I write a fantasy story. A protagonist has a crush on a Queen, but it is no relationship planned . Should I remove it? Currently it is rather unnecessary.
It's your story anon. If you can't make this decisions yourself, your story will fall apart
Read Le Morte d'Arthur
It's been done
>>16793121
>A protagonist has a crush on a Queen, but it is no relationship planned
Sounds alot like life... Sometimes crushes don't work out...
You writing fables, because that's a hell of a moral at the end of the story.
>>16793121
>Currently it is rather unnecessary.
then either plan ahead and make it necessary or remove it.
>>16793139
What for a "hell of a moral"?
