Unsurprisingly princess trainer gold is still 7 years away edition
This is a general about slave trainer games and the creation of games where you play as a male and dominate women. Discussion about games not being created here is also acceptable as long as it's related to the topic at hand(ie playing a male and dominating women).
If you're working on a game and want to list a pastebin here speak up please.
Major Versions of the game (BT is necessary for mods):Silver edition and Russian edition are the most active
Each of these is a standalone game, not a mod for any of the others. BASICALLY the links to download the games are in this pastebin.
http://pastebin.com/kA21ncJK
Maverick wrote a guide for scripting. Shows how to write/structure scenes for coders. Good for idea-guys & script-writers:
http://pastebin.com/gRyrGgDt
Info on character generators:
http://pastebin.com/CaevjctD
Links to other games
http://pastebin.com/7CHVFKWM
Rogue-like by Oni
http://pastebin.com/gLGH6Va0
Witch trainer dress up thing(back by popular demand)
http://stregac.github.io/trainers_image_library/
Korra Trainer/Breaking Bat/Incredibles trainer/Tifa trainer/Momcest trainer/Ben ten trainer/(Anon projects not related to Witch Trainer)
http://pastebin.com/K5NC3Tk1
Contact info for major contributors:
https://quip.com/I2f8AaPEEr0a
Report & ignore shitposters, people that scream proxyfag/samefag/waifu/waifufag, people that post beast and hamplanet attention whores
First for dear editor
>>326324
Fuck you first for loli
Goddamnit bats
>>326330
I cri everytime.
>>326322
I'll have made a game before gold is out
Pregnancy potion anon, post a link to g-doc with draft please, I have suggestions for you. If you make it view only, I can add comments with the additional diologue.
>>326336
It's going to be funny when it's released with only like four new scenes
>>326340
More like two
>>326323
From old thread
>>326356
Ahhhhhhhhhhh! Infinite recursion!!!!!!!
Why are you guys still posting Injustice art? It's finished. It will never be finished. SR7 got your dosh and ran. again.
at least it had some pics to post
Release new Russian mod in February - March
4 new girls, new main hero, new storyline (for all) new locations in Akabur style and etc
http://skazgames.com/forum/index.php
>>326501
screenshots pls senpai
>>326501
show faces pls
that way we can all moan about body choices later
>>326589
>>326609
What's the point of posting art nobody's using anymore?
>>326501
pics of new girls?
>>326617
Because it's funny, shill
>>326617
Same reason we still get to see Injustice pics
>>326629
How so?
>Working on adding the achievements, some additional chibis and some other things today. (Don't forget to thank DAHR for providing those). Still plenty of work ahead of me, so please don't jump to any conclusions. The game won't be able for release for a while... But we are definitely getting there :)
>>326628
but then you are no better than tropic and artguy. say stuff and no show
Anyone heard of this shit yet?
https://www.patreon.com/Pyorgara?ty=h
The game is free and finished.
>>326662
Aww man, he's NOT close? And he even had Dahr do a lot of shit so he couldnt work on his own game.
>>326662
I'll be surprised if the game comes out summer 2016. Its probably going to be released at winter 2017
>>326681
You mean Corrupted Priestess? We were talking about it before. Most of us seem to like it, but it doesn't have pictures. It's just a lot of (well written) text with some chibby on the side.
>>326681
and bad drawn
>>326681
It's a great game, but we deal in games with art. Even WT has at least 2 CGs, while CP has only chibis.
>>326672
Khan's much worse than those 2
He tried (and failed miserably) to force Tropic off
>>326718
Because tropics fun like eat shit.
He did this crap(his magnificent game with autism code) and attention whore.
I'm and my team don't like this, I'm only here because in this thread have many good artist.
>>326728
Least I made my own code ruski nigger, not tack onto already made shit
Aren't you ruski's supposed to be good at coding?
>>326681
>Text based porn games.
>>326744
>Are not you ruski is supposed to be good at coding?
Linear I know you aren't a smelly liar
please show towels
>>326744
Kek we rewrite 80 percent of code and in new game only 5 percent of old code.
10% our code = 150% idiot.
Screen kitchen, screen garage.
