask doesn't open though, that's just drawn on. It's a mask, not her real face.
>>79113732
you remind of linkara.
This handsome young man is Baronet Brian Balder Baldur Balger Valdus. But he's better known as "Barry" by his friends, and "Baby" by his girlfriend. He is part of clan of nobles who have served the empire's legions for several generations. Adventurous and brave, Barry goes on several expeditions around the country to lost cities and temples to collect artifacts for museums. Often does he drag Soren on his journeys into perilous situations that could have been so easily avoidable.
>>79102496
>She needs something more going for her.
She actually does, but if I get around to actually telling their story its a bit of a minor spoiler.Lu-Lu is actually a superheroine named Scarlet Sparrow, and is the 6th iteration.
>What period is your story taking place in? I see ties and suspenders but you said there's magic so I'm curious.
Imagine a world of fantasy and endless wonder, but then fast forwarded to a time where that's all over and there's a system for everything. The setting has a really big 1950's flair with much optimism and hope of bright futures. I think a lot of stories like to deconstruct the 50's as a bleak era, but I'm looking for a reconstruction of sorts.
>>79114936
I'm gonna be honest, I have no idea who that is.
But, given this is 4chan. I'm gonna assume bad.
>>79114808
Shit. Oh well ,if the thread is still alive tomorrow I'll fix the mouth and draw the rest of her body
>>79115065
Don't Jegic.
I keep it alive.
>>79114936
>>79115064
>Looks up Linkara
... Oh... God. Oh, dear god.
It's that bad, isn't it?
>>79115148
Yes.
first was a concept but I guess all in all these are just doodles that I do from time to time
not necessarily OC since I have no background, name or writing for them, but original doodles nonetheless
>>79115998
a quick render
Something I drew up on a plane. It has something to do with something that's been in my head for a while now, not good at translating it to paper
>>79116042
looks good. Any ideas for the story behind him? Makes me think of some kind of modern, Templar-themed superhero.
>>79115979
>>79115998
>>79116024
Can I pitch a name for her? I was thinking "Flatscreen".
>>79115445
Alright. So, was it just the design that made you think Linkara or the story?
a little demon thing who i doodle a lot. i kind of wish it were cuter but idk
>>79115979
>>79115998
>>79116024
that's an outlet bro
>>79116124
that could work
>>79116171
its what I was referencing, yes
>>79112632
pretty cool, like the guy drinking with his fingers
>>79116124
Oh sorry, the backstory so far is he's a guy that lives on his own in the outskirts of London, which is walled around. The world being post apocalyptic, though after a couple hundred years it's rebuild itself. His cape thing ain't Templar, it's the Union Jack, a poor rendition out of memory
>>79116248
I'm glad it was obvious what it was doing. I was afraid I'd have to explain it every time.
>>79116148
Is it a cyclops?
Kaine
A brutal, disfigured bounty hunter and mercenary scouring the galaxy to find the ones who did him wrong. Kaine has a feirce, ongoing blood vendetta with the Hutts; looking to systematically destroy them slug by slug with his bare hands. After winding up on a pirate vessel and forced into role of jailer, the man thought his chance to destroy the alien crime family was over; until one day, a lone padawan was captured and brought to the brig...
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Kaine's personality can be described as a cold, angry and tormented Jonah Hex. He has a dry, almost morbid sense of humor with an attitude to match. He fights dirty, brutal and destructive in approach. Despite his disfigurement and scary mannerisms, the man has gone out of his way to help the defenseless in his own way on few occassions. Perhaps not as diplomatic as a Jedi but sometimes a blaster pinned to the throat and a few broken bones can get the job done. He'll take on any jobs that could hurt the Hutts, Empire be damned. He has no viewpoint about the ongoing war, doing whatever it takes to further his own goals. He is a man with nothing left to lose and even if he could turn himself around, he doesn't believe he deserves any of it. The further he distances himself from people, the better.
