So new series called Prison Lab.
>MC gets bullied by some two faced bitch
>gets a letter inviting him to a prison game, he can pick anyone he wants and that person will be held captive for 1 month
>The MC can do anything he likes to the captive except killing her
>Cach week the captive gets a chance to guess his name, the captive wins if he guesses right
>winner gets 1 million yen
>MC picks the girl who bullied him obviouslyDoesn't even bother to strip her naked and rape her
How would you play this game?
>>143981748
typo, meant to say 10 million yen
>>143981748
And what if the captive doesn't guess correctly?
This is such obvious edgy wish fulfillment shit.
>>143981914
Welcome to fiction.
tumblr is 3 blocks down.
>>143981748
What's the downside? If your name gets gussed do you get sent to the shadow realm?
>>143982045
>>143981804
Read it and find out.
>>143982045
Either massive denbts or switching places.
>>143981748
why can't she just identify his voice
There's only 3 chapters so far right?
I don't really like the main character. I mean wish fulfillment, whatever, but why do they always have to make these guys the "muh secretly really smart and analytical."
>>143982045
The winner gets 10m yen and the loser has to pay for all the things you "purchase" during the game from both sides I believe.
>>143982205
he's using a voice changer.
>>143981748
Another one added to the filter list
>>143982205
Voice changer, you guys should really read it if you're so bloody curious. Or not, I don't really like it so far personally. The other lady is mildly interesting but that's about it, I'm seriously tired of this kind of protagonist, it's fucking everywhere.
>>143981966
>Welcome to fiction.
There's a clear difference between writing some loser protagonist who gets power-ups, harems, and gets praised by everyone, to a story clearly meant to ease the pain of some bullied person who couldn't retaliate against his bullies in real life.
>pick a good friend
>don't do anything to him
>won't ever guess me because I don't hate him
>win dolla and split it evenly
ezy game ezy life
>>143982350
and yet the latter is much better than mary sue harem MCs.
>>143982423
Just because it's better than other shit, doesn't make that turd any better.
>>143982361
What if the penalty for the loser is to be killed so that the organization can harvest your organs.
>>143982423
They're both pretty much just about as shitty as each other.
>>143982481
Why would they pay so much money for that when they could take someone off the streets?
Why not kill us both on the first day and harvest the organs?
>>143981748
Pretty damn shitty.
The author should reveal the organization is just taking advantage of people who think they fuck others for their own amusement without any drawback, like harvest the target and client organs or something.
Seriously, an organization that serves as some perfect table turner for poor tormed bully victims? Now that's far beyond wish fufillment, it's straight out revenge fanfiction turned into a manga.
>>143982554
Mary sue harem MCs are perfect with no or inconsequential flaws. Everything they do is perfect and girls will lust after his dick even if he pays them no or little attention.
MCs that get bullied and want revenge are actually belieavable characters with many flaws.
>>143982577
they are broadcasting the game as a television show to thousands of bored millionaires obviously.
>>143982764
Not when they're >>143982215
It's just jerking off the kind of people that want to think they're smarter than all their bullies.
To be honest, I prefer the kind of MC you described (marginally) because at least it doesn't feel pretentious and self important, just boring. It doesn't help that those MCs usually can have somewhat different personalities at least but these kinds are always the same fucking thing. Why can't we have an emotional impulsive wreck of a guy instead that gets in over his head with this opportunity at revenge after years of bullying and abuse?
>>143982764
>MCs that get bullied and want revenge are actually belieavable
Not in the way this manga portrays it.
Prison Lab starts out with some unbelievable organization that can select some random bully victim to make his wildest revenge fantasies come true; extremely convinient.
Revenge Classroom, while ridiculously edgy, is just a bullied girl and two more people going batshit crazy against their bullies, there's super organization backing them.
Posting untranslated raws of Volume 1
>>143982928
but the MC isn't smart and analytical at all. He's scared shitless of the girl even though he wants to break her.
>>143982969
*there's no
>>143983041
Yeah, that's why the organizer told him he's got a knack for this and is surprisingly good at the game and muh split personality. Totally.
>>143983027
does MC strip the girl naked at some point?
>>143983078
the organizer only said that before he realised the MC was in over his head. He changed his opinion of him after seeing the MC sweating after only talking to her for a few minutes.
>>143981966
Savage
>>143983332
No anon, reread it. MC talked to her for a few minutes, knees her, he comes out. Organizer compliments him, MC says he was sweating like shit but the organizer says shit about his split personality and how he still managed to knee her in the gut.
And again.
>muh split personality.
Look at the fucking cover, do you really not see where this is going? Come on anon, it's fucking obvious as shit.
>>143983479
Nice trolling. He doesn't knee her at all.
>>143983370
Savagely retarded
>>143981966
Fuck off nigg
>>143983479
God damn, you handed that down very nicely.