What a autism
>>326782
>>326793
Coвceм eбaнyлиcь нa cвoих бopдaх
>>326782
Rewriting trash doesn't make it good
Just replacing one snow niggers trash with another snow nigger
Sounds like you're mad you couldn't figure out how to streamline code first like me
Go home little snow nigga
Go be a family man
>>326790
Is this Ben 10 Trainer???
>>326795
Хвaтит их тpoлить. Coбepитecь и cдeлaйтe игpy вмecтe.
>>326798
Ben 10 Trainer is dead
>>326808
I wish it wasnt. Gwen is my favorite
>>326681
I liked it, but I wish there was more slutty priestess action for your own church. I'm fine with slutting around everywhere else, but I want to do it with people who know her. It just goes from varying degrees of robe tease to naked which is kinda boring. Even Princess Trainer had okay scenes with people finding out.
>>326800
Oни бecпoмoщны и внимaниeбляди, Moжeт дeлaeт интepecнyю вeщь нo нa oчeнь пpимитивнoм ypoвнe. Heлeпыe вcтaвки из дpyгих игp этo нe нaшe.
Mы paзвивaeм ceттинг вceлeннoй, a нe pacпыляeмcя нa пoeбyшки c Гepмиoнoй в paзных кocтюмaх.
Пocмoтpи хoтя бы нa тpoпикa, нихyя нe cдeлaл и бpызжeт cлюнями.
Boт их ты хoчeшь мнe в кoмaндy, нeт cпacибo.
Lol just be cause you got whooped by the English every time and were too scared to even fight the Americans doesn't mean you can't use their language rather than some dead archaic nonsense
I bet the 4 girls turn out to be
Hermione, tanned Hermione, Hermione with a new hat and daphne
And some people say Russians should be considered Westerners. At least moon runes look pretty.
>>326796
Kek in our mod played more 50K people.
You shit novel know only in this thread.
You make your personal shit, we do our mod(game with 50% art of Akabur)
Stay there only for artist.
Screen fucktropic
Showscreen
Screen furryfag
Showscreen
Nuff said.
>>326838
Did you know only two
>>326841
>Nuff said.
I don't think that was enough said. Please, keep going.
>>326841
>>326782
lel you guys are just stealing from silver at this point
>>326853
Kek we stilling?
Soon you see all
Our main audience are Russian we make English versions because this international language.
Shoutout to MO project.
We have different projects
>>326855
Autism progressed as I see.
You don't see
Things that do not look good together: 4-chan slang, and broken english.
Question : is there anything else than the same shitty small drawings with dress variations with a few terrible animations or did it turn into an actual game worth people time ?
>>326833
>Oни бecпoмoщны и внимaниeбляди,
Ho и вы нe oплoт мopaли.
>Moжeт дeлaeт интepecнyю вeщь нo нa oчeнь пpимитивнoм ypoвнe.
Paзвe oбщee дeлo нe oбъeдиняeт людeй?
>Heлeпыe вcтaвки из дpyгих игp этo нe нaшe.
Этo пoхвaльнo, нo ocoбo нoвoгo в пocлeднeй вepcии вaшeй игpы я нe yвидeл.
Ceнгaзeтa - oчepeднoй гpиндaн.
Гopa книг - нeнyжный гpиндaн.
Hoвыe квecты - 1.5 cтpoчeк c зaглyшкoй.
Oчeнь пoхвaльнo, чтo вы дeлaeтe хoть чтo тo, нo этo нe дeлaeт вac yникaльными и нe вoзвышaeт нaд ocтaльными.
>Mы paзвивaeм ceттинг вceлeннoй, a нe pacпыляeмcя нa пoeбyшки c Гepмиoнoй в paзных кocтюмaх.
Moжeт этo пoтoмy, чтo y вac нeт хyдoжникa? A y них oн ecть.
>Пocмoтpи хoтя бы нa тpoпикa, нихyя нe cдeлaл и бpызжeт cлюнями.
He oтcлeживaю вaшy пoдкoвepнyю игpy.
>Boт их ты хoчeшь мнe в кoмaндy, нeт cпacибo.