A veteran at the age of 35, he knows his way in and out of the galaxy and is genre savvy enough to out-wit even the deadliest of foes. His piloting skills are above average, but enough for his line of work. He prefers his LPA NN-14 blaster but can and will use more destructive weapons- be it a rocket launcher or the environment itself. Has a particular fascination with heatblades (especially when used on a screaming Hutt.).
>>79117281
yeah
just your average cuddly cyclops monster
hmm.
Hey I kind of want to draw some of these. I've got a page to finish pencilling but once I'm done with that I'll do some quick sketches. Requests?
>>79118155
someone already did mine over here >>79114635
, but you can feel free to take a crack at her if you want to too
>>79118155
>>79116042
Sounds interesting
aaaaaaaaaawe shiiit, my favorite type of threads!
I posted a long ass time ago with another one of my drill gals... I still don't what to do with them.
I slightly have background stories for them, I for sure want them to be demons or some type of devils?
I want to work on them with two of my chums but they're being big bastards.
>>79113440
May I draw your cuite ass character anon?
>>79118577
Also here is my other drill character.
>>79116148
She's adorable. Or he. Either way I want to hug them.
>>79116292
Ah, I see it now, sorry it was more the lack of coloring that threw me. Sounds interesting. So London is rebuilt but the rest of England isn't?
[Desire to know more intensifies]
>>79117308
Interesting, feels mildly typical but that's just star wars, isn't it?
Though, is there a reason he hasn't gotten cybernetics? I mean in both old and new EU, we've seen people with worse injuries pick things up with some cybernetic implants.
>>79118577
>>79118594
I know I liked hairdrills, I never knew I liked it this much. Godspeed on your drillgirls, anon.
>>79118594
I think that anon is sleeping.
>>79118622
Thank you, I have another drill chara but she's a doodle on my work notes, I might post her if people are interested.
>>79118626
....they'll wake up to a pleasant surprise.
>>79118752
we are interested, trust me.
secretary buggirl
>>79118155
I drew >>79099895
>>79101987
>>79107646
But I know these threads prefer waifus.
>>79118822
I'll upload when I awake, hopefully this thread will still be up by then
>>79119158
IS NICE
This is my OC Bonertard, the Boner Retard.
He loves chillin at the comic store, snackin on mac n' cheese and hanging with his buds.
Don't make fun.
first time doing one of these threads so forgive me.
Girl on the left is a mad scientist airship captain who flies through the sky with her Frankensteinian crew through storms to power her experiments
Guy on the left is an elderly assassin turned hired gun who is all about getting paid and doing his job. Carries a long walking staff that ends up being part of a sniper rifle. The other parts of which he carries around his body but they're so customized and strange looking they just look like odd baubles to the naked eye.
They work together in a crew of about 9 people to get revenge on some old bastards and rebuild yggdrasil
This is the alchemist. He lives in a small village that he is trying to save from a prophetic calamity that will wipe them out. He is the primary antagonist.
>>79119014
Nothing wrong with waifus. I love drawing 'em, to be honest. Easy as fuck, and relaxing.
>>79118186
Little rushed, hope that's ok.
>>79118221
I couldn't really get a feel of him, sorry man.
>>79118577
Holy shit. I love her.
>>79119615
Oh, he looks so sweet.
Goodnight, /co/.
>>79119386
ebin :DD
>>79119434
Loving both of these, especially the captain. I also really like your artstyle.
Maybe put something at the bottom-end of the sniper tube, a big concern of weapons maintenance is stuff not getting in that tube so seeing it exposed like that bothers me.
>>79119615
Looks pretty boring but you seem to be purposely doing that. He's the blends-in-the-crowd type and that can be scary for a villain. Paint me interested in reading your comic when you publish it.
>>79119702
that's a very good point about the barrel :Vc
I could just wrap it up in cloth/ leather that he pulls aside/off for when it's gotime
>>79119725
In WWII they used to put condoms over their barrels to keep the saltwater out, no joke.
