First chapter in a miniseries I'm working on. Posted this the other day and got some good feedback, both positive and negative. Have a look!
http://saintcomix.com
>>77434450
What's the update schedule. And what's the miniseries about?
>>77435734
I don't have a regular schedule, I'll be put the next chapter out when its done, sometime in the next few weeks.
As for what it's about... "slice of life"?
>>77436178
I like the artstyle yet you're gunna have to be more descriptive then "slice of life" if you're assertive and have confidence then you can draw in some readers and viewership. It look promising. Keep it up, Ben.
>>77434450
People who vape are fucking douche nozzles
>>77434450
We get it, you vape.
>>77438366
I smoke cigarettes like a good boy.
>>77434450
Either storytime it, or fuck off with your links.
>>77438628
well, ok
The end.
I like the art style but I still have no idea what it's about and there's currently not a strong enough hook.
I think I'll keep reading just to see where it's going. But I don't think I can justify contributing to the Patreon until I know what this is supposed to be outside of "slice of life"
>>77439347
The series as a whole is about the same thing this chapter is about - these two slumming around their campus, being generally unpleasant, not liking anyone and not being liked in return. I know not everyone will be interested in a story like that, and since the premise is fairly limited I think the series will be 4-5 chapters at most before i feel ive explored it thoroughly and can call it finished and start a new series.
>>77439538
I guess I can actually get into that. With my expectations properly calibrated and everything. I was expecting something weird or supernatural to sneak up on the audience. But if it's just these two being unpleasant misanthropes who can't cope with the presence of others. Yeah I can dig.
Keep at it, man.
It's good, already got it bookmarked and looking forward to updates. I'm not good with being critical though, so that's all I can say.
>>77442572
my most optimistic estimate for the next update is the end of this month. but sometime next month is more likely.
