You know the drill, work on your smut!
I saw some discussion on the /aco/ weekend creation thread, and decided to give this a try.
The main distinction on here, is that you bring anything that you're working on, and you're not tied to anything like the webcomic thread, or the /aco/ creation thread. So if you're familiar with the regular /co/ "Batman" threads, you know how this goes.
>>173470
shouldn't that say "Quit masterbating"?
>>173505
If anything it would be "masturbating" not "masterbating"
I was hoping for one of these threads!!
Here's page 1 of a comic I did last night.
>>173802
And the WIP of page 2. In the first panel Ame will say "Yeah, you could say that."
I'll likely be streaming this to completion today.
>>173806
In the middle panel to the left, it looks like the dick is coming out of her hip. To fix it, you could just flip the legs so it's the right leg coming forward instead of the left. Good work so far. I really like your style
>>173812
You're totally right, thank you!!
Can't believe I missed that. I was drawing nonstop for hours last night, totally didn't see it.
Thanks for pointing it out, glad I got that feedback before finishing and posting the page!
And thanks!! Don't know how long this comic will be, aiming for ~10 pages... dunno if I'll get there, but I'll try!
>>173774
hahaha thanks for the kek
>>173774
That's the one the image I used for the last thread had.
Looks like my drawing was considered loli and someone deleted it. Anyway, here's a Rosalina I'm coloring.
>>174304
To be fair it really looked loli-ish. I guess that just comes with your style + a flat chest.
Anyway, I like your stuff, keep going!
>>174352
I agree. In fact that's why I keep fiddling around with her design: I don't want it to look loli, not my intention. Hope I'll figure something out. Glad you like, man. Thanks!
>>174080
>>174150
Page 2 done!
Thanks for the encouragement guys!!
>>174304
Niiiice line weight. Very sleek style, I love it!
Started my NSFW monstergirl blog just recently and I've been pumping out monster girls like a mad cunt. Anybody interested? I've got character bios and everything.
>>174567
Thanks a bunch, dude!
>>174628
I never saw her that way. You're right. That idea works for a short comic or something.
>>174650
And also, my side project My Arm Or Maiden, which is a spoof on hentai with really stupid as fuck plots.
>>173470
working on a fall out girl i guess, just need to shade her and shes done, m-aybe a background t but i doubt it
>>174821
fuck i can never roll a good trip code
>>174832
>namefagging
>>174833
Don't reply to bones.
>>174650
What's the blog? I couldn't find it.
>>174839
http://baeyo-baeyo.tumblr.com/
>>174821
shaded
>>174833
i know... but still...
>>174834
please dont bring that dumb meme here anon, its very childish, spammy and off topic
Another character I'm working on. Some cavegirl named Lucy.
>>174556
nice, keep your momentum up
Any critiques on this one before finishing it? Not so much on the drawings, none of these are finalized. Just thumbnail roughs.
Working on disney princess blowjobs. Rapunzel up next. Not terribly happy with facial resamblance so I'll have to work on that.
>>174856
I really like the way you drew her body. Very nice cartooning.
>>174887
Pffft, That is you incase?
No way! That is impossible.
>>174887
Oh my god I just spit my drink out
NICE
>>174887
yo IC that's lookin' real nice
how much drawing do you do a day, anyway?
Late halloween smut
>>173470
You can't make me
>>174912
Yeah, I'll get in on this late Halloween stuff too.
The original is on http://awmbh.deviantart.com/art/Witch-And-Familiar-Commission-3-Resize-570415683 but it's a monster file size for line art. You can go if you're really autistic about wanting to look at originals.
>>174887
Hey, man. I just wanna say that I was super impressed by the Elsa picture you did. The coloring and expression work on it was fantastic.
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Cartoons are green on paper, paper seem a deferent green to each and everybody but may not be may not all new.
I seen these western anime
American day
Family guy
South Park
Bobs burgers
And Rick and morty[best]
Suggestions:
archer
boondocks
Board is going wel
Any other sugestions /co/
Still new to drawing lewd but I'm trying my best
>>176235
I love your girls, and your dicks, Goaty.
Your Big Dixie, and J/aco/bi were lovely.