Кoмaндa и oбмeн oпытoм и инфopмaциeй - paзныe вeщи. Хoтя paбoтaй вы вмecтe, дeлo пoшлo бы быcтpee. Ho oни c тoбoй пpocтo нe yживyтcя.
Is there a download for the hermoine generator similar to the daphne one? or is the only one available the online one
>>326859
Don't see locked topics, and our peer on pornolab.net
As I said I don't give a fuck about this thread.
Better when idea guys shitposting.
Now benefit of tropic and shitstorm of random pictures.
Only MO do something, sad that artguy not active like in 2015
As I said Nuff Said autism squad.
All questions on email or on forum
>>326871
C пoдключeниeм, y нac 5 хyдoжникoв нa дaнный мoмeнт.
Bce yвидишь в мapтe и oцeнишь.
Bce ocтaльнoe pacпиcaнo нa фopyмe.
>>326873
>As I said I don't give a fuck about this thread.
Yeah that's why you keep coming back advertising your pile of vomit and keep shitposting.
All you fucking did was translate WT into a language nobody (including Akabur) gives a fuck about and add a bunch of unfinished crap on top of it
>>326876
A вoт этo интepecнo.
Пoдoждeм - пocмoтpим.
Question : is there anything else than the same shitty small drawings with dress variations with a few terrible animations or did it turn into an actual game worth people time ?
>>326681
>no incest
>>326908
what game retard
>>326908
A dog's life by gary plume
>>326914
isn't slave trainer supposed to be a "game" ?
>>326917
Then fucking say slave trainer you dipshit
How am I supposed to guess what the fuck you're talking about
And no
It's a 9gig pile of trash
>>326878
Stupid bite, asshole
>>326919
> slave trainer general thread
> OMG HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO KNOW WHAT UR TALKIN ABOUT
As amusing as your buttmaddery is why do people keep spamming these threads ? We don't need 5000 threads for such a shitty cheap waste of time init ?
THE RUSSIANS ARE INVADING
>>326928
Slave trainer is the name of the general
Slave maker is the game you're thinking of
And no one gives a shit about that game here
You have no idea what the fuck you're talking about
>>326934
I don't. But I'm wondering what the fuss is all about. Why are the people in this thread so mad. Why is that khan32 guy always complaining ? Wasnt he a contributor or something ?
>>326937
Deepest lore.
>>326937
Read the OP
Then ask questions
It's there for a reason
>>326939
> Report & ignore shitposters, people that scream proxyfag/samefag/waifu/waifufag, people that post beast and hamplanet attention whores
Obviously some people opposed to this thread but I'm wondering why. Isn't this basically free western porn for everyone ? What is there to get mad about ?
>>326950
just get out already, shitposter
Don't bite
There's no worm on the hook
>>326950
It's 4chan.
>>326957
fair enough
>>326681
Giving that fucker some dosh next month
>>326986
>knows how to code and write
>has a wife that knows how to draw
Fucker is living the dream.
tropic get the fuck out of here and go finish your game.
jesus christ
>>326996
call the cops faggot
I don't care
>>326994
>making $41.49 a month
The American dream is great isn't it...
>>327005
If he wanted more shekels he should have catered to the furries
It's the free market
>>327026
But then he would ruin any other chances he would get...
>>326857
I love you khan
>>327001
>No on my watch
>>327026
There are some things people can't live with.
I've been watching for 3dgspot to release this game of theirs for like over a year now, this is worse than akabur considering it was supposed to be out in august.
>>327037
The furries would take care of him
Forever
I hope to see soon your and your team's work soon Khan!!!
Thanks for everything and for eng version!
>>327214
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sockpuppet_%28Internet%29
>>327219
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=shitposter
Our TrainerFan
Who art in /stg/
Hallowed be thy game
Thy studio come
Thy demo be done
On Patreon as it is on your hard drive
Give us this day our bi-weekly update
And forgive us our shitposting
As we forgive tripfags who shitpost against us
And lead us not into Jewishness
But deliver us from Akabur
Amen
2016 is the year of shills isn't it
>>327239
I would see you dead, heathen
i think stg ran out of things to shitpost about
>>327257
We can always complain about bugs every week when Silver updates.
From sunsetriders7 patreon, concept art.