>>143983576
I can't tell if you're fucking with me or you didn't read all the chapters.
>>143981748
>Doesn't even bother to strip her naked and rape her
fucking droooopped
>>143983580
YOU CANT HANDLE THE TRUTH
>>143983628
that only happens after he walked out the first time drenched in sweat. chronological order.
Welp, art look shit.
Plot a damn typical wish fulfillment.
2/10 won't even bother.
Thanks whoever dumped this,
What's on the menu?
>>143981748
>he can pick anyone he wants and that person will be held captive for 1 month
>Cach week the captive gets a chance to guess his name, the captive wins if he guesses right
So what's stopping you from getting some random guy from the street and sitting with him in the room for a month and just wining the prize?
>>143983822
I literally don't even know what you're talking about anymore. Here, let me spoonfeed you the exact page he says "but you managed to knee her in the gut!" and saying he likes that version of his personality.
The page before, he tells the MC that the MC has a split personality and how he's calm and good at suppressing his emotions.
I literally don't even know how you can argue this.
>>143981748
>take al sharpton
>tatoo him white
>release
>>143981914
nips will eat it up
>>143983917
I don't know why you would waste time trying to make sense of it this.
Anyway let try to waste my time and make sense of this, the organization might select poor bastards whom they know will select a certain person who's making that poor bastard's life miserable or just holds a grudge; that might make the kidnapped have minimal chances of guessing whom the "master" is.
>>143984201
Why the prize then?
If they just pick up people with grudges who want to torture people then the 10M yen is superfluous
>>143984370
Anyone here or should I stop?
>>143984434
Go ahead. Just wish I knew japanese.
>>143984326
Assuming they're trying to be "fair" then probably to give the captive a form of possible compensation.
>"yeah you guessed his name but he already raped you, beat the shit out of you, pissed on you and took pictures, oh well you can go home now"
Continue please.
>>143984434
keep going or dump raw link
>>143984434
I've been here reading. Thanks for the dump, gave me a good feel of what the manga's like.
>>143984326
>Why the prize then?
Motivation of course.
What's better:
- Getting to make your grudge suffer
- Getting to make your grudge suffer and get rich while at it.
>>143984555
>>143984503
Got it off of nyaa
>>143984475
>>143984495
>>143984562
You got it
Placing bets on the writer being bullied as a kid.
>>143983948
why are you talking about events that happened in chapter 3 when i am talking about events that happened in chapter 2?
think hard about it.
>>143983917
because the organization picks people who want to get revenge really really badly.
if he rapes her she can get pregnant and it can be retraced back to him :A
>>143984686
does MC rape the girl or not
>>143984716
He can always rape her in the ass
>>143984641
I don't know anon, you tell me. It's not in reverse chronological order if that's what you're implying. The scan you posted about the organizer doubting him was from literally the MC's first contact with the girl explaining the rules.
>>143984716
>not using condoms
>>143984755
No, but something does happen later on.
>>143983027
why did she mask off ?
she gonna lose
>>143984805
>not remembering the shape of his dick
It's like you didn't read any doujins.
>>143984818
Fuck, forgot to link>>143984766
>>143984818
What happens? My interest in this manga literally hinges on this question at this point.
>>143984800
But she poops from there.
>>143984800
But he will get shit on his dick
>>143984916
>>143984872
The girl who is torturing her boss. Also MC snaps.
>>143984970
She gets raped?
>>143984839
Cannot into moon, but I'd guess the guy is the boss of a relatively large company that can't realistically remember the name of everyone that ever worked for him.
Also nothing says you can't put your partner in a coma or incapable of speaking.
This game is flawed
Why didnt they guess from the gender and body shape of "master", its not like everyone is big guy wearing a mask, or fatty, or slimy
>>143985026
>>143985021
They fuck. Or at least it's implied. It's near the end of the volume so we'll have to wait until the next one to see if anything really happened.
>>143985072
>only fucking
welp.
What the fuck, I'm confused.
Guess I have to read from the start because raws are telling me nothing.
>>143984847
>not remembering the shape of a dick shaped condom
>>143985038
Not that guy, my moon is incomplete "furigana-help" only level, but I can tell the page goes like this.
- Tomiya-san
- Have you been a good boy?
- Yoshino....
So, he knows who's fucking him up, or that name is a fake one and it doesn't count, but anyway the guy clearly says a name.
>>143981748
>Doesn't even bother to strip her naked and rape her
And dropped. When I read edgy wish fulfillment bullshit I want it to go all the way.
how many pages are there,
>>143985492
>>143985477
All together, Volume 1 has 188 pages
>>143983370
UNATCO?
>>143981914
>>143981914
I know its fucking great
I don't usually say this, but this is some edgy shit.