OC for this thread
Has it's flaws, but I'm really satisfied with how it turned out. First drawing I've really tried coloring.
>>176361
I know it may be weird to point this out first, but that hair is gorgeous. Both the draft and the design choice.
>>176091
What?
>>176308
Loving this, do you have any ass/anal pics to post? Thx in advance, amazing work
>>174887
daamn, post more?
>>176361
the right wrist looks broken either twist the forearm or have the hand going back
>>176478
Do you get what the purpose of the thread is?
>>176482
Better?
>>176513
better but it still looks like you have a front view of the forearm and have the wrist bending towards the bicep you should be seeing the side may be a bit of the back of the forearm and hand
>>176555
I see now! Thanks man, the radius and ulna really showed me what was up. Got a blog or anything?
>>174650
SlimeGirl Mallo here
My lewd loose perverted nerd girl.
>>176774
Also gross.
Yo, i'm an oil painter and Im trying to get into SAI,
I did these for the draw thread. I should be making my lines thinner right, at this point it looks like butt.
>>176781
Second
>>176784
Every toe looks like a big toe. Shrink the smaller ones.
>>176784
The left foot is positioned unnaturally based on the position of the rest of muffet's body. To help, you can to like a cross section of the leg and follow the direction the leg is going in. The foot is turned almost perpendicular to where it should be facing.
>>176784
HNNNG
Not dedicated to being a porn artist, but it's good practice. Sexy practice
>>174855
the anatomy and proportions are off especially on the shoulder rib cage lower back hips
>>174887
>Not terribly happy with facial resamblance so I'll have to work on that.
You mean you're trying to draw a face that doesn't resemble one of the three that you know?
>>177015
No need to be an ass.
>>176968
>>177008
Really though, that anon is right, don't reply to bones. In the regular /co/ threads, he'd just go "lol i don't really care" and shrug off any constrictive criticism, or gotten extremely defensive over it. Not worth anyone's time. It has happened before.
>>177028
>No need to be an ass.
I'm with you on this one, but there's also truth in that post. But yeah, chill and don't be an ass.
>>177052
i know just try to get him to do his i don't care i am to pro thing incase any one here has never run across him and thinks we are being unfair to him for no reason
>>176814
Bless your soul, anon! Thank you!
>>177079
Was that an attempt at a sentence? Is there a "Work on your Writing" thread?
>>177119
it is obviously a run on sentence
just fooling around with simple coloring for now since I just got a new tablet because the old one shite the bed
I only draw with pencil. Got a really old wacom but hate using it and can't git gud with PS or sai. :(
Here's a really old pinup I did. Have been working on a comic for ages following this character from slavery to gnolls in childhood to pit fighting teen then wandering barbarian adult.
Never get more than a couple of pages in before I lose interest. Then next time I pick it up I find my drawing style has changed and doesn't match what I've already done so I scrap it and end up redrawing the same shit over and over !
>>176311
Using Sai. It's pretty great.
You can do really amazing line art with the slow pen settings.
Pic a better example of the program ability but you can do a lot better than that
>>176476
Not really but I did this on a draw thread and it's got some booty.
can I get some feedback on it before I fuck it up further?
What I'm most concerned about is mostly the consistency of the coloring, not so much the anatomy.
Also I'm afraid the face is looking wrong but there's some stylization involved.
>>174650
>>177383
>>177389
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>>177399
>>177430
chief, I wouldn't know where to begin. I just draw naked ladies all day, every day. If i'm not at work, then that's what I do. That's all I can tell anybody. Just get out there and draw lewd shit all day.
>>177477
Okay so you're just here to advertise.
>>177490
Stop being a taint, dude. Post your art.
>>177523
I did
now what do you want? feedback?
>>177528
Not that anon, but that's generally how these threads work. You post what you've been WORKING on, in the hopes of people telling you what you might be doing wrong, what you might be doing right, shit like that.
>>177055
It's just the exposure he's got, look at anyone else and they're doing the same thing about faces.
He just happens to have a bigger body of work that's spread out far.
>>177292
ty man
So, these are two panels of a little comic that I have been working on featuring a rule 63 Sokka and Suki.
>>177292
>slow pen settings.
What would these be? My Sai is on other language, so I am not sure...