>>79119666
this is >>79102827 here, all I have to say is holy shit, awesome job.
>>79119754
that's fuckin metal
>>79119754
Now that's what I call gun safety!
>>79119434
This sounds fantastic. Really digging the art too. A lot. Where can I see more?
>>79099569
A dank boy hero who is too pure for this world
>>79121161
I dig the rapier, what's with is face though? Does he have a snout or a human nose?
>>79120952
so that's all the oc /co/ has? I know you guys are holding out on me don't be shy.
Dear Anon I drew this for. I know you're out there somewhere and it's a tragedy the story concept thread died before I delivered.
>>79121887
>durr
>>79121860
So I was plotting out a concept a while ago about coolness.
Specifically the philosophy of cool and what I mean to be cool, or what TRUE cool is. I thought about it for a long time because I wanted to make a series about the nature of cool.
The idea being that the characters would be powered simply by being cool, cool being a use-able and measurable resource, like natural mana in a fantasy setting.
I like really campy stories and upbeat comedy so the idea really appealed to me.
Started making characters based around troupes used to signify the coolest of characters
I.e: Bad-ass, smooth, classy, etc
These first two are Captain Handsome and a currently unnamed Scary guy. Captain Handsome is the representation of total confidence, which is the most common aspect of cool. He's a rock of smug hope. His powers are all about flashy big lights and silly poses.
The scary guy is based on the classic troupe of: Born evil but chooses to be good/using my dark powers to help people.
Bad guys tend to be cooler than good guys, people like anti heroes and whatnot. And it's always super fucking cool to watch the dark overlord go all out and wreck someone with his evil magic. He dresses like a TV show host to try and be less scary but always comes of as creepy. He even has a stand up set that's just sad to listen to because all the jokes end really morbidly because he don'st get humor.
>>79122149
These two are the concepts of Elegance and Bad-ass.
Elegance is the sleepy girl, her ice powers let her drift around and float, forming beautiful ice sculptures to attack people. She's lankier than I've drawn her here, I wanted her long limbs and hair to flow when to flies around and summons winds. She's also supposed to be chill, a horrible pun I know. Relaxed and such.
The second character is Bad-ass. They're tough as shit, and are the kind of person that tanks a punch to the face and keeps talking because your punches are weak shit to them. Naturally they ride a motorbike, which they can pick up and turn into a huge petrol bursting giant mace thing that belongs on a metal album cover.
They cover most of their body because naturally they've been though a lot and have scars due to their dark and mysterious past.
They also turn out to be a cyborg, mostly rebuilt after a huge crash.
>>79116292
>>79118601
Yeah, essentially. England and its key cities, London and such(idk the others), are in pretty well conditions. London is overseen by the queen while the key cities are ruled by dukes and such, I don't know much about the British hierarchy and status'.
>>79122304
>>79122149
That's pretty great actually. Kinda reminds me of Kill la Kill's nudity power. Fun roster and fun concept.
If you have any more of these guys or just their concept, please share them.
Personally I want to see Stealth-ass and Suave-ass. Maybe Wise-ass too (as in has much life experience and does the right thing and knows what to do, not book-smart know-it-all).
I am Not an Artist. i am an Idea Man. and i got an Idea for a OC. was wondering if anybody be willing to Draw Her.
She has
1.) This Hair
2.) This Body and skin
3.) Outfit Similar to this.
Please and Thank you.
I posted this before a while back.
Det. S. Cary Crowe, and Det. Tim Woodman of E.C.P.D.(Emerald City Police Department).
They are major crimes detectives in a 70's styled Detroit-esque Emerald City.
Magic soldier chick working for a dictatorship.
>>79122425
What does she do aside from look like that?
>>79119434
This is some good art right here. Reminds me of Yoji Shinkawa's work.
>>79121896
Oh, is that the girl who could summon the God Ra but the big bad was an atheist who could negate gods' presence?
Good shit.