>>143986599
Oh shit here it comes
>>143986657
It begins
>>143986754
Jesus.
>>143986690
>>143986754
>>143986785
That's actually pretty badass, I'm rooting for her instead now.
>>143984632
>Got it off of nyaa
I can't find it, is it under "Prison Lab" or another name?
>>143986754
Man this girl doesn't give up does she?
>>143986861
Same
>>143986880
Moonrunes you dumbfuck
>>143984800
Semen, or even precum can always be traced back to the person. Maybe not if he raped her only on the first day and didn't do anything for the whole remaining month, but he'd be better off not risking it.
>>143986959
Is he going to commence the cummies now?
>>143986996
Now he's lost it
>>143987049
>"Goodbye"
Oooh snap, girl you done fucked up now.
>>143987049
He knows he can kill
>>143987087
The truth lies beyond the gate.
>>143987087
Two page spread
>>143986959
>Why did I come here...?
>Because I want an apology...?
>Because I want Kirishima to regret everything...?
>>143986996
>I came here to throw away...
>myself and my past...
>To change myself...!
>Yes... the Eyama Aito dominated by Kirishima Aya
>No longer exists!
>No need to hide
>I don't need this anymore
Either he's going to beat her into a coma or he dun goofed.
What's with nips and organisations conducting elaborate kidnappings, torture, murder, fiscal crimes and such without any kind of consequences usually for the amusement of degenerate rich people.
>>143987220
[X] Beat into a coma
>>143987220
He's gonna slam her face against the floor or something isn't he
>>143987137
>>143987175
>crazed laughter
>that pose
>slicking his hair back
Why is this guy such a complete faggot
>>143987220
>chin
>>143987257
It teaches the children that it pays to be rich, so you better work hard!
>>143987312
Finally breaks her pinky
>>143986754
>>143986785
>>143986959
Hell yeah motherfucker.
>>143987404
If he gets to the hospital fast enough, he could get his finger reattached though full feeling in the finger might not always come back.
t. EMT
>Volume 1 ends withEyama claiming he killed the girl
>it ends right there
Well fuck you too author
>>143981748
wow this is garbage
>>143987453
The girl getting fucked up is kinda hot but the art isn't very good so it's wasted potential IMO
>>143987358
That's it? A broken pinky?
If i was the MC, this is what i would do :
-Blindfold her
>Strip her naked
>Don't respond except to explain the rules to her
>chain her to some kind of sybian machine with vibrating dildos in her pussy and ass
>put a high speed vibrator on her clit
>vibrators on her nipples
After the first hour she will be in so much pain and pleasure that she won't be able to think straight and guess who i am.
>>143986964
>what are condoms
This looks like garbage
>>143987265
dunked
>>143987535
Apparently he kills her also
>>143987706
benis in bagina :-DDDDD
>>143987623
There's been a lot of manga like this lately
>MC is a schmuck with a lousy life
>there's a crazy "death game" where he gets to A) wreck shit in the apocalypse or B) get revenge on everyone who treated him badly
Japan wants the the ryonafags and /r9k/ audience
Or whatever the 2ch equivalent of /r9k/ is
>>143987706
>>143987748
I wouldnt get too close to this woman, you might end up as her prisoner and we saw how that goes.
>>143987358
gottem
>>143987775
>>143987785
>You're cute Aito-kun
>I want to imprison you
Bingo
>>143987822
Forgot to mention that this is another 2 pager
>>143981748
High level cringe
>>143987953
And that's it. Got a few more pages that are credits, character sheets, etc.
What I'm really curious about is what MC did to make the bully girl hate him so much.
>>143987998
ty anon
>>143987998
>turned her down
>was just a super easy target
>intervened on behalf of another bullying victim
>no particular reason
Take your pick I guess
Kinda sad that she had family issues and was probably bullying to vent
Not that it excuses her of course, but still
>>143981748
blind her
Pierce her ear drums
Wear big gloves
there I win the game
Thanks for the dump
>>143987998
Maybe he killed the chick or something but then he wouldn't say "partner".
Don't know why he would try to trick them.
>>143987998
>"Ummm... Im sorry but. I... killed my "partner"..."
Huh he killed her that fast?
This is written on the same level as a kids who write about killing their parents because they didn't buy them something or took something from them.
>>143988074
It only says partner in Katakanas and in Kanji the Captivity partner
>>143988123
And last page
>>143988074
>>143988085
He probably did it in a really drawn-out way
OR
He did say he wanted to cause maximum suffering, so maybe he drags her beaten ass to her where her sick mother is hospitalized and rapes her in front of the mom or something
you are suddenly given this premise /a/
how do you fix it?
>>143988169
#2 i like how you think here.
But i would guess that any witnesses would be a problem. I do hope he made her suffer properly instead of something like choking her to death while raping her.
