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How would you fix the story
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Rewrite it from scratch.
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>>142935914
Get rid of the fucking OP kabaneri with laser beams and the Completely remove the shitty villain. Everything else is pretty good.
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>>142935914
I'd have Biba stay out until a second season. That's really all I'd change about Kabaneri to be honest.

>>142936024
I could agree, but those lasers were barely in one scene. It wasn't like everyone got those.
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What the fuck is up with with Sawano nowdays? What happened to this kind of music?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FRivqBxbHRs
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>>142936088
He always was a hack.
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Is it 13 or 26 episodes long?
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>>142936167
11
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>>142936076
All I needed was one laser to remove the show's grit and enter the stupid realm of unknown fantasy that the story is just not good at.
In short I know it happened so I know it is possible
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>>142935914
Show more armpits.
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>>142936167
12
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>>142935914
Make it about killing zombies and survival like the first few episodes.
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>>142935914
It needs more homo
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>>142936167
>I'm too stupid to google
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>>142935914
Better define the show's rules like just how much stronger are jet bullets or can kabane actually tear apart the iron trains if nothing is done to stop them.
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>>142935914
Remove Biba or just rewrite him entirely.
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>>142935914
They need to build bigger trains.
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What's there to fix? It's pretty simple and straightforward.
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I mean if they somehow make Biba not a faggot by giving him some valid motivations I'd say he has the potential to be a tolerable villain. Laser beams still need to go doe.
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I wouldn't make something that wants to be Attack on Titan so badly.
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>>142937593
They have so many different themes please learn to read between the lines and actually analyze shows.
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>>142937668
It's literally made by the exact same team.

Fuck off.
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>>142935914
Biba isn't flat out evil,just have him want to take over and change laws rather than wanting to tear down everything.
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>>142937740
same team= same themes
This is one of the stupidest things I have read on this board in a while
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>>142937740
Kill yourself retard
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Remove Biba entirely, make the next 12 episodes a longer term struggle to make it to civilization.

Double the amount of Mumei service.
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Focus it more on Mumei's feet.
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>>142937092
it would take much more resources and eventually unpractical anon
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the entire premise is flawed really
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>>142935914
Remove the entire Biba plotline. Remove fused colonies.
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>>142935914

Ask Nihei's daughter for advice
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>>142935914
Remove Biba. He never existed. Remove anything related to his retarded entourage except Mumei. Let the show be about fighting zombies.
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The same way to fix every show:

add a beach/onsen episode with crazy MC-hijinks trying to see the girls naked.
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>>142935914
>How would you fix the story

Remove Biba
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>>142935914
Remove BIBA and rewrite Mumei
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