>>327276
Oh shit that actually looks good
Stepped up
>>327276
But... but... he can't make new stuff! We all agreed that he had run away with the money!
>>327276
Wow I have never been this unexcited about a game
I don't even care that the art is good
I just can't give a shit
It just keeps reminding me of roundscape
>>327276
Shit is already good enough for me
>>327276
Remind me which game this is
>>327336
It's the one that's going to be made 1/10th of what it is then dropped because of questionable reasons
>>326681
>Download rar
>CP.rar
>Open game
>CP.exe
Made me chuckle
>>327351
Hope you like the [spoiler]Party Van![/spoiler]
>>327308
>It just keeps reminding me of roundscape
How?
>>327308
Roundscape isn't even that bad, it just tries to do too many things at once and is mediocre at all of them.
>>327438
>Roundscape is furry
Still better than hypnotrainer.
>>327426
You'd have to be a shill to not see it
It's so fucking obvious
But of course you are a shill
>>327442
No
Furry always falls to the bottom of the list no matter what
I could make a game about fucking my dead brother and it'll still be better then a furry game
Furry is the lowest tier for the worst kind of people
>>327442
What the fuck are you on? Anything is better than furry. That's just a fact of life. Something is wrong with you.
>>327438
>I wouldn't be suprised if there's an orc girl next
And who would actually complain about that?
>>327519
Orcs are furry so...
>>327519
Some shitposter is always pushing the notion that demons and orcs are furry. Just ignore the tosser.
>>327538
Thanks for the tip, i wanted to sleep without getting mad today
>>327534
No fuck off retard
>>327519
We have some troll that claims things that aren't furry are furry to piss people off.
>>327565
Trees are usually in furry games
Coincidence? Trees confirmed for furry, you better not include trees in supermom or it's a furry game.
>>327570
Humans are often in furry games, supermom is a furry game we better remove it from the op.
>>327570
Or grass.
>>327534
I bet you call Star Trek furry because Kirk bangs green chicks.
>>327577
No shit. Anything with an animal nose or animal head like that are furry.
>>327582
The facts are that orcs are also in a lot of games that aren't furry.
>>327582
No one cares about your opinion furfag, you have humans and trees in your game. Supermom is furry.
>>327588
Hey retard. Something not furry in a furry game doesn't make it furry. How fucking stupid are you?
>>327588
So your plan is to be even stupidier than usual huh? So humans are furry right?
>>327592
I'm sorry! Are you mad that I use your own stupid argument against you? Must suck faggot. What is it like making a furry game?
>>327592
Considering you're misusing the word furry to shitpost right now. You can go fuck yourself I can't wait for the mods to ban you.
real life public favours
https://www.change.org/p/emma-watson-spend-one-week-in-a-calais-migrant-camp-for-feminism
Based mods. Get fucked retard.
hahahahahahahaha
>>327005
Daaaaamn, dude wasnt even getting 5$ before CP came out.
Guys if you want cash, release shit, Data suggests an 800% increase.
Tropic btfo for his stupidity like usual.
>>327605
That shitposting was getting boring anyway.
>>327608
Honest question, how do we know tropic is actually that retarded and it's not just someone trolling? (I still have no idea why Tropic doesn't use a tripcode)
>>327615
>(I still have no idea why Tropic doesn't use a tripcode)
>how do we know tropic is actually that retarded
We know he's that retarded because of the above.
>>327615
Because tropic's insane and to him constant namefagging is somehow better than sometimes tripfagging
>>327615
>how do we know
We don't: thet's just how things are with tropic.
>>327615
tropic says retarded shit all the time, and if he's dumb enough to let other people pretend to be him and say even more retarded shit. That only proves that tropic is the biggest retard to ever retard a retard.
>>327615
It was probably him. It seems like a opinion so fucking dumb that no rational human being would hold. Therefore it would be tropics actual opinion.
>>327617
He would have to use a new trip every time he's evading his bans so there's little to no reason to keep one
>>327627
Or he could just not do stupid shit to get him banned.
>>327615
I used to namefag all the time. One of the perks of namefagging is that if someone borrows your name, you can just pass it off as being somebody "trolling".
Does this count as namefagging?
>>327665
yes
Has any work at all been accomplished since moving to /aco/?