I think the girl is still alive but beaten bad at this point. I'm guessing next would be explaining what the girl did to him or something
>>143988227
Multiply edge 100 times and add boobs.
10/10
>>143988227
Add sex/rape.
>>143988243
>i like how you think here
Just an educated guess because these kinds of manga are fairly predictable and similar to each other
>>143988227
Hatefuck rape all day erry day
Mindbreak her into a drooling mess that begs for the cock
Get my money
Leave
I'm not very creative
>>143981748
>How would you play this game?
pick my friend as the captive, explain the deal and we share the money
>>143986754
That fucking bitch
There is only one way to deal with those shitheads
http://youtu.be/rT-8yFCsBWQ
>>143986861
>>143986880
>supporting a niggress
>>143988931
She's cool though.
the only type of person that could unironically find the protag cool can't be older than 18
>>143988931
There you go >>>/pol/
>>143988672
>implying that a evil criminal organization wouldn't put in penalties to discourage that
Even if there was no fine print, the loser has t pay the 10 million + expenses, so you effectively win jack shit.
>10 million
>¥
Wow, it's lunch money.
>>143982701
>going through all that trouble when you could kidnap both of them anyways and harvest them
maybe if they had some sort of gambling bin, or high paying spectators
>>143988227
Either go full edge, 1000 times worse than this or since the premise is already shit, go full comedy.
>LE EDGE
>LE EDGE
>XD
Stop saying its fucking edgy, its a fucking manga not real life, if the premise is doing whatever to a captured person then thats actually a good setting for aplotyou guys are so used to the vanilla shit you cant even wrap your head around this type of stuff, in the original berserk does anyone remember the gang rapes? I mean com on this shit isnt even close the gore or violence that was presented to us.. this is how great mangas start..
There is a difference between wanting to do it in real life vs reading it in a manga you dumb fucks are so related to the shit you read you cant even seperate yourselves from the ideas
>>143986690
>>143986754
>making the victim more likeable than MC
what's the point?
>>143989491
That's not why I'm calling it edgy anon. Edge isn't about how much gore there is, it's about the writing you retard. it's okay that you like it, you don't need to be insecure about it.
>>143989497
The MC is gonna die for sure.
>>143989574
I hope he dies and the bully girl replaces him, that'd be way more interesting
>>143989189
It's that kind of manga where everyone deserves a .45 in the head for being tryhard edges
>>143989258
Read the comments on the video, it might help you to change your opinion
>>143989491
>literally out of some bullied guy's edgy revenge fantasies
>"it's not edgy guys, this is how great mangas start!!"
toppest kek
>>143988227
Black comedy.
>>143981748
damn I wish this was longer.
>>143989563
>its about the writing
lol what?
> it's okay that you like it, you don't need to be insecure about it.
Nobody is insecure about it
if you are gonna call it edgy explain why, you dumb mofo you learn this in grade school
>>143989788
>letter inviting him to a prison game, he can pick anyone he wants and that person will be held captive for 1 month
>>143981748
>How would you play this game?
assuming theyd only let you pick someone you know (and hate) personally
>pick victim
>set up business- peers can come in do what they please for a fee
>hardly interact with them myself
>take a kidney and lung for black market
>+10mill yen at the end
>rich af
>>143989851
>lol
>9gag
>this post
>>143989851
Yes, edginess is about the writing and characterization.. Plenty of things people commonly consider edgy are not gory at all or nearly as gory as other works. See: Shadow the Hedgehog, the quintessential edge.
As for why it's edgy, people have said reasons why from the beginning to the end of this thread if you actually read it. Here, I'll help you out. Try this anon's post. >>143989788
Also, >9gag
Is this shit becoming a genre or something?
Who is the target audience?
>>143989943
>less than 100k usd
>rich as fuck
>>143986690
>>143986754
well that's what beta-kun gets for being beta. had he stuck his dick in her from the get go she probably would be all out of fight by now. Of course he's probably hung like a beta too, so expecting to beat her with the D is probably expecting too much.
>>143986690
>>143986754
>SHE SHOULD BE AHEGAOING BY NOW
>DOUJINS HAVE LIED TO ME
>>143990194
did you not read the rest of it?
>>143990096
>>143990161
>>143989491
>There is a difference between wanting to do it in real life vs reading it in a manga you dumb fucks are so related to the shit you read you cant even seperate yourselves from the ideas
>>143990241
>had he stuck his dick in her from the get go
In the cunny, that is
If he had tried to get her to suck his dick she might have bitten that off too
>>143990285
Who are you quoting, 9gag?
>>143990285
I don't think you understand what edge means. It has nothing to do with wanting or not wanting to do it in real life.
I don't know why I'm bothering trying to explain this to someone who visits 9gag though, honestly.