>>79122534
The arms are too small. Entire torso looks weird. Legs look alright.
>>79122634
Really? Everything checked out when I was double checking the measurements.
>>79122578
She's a Drifter. No Memory of her past. all she has to go by is an old Book with a name written into the back
"Abigail" taking the name as her own she Travels to find her past. and hopefully a future.
She Does have Powers such as Flight. and "Combat Merging" which is the Ability to Infuse the Elements into your fighting Style. over time she also learns how to fire a Green Beam out of her hands that can do some damage.
>>79122534
>>79122675
>>79122634
Yeah I agree her hands are too small.
What helps me is to think of the football penalty kick. Most humans can cover their groin with their arms bent, she on the other hand can only cover it with her arm outstretched.
>>79122634
>>79122768
Actually, it mightn't be the proportions I messed up, besides the small hands, but the uniform. The material sags too much at the crotch.
Cheers dudes, either way I'll fix it next time.
>>79122369
Hey thanks dude, I'll add your descriptions of cool to my list. If you've got any more It'd be great to add those too.
So this is my favorite character, Fluffy Bunny.
She's an ordinary bunny rabbit wearing the all powerful sunglasses of pure cool. She's basically the avatar of coolness, or a walking rule-of-cool.
She's a mentor and guide figure, mostly personifying Chill-cool, helping others learn about the nature of their cool and helping them become better and cooler people. She also tries constantly to convert bad guys and help people.
Her flaws are over thinking cool and morality and letting herself suffer any time it could possibly help someone else learn and improve as a person. Also if you take her glasses off she turns into an ordinary and useless bunny rabbit.
>>79100282
Don't listen to >>79100746 I like the name Rococo Feathersworth it sound catchy, memorable, and click well.
>>79100975
Kill yourself. Wait, I don't want your death on my hands. Simply leave and take that to Tumblr. Hell, email it the creator of Steven Universe; she may offer you a spot as a storyboardist.
>>79122675
Yeah the arms are about one hands length too short.
I get that her right arm is foreshortened due to perspective but it's also too foreshortened and you've shrunk it. Left foot's a bit off too.
Minor things anon, you'll get it next time. Try drawing a rough skeleton, I find it helps proportions.
Don't die on us thread.
>>79122814
We have these types of threads all the time on /co/. /ic/ is a lot more brutal about critique, this is a bit more friendly.
>>79118601
He does have cybernetics [Albeit hidden in his armoured left arm and you can see part of his skull was replaced with something metal.] Certain parts couldn't be replaced however so Kaine had to stick with bandaging most of his ugly mug up. He has a cybernetic eye that he only uses as a last resort (it fires plasma.).
Kaine's backstory does sound typical at first, but all synopsis' are like that when the full details can't be revealed... yet.
>>79124596
i like the look of her. what's her story?
>>79125074
A foreigner from the religious north, Katherine Katz Tujor is the current and longest running girlfriend of the city's baronet. Before they met, Katherine was doing lots of jobs(nursing, construction worker, pilot, etc.) around the city to keep up with her apartment bills. But then she met the baronet at a museum exhibition, and developed a steady relationship from there. Katherine doesn't worry as much about finances anymore now that her boyfriend can help her get on her feet.
I have a digital render of her, but its looking quite ugly and I don't understand why.
>>79125534
Looks Nice. a Real Jill of all Trades.
>>79119666
oh wow those all look cool! Thanks satan
>>79122503
Would watch this
>>79122810
fucking A
I love everything about this story and I haven't even read it yet. Have you decided on a name for the story yet? I want to add it to my RSS already. It sounds so much fuckign fun.
Some other types of cool are:
Hero-cool, devoted to the cause and fighting for what's right without question or pause and shit.
Mastermind-cool, having long-ass plans for everything and manipulating others to be his pawns so he can pull off super elaborate schemes.
Sexy-cool, might be a bit overplayed but still.
Neutral-cool, balance and shit
that's all I can think of for now.