>>327669
We managed to get tropic banned a few times
>>327669
New art.
>>327665
It's the very definition of namefagging.
https://www.patreon.com/posts/4173737
korra trainer update
>>327801
Good to hear from him.
>>327801
My prayer was answered
Looking forward to it! I'll probably wait until it's more complete though
>>327801
Yay!
>>327607
Would a game based around beauty and the beast be considered furry?
>>327882
Yes.
>>327882
What a stupid question. He's got a complete animal face, yes.
>>327882
If Beast was involved in a sexual way, yes. Nice trick question, but nobody posts like Gaston.
>>327888
Gaston would be a perfect PC for a Disney trainer.
>>327890
Go to bed, Latissa.
Would a game based around little mermaid be considered fishy?
>>327890
Someone's making one in which he trains Belle but the art is pure shit.
https://mega.nz/#F!8NpHRCpQ!dg1GW2a2W_AOJGbrdQuaKw
korra trainer has something new and playable
>>327965
Is it worth downloading/playing yet?
>>328038
Nope
>>326469
Yes, when there's time. Sadly, there's never enough time.
Nigga you wanna see some name fagging?!
You got some
>>328074
G-get out of here, you damn Dinosaur. Nobody remembers who you are anymore.
[spoiler]We're gettin' the band back together?[/spoiler]
is the tifa trainer guy here?
>>328082
Come on, everybody knows Maverick died in that car crash.
Then he went to the after life, trained, walked the dragon road, and now he's back and better than ever.
It's Maverick's GHOST. Respect his pronouns.
Once upon a time, Heretic would have been the biggest joke in this general if not for the fact that nobody ever cared about or believed in him. I honestly have no idea why he still uses a trip when he's never done anything of real consequence. Then again, he posts so rarely that I get a little burst of nostalgia when he does, so I don't shitpost him for the oh so many and various reasons that I could use.
Now we have tropic, so the point is moot.
P.S. Anyone who believes that Maverick actually died in a car crash and that he cared so much about us that he managed to leave his trip with a friend to inform us is a gullible moron. That last part is what should really tip you off. Maverick straight up abandoned us because he couldn't hack it and then lied about it.
Not that I give a shit. Just saying.
>>328110
I thought that Maverick was 2 people? And that's why the friend knew the password?
Or was it just that the friend got it from him? I remember someone bringing this up when it happened and it being clarified
Did Patreon fix their code recently?
I can't use the workaround to get the attachment of a patron-only post
>>328142
Now maybe I'll finally stop getting five e-mails a month from fucking DogDomPhx.
>>328089
I lurk every now and I don't post too often. Still working hear and there on CGs.
So what's all in the new Korra Demo, an actual game or just more slideshows?
>>328164
They added a new slideshow and there are more buttons to press
It shows a skeleton at least
>>326684
Winter 2017 at the very earliest, though I'm rapidly losing interest so by then I'll have moved on by then so fuck it.
>>328154
You should update the blog every so often.
>>328187
This joke has come to haunt me.
>>328187
Shut the fuck up name
>>328219
This. Options best.
>>326501
In russian only? Or will there be an english translation?
>>328253
Why else would he post it here? He also posted on his own forum that it will be English in this time period a while back. Also he probably left the thread due to the massive amount of shitposters, mostly tropic.
Been one year. One long year since I posted WT for you all. Akabur is now making more than your average neurologist. He's making more than your average medical consultant.
And I don't think he's put out a single new piece of content since I originally leaked WT for you all. He still hasn't moved to Vancouver like he promised. Still not enrolled in that art school. Still pretending to live like a peasant in Russia.
I may hate the fucker, but hats off to him for being able to coast through life. Still, despite how much you faggits shitpost and argue, biting each other's tails, I'd take you shitlords over him any day. Here's to another year of /stg/ faggits.
How much time was there between the PT and the WT trainers? I feel like it took him less time to make WT than to make PT: Gold.
>>328455
and it's going to have even less content than wt is the funniest part
Anyone knows how to get the new ingredients for silver?
>>328443
When 1.5 came out he said that it would be the last version in EN. Thats why I asked.
But thanks.
>>328465
Explore the school.
