A timid schoolgirl imagines owning the ideal keitai in her head, but one day, there is a connection; the phone rings in her head, and someone is on the line.
Hiro Kiyohara edition.
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...Did it find a way?
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Is this Keitai?
If it is I'm going to nuke this fucking thread with Spiderman
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I'd appreciate it if you swallowed cyanide instead.
>>139687577
It's discount Purple Qualia
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FINDS A WAY
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Stop posting this because it already found a way.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JcVGDV67L-ghttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o_rz1bluG_k
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Teacher is kinda hot.
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End of Chapter 1.
Anyone still reading?
>>139688517
Here to stay senpai
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Hooked, line and sinker
Is this real.
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What?What real?
>>139688517
>There's a way
Come on OP! Dont left us with a fucking cliffhanger!
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Chapter 2
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>there's a way for you to find
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>>139688810
>tfw the first chapter is like a textbook example of a lonely person losing her mind
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>>139687644Threadly reminder that you should stop posting that because it's a thing.https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3206139/1/
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I get the feeling that this is a setup for tragedy.
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Oh fuck you're right, FUCK FUCK FUCKC I don't want to read this anymore
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I NEVER THOUGHT IT WOULD BE SO SIMPLE BUT...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XOCqCGBCH30
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I FOUND A WAY
I FOUND A WAY
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I swear OP, you're gonna hurt me and I don't like it.
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I like seeing how people react to their first read of this.
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It's not as bad as you think
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who fuck made this come through
Fucking mememagic
>>139689494
>>139689494So the girl is pulling the boy in her loneliness and makes a social recluse out of him.This looks ike it'll end in bloodshed.
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Devote your soul to Kek and be blessed with the ways of the ancient gods.
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i dont like this anymore
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End of Chapter 2.
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>Tfw already dumped this before
It's okay.
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Will the actual Keit-ai end terribly?
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That girl again.
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For fuck's sake.
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End of Chapter 3.
God fucking damn it.
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Last chapter.
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FUUUUUCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
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So now she tells him and inadvertently sets up the events she was trying to prevent.
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No she obviously calls and saves him, and they both live happily ever after ;____;
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Okay nevermind
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>I've loved fixing broken things ever since I can remember.
OH COME ON
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>literally autistic
Autism speaks. It's time to listen.
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I fucking knew it. Something about Harada's reaction about the meet-up was fishy.
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Motherfucker.
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SHIRO IS THE RED MAN
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The End.
>>139692793
Thanks for posting, OP. I'd always wondered where that first page came from.
Obligatory 'why didn't she tell her younger self not to meet up with Nozaki?'. There's probably some timeline continuity bullshit involved here but when you don't address that stuff in-story it feels like it's just being avoided for convenience's sake.
Thanks OP
>>139692793
>Yeah, let the kid die so that I can becom integrated in real life.
Honestly she should have remembered the day her younger self lived that and do the math, fr Christ's sake. Or she could have offered that they met in another place that the killer airport.
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IMO, it's because meeting and losing Nozaki was what allowed Ryo to grow into Harada.
Thanks op
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Thanks op, loved it.
>>139692962
I totally get that, and it's likely left open-ended so the reader can decide why what happens, happens, but it's still pretty unsatisfying.
Such is how many Japanese romance stories finish, and I've certainly read far worse endings. Guess I was just hoping for something less bittersweet.
>>139692793
Well shit, goddess has 2 manga with the same name. Time to download both, I guess.
>>139693091
What is it with Americans wanting ending spelled out to them?
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She wouldn't have become her had things not happened the way they happened.
>>139693653
Probably the culture of wanting everything spelled out to them. This isn't a slight on them, by the way.
I haven't found anything in OPT's for months, and here you just gave me a great read based on some retarded meme.
Thanks OP.
Here's some trivia: the author is married to Mamoru Oshii's daughter.
OP found a way.
Thanks, brightened my day.
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woo this'll be a fun read, thanks OP
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There's a way?
>>139696784
Yes. She just needs to find it.
Why aren't there more good short stories like this in manga?
good read
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Is she legitimately retarded
>>139688618
What could they mean by that?
Fuck you OP I cried
What else did the author do?
That was cute!
The bittersweet ending hits a little hard, though.
>>139693091
Yeah, agreeing with you here. And the "tragically run over by a car" trope is completely exhausting, that shit is as old as manga itself by now.
>>139708628
Who cares if it's formulaic? If it's done effectively, that's all it takes to leave an impact on the viewer.
Give me a generic scene done effectively than something completely original that leaves no emotional impact.
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I disagree that it was done effectively, I enjoyed the story but as soon as I saw >>139691217 I just rolled my eyes and immediately knew what was going to happen. It's fine if you prefer it, but I'm sick of it.
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It was used as a plot point. The way the characters respond in the aftermath is the real highlight.
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Is this shit dropped?
>>139710519
Right, and I disliked that, too. Like I said as soon as I saw the car I knew what was going to happen, and I don't just mean "he's going to save her" - I mean I knew she was going to call back in time to try to save him and fail. It was a cliche plot device that set into motion more cliches. I like the concept, I don't like the ending because it was predictable.
>>139711513
It's ok to be a complete pleb.
>>139693653
I'm actuallyCanadianbut I was really commenting on how I would have preferred the ending to be a little more saccharine, not more conclusive.
I'm fine with open endings, but since we didn't have much time to really feel like Nozaki was content with dying to save Ryo it feels like she didn't really care about him enough to try and alter the timeline to save him (which I mentioned earlier, about how Harada didn't just tell her that meeting him causes his death).
All in all, I think the story was satisfying for its length but with a few more chapters the ending could have felt more fleshed out.
>>139711513
Notice how you keep dodging the main point and use the word cliche.
Not the brightest bulb.
Finds a way
On a scale of 1-10, to what degree does this manga FIND A WAY?
I don't think the author needed to explicitly recreate the infinite loop of her finding her own voice again...Just end it at this iteration and get them together without the car crash
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>>139711584
I don't like what you like and I have my reasons for it, and I don't think you liking it makes you a pleb. I just don't like it. Sorry this upsets you.
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Upon doing the calculations, about a 5.
Fuck I just learned about keit-ai and now I want this to happen