>>79121122
hey thanks! you can follow my stuff over at Jawsart.tumblr.com
>>79122594
thank you as well sir!
the style is a little bit of my own thrown in with the bits I love about a fella I follow on tumblr at O11.Tumblr.com if you guys dig even an ounce of my stuff his stuff is fuckin ridiculous and he's a super fuckin rad dude in general.
>>79126995
What does he mean by 'MACEDONIA', is he one of those guys that call the FYROM that? Because that explains why he's a faggot.
>>79127372
u wot m8?
>tfw your character isn't interesting.
>>79104165
A challenger appears
>>79128552
beautiful.
here's a lil GIF animation of my character, hep!
>>79118834
cutie!!
>>79119666
AWESOME AS USUAL >:^ )
>>79128910
I want more of this. What are they?
>>79128067
Hey man every character is interesting. Even the background npc's are interesting. Hell even this >>79100975 unholy abomination is interesting. Please share it with us, I know I would like to see it.
>>79128910
I dig them a lot, but I feel like you could add a couple more frames of holding between loops. I can't really make out the entire design before the loop starts again if that makes sense?
Hey, guys. I'm drawing a small crowd scene for a comic today and I'd like to shove some of your OCs in it. I mostly need monsters, but humans are good too. They'd be tourists in the background while the main shit is going on. I guess they also have to be kind of kid-friendly. Any takers?
>>79129559
Would a Twi'lek and her adopted human son be ok?
also pardon the face i got a better Reference of her included.
>>79129559
What is your comic about?
>>79129559
helly yeah!! is this dude-o ok?
>>79129340
thank you! hep is...a...fuzzball? thing? monster? yeah!
>>79129378
yeah! that's what my friend said as well, thanks for confirming it! i'll work on it!
>>79129559
I don't draw a lot of creatures per se, but would moth people count?
>>79129559
Hey! Add my guy! It's this >>79102154 fella, I'm redrawing him right now but he's still pretty much the same.
>>79129559
Could you add >>79104770 ? If you don't mind, that is.
>>79099895
he cute
>>79106454
That slug-lady's bottom is super confusing--is it like little robot legs?
>>79116148
Also cute. Do they have a backstory?
>>79129559
Its a bit late for requests probably, but could you add >>79101640 any of these two characters, please?
bumpan
>>79131616
Bump with a cute cat girl?
>>79131647
>>79131647
NICE!!!
i like the colors!
>>79121896
>so jojo's bizarre adventure with gods as stands?
>>79099569
>tfw id like to try drawing my ideas but I'm to embarrassed to try
>>79132448
Just do it anon. If you haven't drawn a lot before it will most definitely suck but sucky drawings are just as fun as good ones. The key is to draw something and not erase/tear it up because it sucks, because it will but you have to learn to embrace the suck. Not saying you shouldn't want to get better but don't see your sucky drawings as steps towards a destination (good drawings), every drawing is a destination.
Go draw it and love it with all its shityness and then post it here too. I can't guarantee that other people wont shit on it but done is better than perfect.
>>79118594
sure go for it!
Not sure if this counts exactly as an OC but I got the inspiration to design him after listening a song with the same name below, and I really liked his design. Every single time I listen to this song I think of this guy singing it. Sorry for the lack of a drawing tablet, btw.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KEZ1sFtQru4
I've got this concept, but no real characters yet.
>>79116042
Somewhat of an improvement. What do y'all think?
>>79122149
>>79122304
>>79122810
Dude, this concept sounds amazing! Are you planning of doing a comic of it, I'd read the hell out of it and, btw, I love your designs.
Do you haveTwitter, Tumblr, anything?
>>79134852
If you want to go for a more military style, capeless is fine. If you're trying to evoke Western/knightly, I'd say leave it (I personally like it)
>>79134962
Thanks, I like the cape too
Heres a little something I have been screwing around with, shes a human that was experimented with alien DNA.