>>328478
yeah, i know. But i can only find three different ones
>>328450
We love you too
>>327295
He did - he took money for Injustice, which he's running away from
I don't think anyone should deceive themselves about what Patreon is. It's donations and it always will be. If people want to pay Akabur 500k a month to produce nothing that's their choice, they can always cancel it.
I don't know why anyone would give him anything since it has been over a year without even a picture released but that's up to them. If you're giving money to anyone on there expecting something concrete for it, especially a completed game, then you're out of your mind.
I work in the games industry and making games is not fun and games, it's hard work. For small teams working in their free time or a single person to make a significant game in a matter of months is insane. Everyone should be happy that anyone puts time into making these games at all.
>>328581
If people want to throw money at undeserving people while praising them they shouldn't be allowed to make that choice because they are ruining both the world, the economy, and the very product they are "supporting", making the final product ultimately worse in every way due to how lenient everything is. You shouldn't need to praise someone for doing their fucking job, that's what they're getting money for. I hate the apologetic attitude of people. If something is shit, call it shit, don't dance around the issue while complimenting the creator of the shit on "how hard his job must be". If the creator takes offense he can by all means stop bothering and also stop getting paid, or so it should be anyway.
And we can all agree that furries are ruining the good name of orcs and demons
>>328622
Only for people stupid enough to associate orcs to furries.
Hey, tropic!
>>326872
I'm interested in this, too.
>>328641
there have been several over the year
don't know why the op started to omit them
google stregac, download the assets from his GitHub, open them using gimp, make a base Hermione, hair, eyes, mouth, tits etc save that as an xcf file, so it keeps the layers whenever you open it. copy the Hermione into a new window and click open as layers, then chose whatever clothes, hair or expressions you like and layer them over your base
Path of Kings Insider Update
I just want to provide you Insiders with a update as to what and where we are at the start of this week.
On Sunday Sunset and Myself had a four hour meeting in regards to development timelines, and design structure. I want to fill you in with a more detailed timeline we are striving for.
Jan: Having the intro (done), character selection (done), multiple saves (done) menus, and cut scenes complete.
We are working towards getting the art assets in for this month but this is conditional of time. The main city will be the largest and most comprehensive, and detailed picture Sunset has ever attempted to draw.
The intro cut-scenes will be in, but the art may be place holders. We are hoping to have the dialogue and writing 90% finished for these.
Internally we will have several prototypes built to flush out game mechanic ideas.
Feb: We want all major game mechanics in place, and functioning, all NPC characters to be chosen, allowing for writing to commence.
Mar: Potentially have all the writing finished for the demo release, and have the demo build 90% complete. Move to bi-weekly build updates on Patreon.
April: Full public release of demo (end of April), Patreon will be upwards of three weeks ahead in game play and assets at this point. Finalization of plot and writing main story lines at this point.
>>328695
May: Finishing of art assets, adding polish, addition of majority of side quests, balancing. Potentially 90% finished at the end of this month
June: bug fixing, continued art asset finishing, final animations added, all scenes in place. Game complete on Patreon platform.
July: Full public release.
Now these are goals and not hard fastened rules for us. We are designing the game around releasing the updates for you. Meaning that we hope moving into March that internally we are a week or two ahead of what you are playing. This will allow for every update to have content, and for you not to experience a bug bash type build. We hope that this will save countless hours during development. We will keep you all posted as far as setbacks, or progression goes as the weeks grow closer to the build release this month.
SmokeShank
The above Character concept is for a Guard Captain you will be able to
interact with. Every piece of armour and clothing will be removable.
>>328695
Roundscape 2 is looking great
>>328695
Are those nipples copypasted?
>>328450
He's released plenty of steams showing him drawing and new versions of BHB.
>>328709
Hello Mr.Jew
How do you do?
Wanna live stream how you eat spaghetti next or your new unboxing video of all the cool toys you bought with your Patreon money
>>328450
I tried talking to him to ask for tips for starting out with making games.
It went like this:
"Hi -hi. You busy? -Nope. -Could you give some tips for making games? Btw you rock
-"play".
Cant russians into talking unless they are monologues on youtube?