>>177694
her eyes look too divergent.
>>176795
>>176813
>>176814
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Fixed the leg, rendered the rest. I think this is done, i'm moving on. I'm gona try doing thinner lines for the next pic.
This is unspider version
And this is spider version
>>177804
she looked more secure with her leg bent now it looks like she is about to slip out of the straps
Welp, I've just got into drawing smut, I'd like to get some feed back on this sketch.
Fucking newbie here. Tear into me.
>>178546
Loomis, Loomis, Loomis. Check the sticky on /ic/. And do some studies of actual bodies.
I've posted this on /ic/ before, but I have made a more limited album with the resolution bumped up a bit.
Did these on /f/lockdraw and hope to do some more on there soon for some practice.
Thoughts?
http://imgur.com/a/bC9qA
>>178723
Well I get what you mean. More rendering on the thigh might've helped alleviate that issue.
Pic related is the reference material. What were your thoughts on the other images in the album though?
>>178805
its a very odd angle i belive its the thickness of the thigh and the lower leg that we are seeing head on instead of seeing the inside of the leg, as for the folder there is some proportion issues and some anatomy here and there noting some care in the construction phase and practice won't fix
>>178995
Ok, will give it another shot soon.
>>176619
I think it's ok now
>>176361
11/10 would fap to until my dick was dust.
>>178995
Just preliminary, but my what is now my third attempt I believe at this. I still have a lot to render. but you'll see some of the under lying work done.
>>174856
Luis, you coming back to Dumm anytime soon.
>>179380
feels like the top line of the right breast is climbing up a bit too high, i'd make it less concave
>>179513
better?
>>179520
Did a quick redline pointing out a couple things I noticed. Looking great overall, these are pretty nitpicky. Hope it helps regardless!
>>179541
I guess I need to go beyond the reference a bit then.
Did some update and practice on some skeletal foot work
>>175750
I'm getting a major Dean Yeagle vibe
>>179588
Looks great!! Much better. Impressed with your skeletal study, as well. Going above and beyond!
Hey guys! Any critiques on the most recent page before I clean it up and finalize it?
Either on the art or the dialogue.
>>179829
Try adding folds to the skin of the penis when it is more flaccid. Really put the emphasis that what's happening isn't arousing to the character. You don't need to be overly detailed though.
>>179044
pretty late but you could use a little shading on her forearm
and her ear seems to be a bit high on her head, but that could just be perspective messing with me
been a long while since i last drew something. i kinda got the shading and color right-ish but the're still no expression going on yet :/
>>180155
Your painting is a lot better than your drawing, if that makes any sense? You should probably put a lot more work into your lineart before you worry so much about colors. That said, your colors are really good.
>>180155
TUMBLR KNEES
>>179829
there's a tangent between the dick and the right leg it also cuts her off at the knees which is not desirable
New guy here, have started with Fun With a Pencil, since that's what everyone advises. First steps, woohoo. Also added a horrible hastily done tit, since I don't know if we're allowed to post explicitly non porn images.
Mermaids I did yesterday.
>>181264
Yeah. Purely by chance too. I know it takes time and all that. So how'd the comic deal go? Did you finish redrawing everything? If so, can I order a copy anywhere?
>>174887
Holy Shit, is it actually you?
>>181621 I was able to redraw about 20 pages, there's like 15 more to go.
First volume got published a few weeks ago. Only in spanish at the time :/ And I'm getting published among other fellow artists, so if you buy a copy, there's other comics inside. Think of it as a Mexican Shonen Jump or something. I'll give more details later, since a lot of good stuff happened over the course of nearly 10 weeks of Dumm inactivity.
>>175750
Awesome stuff, yo.
>>181663
Awesome man! I'm really happy for you! :D
I guess I'll chat on Tuesday so I don't chat the thread to its limit.
>>181654
I'll never get this level of dick-riding.
>>182680
Are you jealous...?
>>182684
Obviously.
>>182684
I feel like I would have to have a comparable skill to feel jealousy. That's just me, though.
No, I just don't get the level of prostrating people do. That's all.
>>182856
>I don't understand why people praise their heroes and attempt to engage with them
You might need to get out more.