>>79115979
>>79115998
>>79116024
Oh wow, oddly this reminds me a LOT to an OC of mine, I really like more the idea of a plug than the screen one. I'd love to see any more art from you, do you have any blog or something?
>>79130262
>That slug-lady's bottom is super confusing--is it like little robot legs?
yeah. they're attatched to her hips on a belt.
>>79129657
It's not my comic.
>>79129559
Shit, I got so many requests and I can't fit them all in the panels I needed them for, sorry, guys. I'll make it up to you one day.
>>79136242
can you post the page when you're done? we'd love to see it!
>>79135886http://nickypickle.tumblr.com/tagged/myart
unfortunately I am a shit who doesn't update at months for a time or even upload art constantly so much like most others do due to constant work load on my angle. so its more like a small portfolio storage as of now.
and generally cartooning is new to me, so form and OC's are in limited supply at the moment
>>79126222
Thanks again buddy. I'll add those to the list.
Yeah the current filler name is 'Really Cool People'. I've also considered 'Cool Incorporated' since they're supposed to all live in a big building where they respond to events Justice league style.
>>79134872
Hey thanks.
The plan is to make it into a game (you're the new guy and half the Cool people get brainwashed into thinking you're the bad guy and you have to beat them back to they're senses) but then make comics about it as a follow up for fun.
I was planning to make it a comic before I got interested in making a game and realized how perfectly the setting and characters could be used as a game concept.
As for blogs I'm this guy:http://sketchedatrocities.tumblr.com/post/122226318826/do-you-have-something-like-another-account-where. and the two links there are my other blogs.
I won't be making anything new for a while, since I'm doing really huge project. But I definitely will get round to it eventually.
>>79138296
Not that guy, but I also think the concept is very interesting. Also very nice that you want to do a game with it, I'll keep a eye on it too.
>>79099569
I changed the leader of my fan gem team. from the cyclops cinnabar to the motherly quartz agate. crit much appreciated
really matters if my OC isn't /co/ related ?
>>79139920
Really love the orange-pink one. Jade is good too (if a bit stereotypical) though her face seems a bit off to me, not sure why.
>>79140621
the orange pink one is the newest designed gem, Agate. I think what the problem with jade that you see is the position of her eyes, they're very low on the face where the nose goes up into the forehead.
>>79132684
whats a good drawfag program?
>>79141907
Asks /ic/.
not a OC thread.
>>79140394
No, is ok. Show it! :)
>>79141907
This>>79142064
but a good one I use is krita.
Do you have room for Shinypants Sageboots?
>>79107646
Literally Kratos
Literally
>>79112632
Cool!
What are their names?
Off-topic: But, What kind of voices do you hear when you see some of these oc's?
And don't do your own OC. That is lazy.
>>79128067
I know dem feels anon, it seems to happen to me all the time ._.
>>79143619
This guy sounds like Danny DeVito to me >>79129671
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8e0NLxQJ55Y
>>79142771
2/4
>>79144098
3/4
Lazy OP girl inbound
>all these OCs
>all these stories that could be great
>only 1 - 0.5% of them will ever get published or made into something
>>79144228
4/4
I got these guys.
Ths picture is from a few months ago, so they don't look exactly like this now.
I don't really feel like explaining each one, but if you guys want me to, I will.
For an animation set to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JhkIRzZsZvw
It started with one of those fantastical scenes of a night sky, the kind with multiple fluorescent-colored planets, and then panned down to a profile view of a figure sitting on a small hill, which was reflected in a lake directly below it. As the bass drops at 0:11, the figure, but not the reflection, would stand up and start to stretch. The reflection would then follow, slightly more lazily, and at 0:24, they'd start to run simultaneously, as if the reflection was just a reflection again. Then it would go into a whole sequence of views playing with the space that the figures occupy, eventually revealing the male and female in pic related; like, the line separating the two would go slanted, and the figures would scale so how much space their side had. Or we'd change our perspective on one to a back profile and mirror it on the other with a front profile. Whatever they did, it would be mirrored in some with with the other.
