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This is my first YouTube video I would like to have opinions on it and advice on what to do to improve on my content
https://youtu.be/PGD2Yxp8jR8
I don't know if this is bait but you need to get a better microphone, I could barely hear your voice without turning up really loud, speak to be understood, articulate your point and don't leave big gaps of silence
>>17280594
It's not bait. I was generally looking for advice. Thank you. I will try to find one better.
I think if you're going to stick with playing games while discussing unrelated topics, you should at least be original and play different games. Not necessarily a different game every video but spice it up a bit; play games that aren't as popular. Watching somebody play Generic FPS 2016 That Every Other Content Creator is Playing gets boring.
Speak with more animation, don't be a monotone. You don't have to be poodiepie, but at least try to sound like you yourself give a fuck about what you are saying. Nothing turns people off of a video faster then hearing *bla bla bla*
Don't be a youtuber. There are more satisfying creative outlets other than the single fucking thing every kid your age is doing.
Sounds like you made this video while hiding under your bed sheets.
Speak like an adult. Get a microphone. Write a fucking script first. Make original content.
>>17280574
What video game is that? It looks fun as fuck.
>>17281416
Tower of Guns
>>17280621
That's what I was trying to do. The game I was playing isn't popular.