Feedback is welcome on dialogue and transitions
>>328695
I must say those guys are hard honest workers! Look how much planning and stuff they did since they were so sadly forced to abandon Injustice earlier in the month!
>>328784
I don't want to sound negative
But maybe you should get a real writer
>>328784
like the art and dialogue on the grope scene. just curious will you be replacing alert modes art from the other favors?
>>328784
what game is yours?
>>328802
>strip for me
>NO!
>but you're so pretty
>r-really :) ?
10/10 writing
>>328803
This
Usually I'm happy to go through dialogue on a new game but it was that level of belch
I had to skip through the rest
>>328803
That's not really a critique and that's not exactly how that part of the scene goes. Bear in mind this takes place after months of familiarity. Also, the idea is that she's a crazy horny teenager and it's overpowering her, which you have to suspend belief for a bit. It doesn't make for much of a mind break game if there's not some modicum of leeway.
pc "You have a beautiful body. It would be a shame for you to keep it hidden any longer."
pc_neutral
k "You really think so?"
k_lhappy
pc "Of course!"
pc_grin
k "You don't think I'm too...muscular?"
k_confused
pc "Absolutely not."
pc_grin
k "Eh…"
k_annoyed
pc "And wouldn't you rather take them off yourself?"
pc_neutral
k "Yeah…"
k_worried
k "(I guess it's not a big deal if he only looks…)"
k_pouting
k "Okay, I'll do it."
k_neutral
Go ahead and rewrite it if you think there's a better way to show off her corruption while effectively getting the scene from point A to point B. I'm all ears. The Reason options have always been a bitch to write because they're so sappy.
>>328831
Why did you put the scene here if it's exactly the same as the poster described
Just because he shortened it didn't make his statement less valid
Also you're the one who asked for critique
It's not out jobs to 're write it for you
Critique means having negative comments as well, and not just so people can tell you what a great Fucking job you did and suck your dick
Do you need a safe space trainerfan
>>328831
>Go ahead and rewrite it
Don't ask for opinions if you can't handle them.
$280 per month are more than enough for both an artist and a writer
>>328842
>>328845
A critique is more detailed than a 4 greentext lines long complaint and should be actually constructive. The bare minimum you could do is show a counter-example of the scene with "good" writing. You might also want to respond to my explanation if you want to be taken seriously.
You want to be negative, fine, but be constructive. I can't do much to solve the problem you have if all you do is trivialize what I've written into greentext and call it shit.
>>328854
Here's my critique, that's not how people talk and the way you wrote it makes it look like a 7th grader wrote a fan fiction
That's negative
If you don't agree with that statement that's your own fault
Want a counter example? Go play corrupting the princess and you'll see what good writing is
There isn't a way to solve the problem of bad writing
If it was good writing I would say it was good
If it's bad then it's bad
It's not like code where you can tell someone to do it like this or like that
If you don't like it
Don't ask for critique and live in your hug box where everyone tells you you're the best at everything
Good and bad is subjective, just make every scene twice as long without wasting time on fancy words and maybe a bit more corrupt, and my phallus is golden.
>>328831
I like it
I fucking hate that I can't draw
Start to code a game, build a working map, click on the Tavern, go to the Tavern, see nothing, see no sexy barmaid to be trained, cry internally, give up
>>328695
Can you tell us more about the game?
Is Roundscape worth playing? I constantly see people talking about it, but don't really know much about it aside from the fact that it's built in RPG maker
>>328982
perhaps you should start drawing instead of crying.
>>329009
"Hate that I can't draw"
why don't you draw?
moron
>>329005
He has some good scenes and a lot of bad ones. If you do decide to play it just use the cracked russian verison to max your level and gold, then turn on cheat engine to 5 times speed and rush through it.
>>329029
What are the differences between the cracked version and vanilla?
>>329035
once you get to the first verison you can find a chest that maxes your money and give you 99 potions of max level
>>328867
Almost
You're not quite there yet, though
Not substantial enough to pass
Keep working on it
C-
>>329015
drawing isn't some magic jedi power....
>>329042
>being this deaf to any criticism
Jesus Christ do you think everything you do is perfect or something?
>>329042
>it's not criticism unless it fits my definition
Maybe you should calm down trainerfan