At some point, it would become clear that they running/fighting their way through some sort of abstract gauntlet to get to each other, and the song would end with the barrier between them disappearing and the picture cutting out just as they reach towards each other and juuuust almost touch hands (Hitchcock Dolly Zoom-style).
Their designs were supposed to play with masculine/femininedualitywith the girl wearing a large loose shirt and a boyish haircut, and the guy wearing a form-fitting jumpsuit and eyeshadow/mascara. Color scheme was neon green, black, and white. Their names were Para (female) and De (male).
>>79142771
>>79144098
>>79144282
reminds me of super manly anime like fist of the north star
>>79144236
I ain't lettin shit stop me anon. As of right now, I'm writing my shit out in book form first, while adding illustrations (once I get some more finalized designs and shit)
It's kinda a horror-mystery themed thing, with dramatic shifts of tone between funny stuff to life-threatening circumstances/creepy scenes.
At first, I was worried it was looking like a gravity falls clone, but that's not a problem anymore. At least to me.do you want some more info about it?
pic related is an old poster thing I made for it a long ass time ago, hence how shitty it is. I plan on redoing it sometime soon.
>>79100738
hey thanks man, the shawl is an idea I haven't thought of. And I wasn't trying to go for a powersuit thing, it was just supposed to be like those flowey-shirt things that I've seen lots of moms wear, but I can see how you saw that suit thing.
>>79144236
This september I'll start to study animation, it's all about determination.
>>79144236
Im waiting on my shipment of statue kits for my OC. Ive I my got 10, and four of those are being gifted so I really onky have six. Ill try to recoup some of the cost by selling those. I wont break even, but the goal was to make something, not necessarily money.
>>79104165
Tch.
>>79144345
I tried to follow your webcomic from the beginning, but I couldn't get through the first pages because of the handwriting. I'll have to try it again sometime soon.
Tell me about the brown girl with the tail.
>>79145002
>I'm writing my shit out in book form first
Good. Get an outline down, and edit what you don't and do need for the story as time goes on.
>I was worried it was looking like a gravity falls clone, but that's not a problem anymore
I understand that feel and glad you got over it. A lot of my work is like something that could be identified as a ripoff of something else. We just need to remember that most works are derivative from something.
>>79145147
Good luck, anon.
>>79145150
>>79108299
Nice to see Attarra every now and again. Also, thats some surprising development with the whole statue situation you have there.
>>79144904
Well, I have been working on a little webcomic idea, has shonen kind of elements in it, this is a little WIP!
>>79145427
honestly, the funny thing is that my shit looks more derivative from a game now, more than anything else.
>>79145427
>>79099569
btw, best OC thread I've seen so far, let's keep it going.
Not sure what I'm doing with this guy, but I like him.
>>79099895
Hold up. This art style looks familiar.
Is your friend into bionicle at all?
>>79099569
I've got a couple of character designs for a story I was planning to do on a /tg/ quest thread. But the more i've been fleshing it out the more I kind of want to make it its own thing.
Definitely drawing inspiration from Starship Troopers, and should it be an interactive comic instead of a quest thread, maybe Prequel. But nothing set in stone beyond a bunch of art.
>>79145774
Here's an alien chick as well. Outfit isn't final, but I kind of generally like her features, weird horns, bisected mouth, weird hands and feet.
>>79145648n-no, I don't know what you're talking about!
>>79145592
>>79099569
MC's main antagonist with a pissed expression. Damn this was fun to draw.
>>79146036
It's a small world after all. Good to see your still doing your thing after all this time. Happy posting, drawfriend.
>>79146036
>>79146457
Also forgot:I won't tell the bullies at /biog/ I found you
>79145427
>thats some surprising development with the whole statue situation
Its been a long time coming. At least four years. Here is the prototype. Im going to have it professionally painted at some point when more cash frees up.
