New year, new volume
I would have uploaded the cover and the first page but I'm not at my usual place so the internet is shit now and the files are too big
Got some v0 chapters here ready for QC. Well two and an omake at least.
Chapter 130 v0
https://mega.nz/#!SIJlCT5Q!vC_HaDpsG1EsZr0m7HJA2wXRJymC5f-oDWae8F9gaFY
Chapter 131 v0
https://mega.nz/#!CAQFVBZD!H0_2o6456cJThPJLEC2E6kGC9c7Twrsa2I812BYVL7E
Chapter 131.5 v0
https://mega.nz/#!TU5B3JBA!pVmzDqZyGZ9eM-mWKzOn14t117r0APgD1yWWm7pnahk
When it comes to releasing, I'll probably put 131.5 in with 131, but maybe others would prefer it a different way.
>>135590534
143
Pantomime
"Hm? What's wrong Sora?"
"Hm? Breaststroke?"
"Hm? Umm... a monkey?"
"Ermmmm, this is difficult Sora"
She was just clearing away the spiderwebs she was caught in
>>135590685
Comic 1
Name
"Ohh, it's a chameleon"
"It is, so he's Chame-chan"
"What an easy name to remember. In any case, though that may be true, the name is limiting"
"So, this one here is Leon-kun"
"Hmm. What an easy... a confusing name!"
Kame-chan [TN: The chameleon]
Leon-kun
"Yup"
Comic 2
Umbrella
"Tsukki's house... There are a lot of umbrellas"
"Yup. The weather report said it was sunny but we met with the rain at our destination so we had no choice but to buy those umbrellas"
"But all of them are quite nice"
"They're pretty much new products"
"That's it right? When you bought them the rain stopped all of a sudden right?"
"Uuuugghh"
>>135590685
>>135591034
These raws look pretty nice actually.
>>135591034
Comic 1
Congestion
"The traffic's pretty congested huh"
"There are way too many cars in Japan"
"They need to invent flying cars faster"
Like this
"No no, on a realistic level it would probably be like this"
"From an artistic perspective it seems extremely difficult"
"Is it...?"
Comic 2
"Well... that's how it would end up huh"
>>135591113
The source roulette was kind to me when I got it. I'll upload the cover next time because it was literally too high quality to upload
>>135591410
Comic 1
Tractor
"Recently, I've come to see tractors as cute"
"Huh? Why?"
"The tiger" [TN: Japanese name is 虎 (tora)]
"Kutahs"
"Woaaaah!"
"Woaaaah!"
Comic 2
Pencil
"Your drawing is pale.... what [kind of] pencil are you using?"
"5H!!"
>>135590330
Thanks OP
There's like more than enough material for season 2 now, just do it pls.
>>135591953
>that pantsu shot
Nice nice.
>>135592113
Natsumi is eroi
>>135591630
Comic 1
Banana Chips
"What're you doing Sensei?"
"Hmm, I'm testing what'll happen if you put banana chips [back] into hot water"
"It's already been dipped for an hour, oh, but it became soft. Okay, let's try eating it"
"Ugh....eww... there's.... no taste..."
"Right?"
"Right... what? You're done it before?"
"I have"
Comic 2
Banana chips 2
"Look, you have to try doing it as many times [as possible] [or] you won't understand right? As for me,"
"I threw my common sense out and accepted human ignorance, I can make free ideas and have expanded my field [of thought]. Furthermore, I can continue advancing modestly, but I think I can make people wealthy"
That's the theory
"So have you dipped banana chips into hot water and eaten them?"
"I have?"
>>135592707
Comic 1
Stone baked potatoes
"Stone baked potatoes"
"Hm"
"Are stones you bake them on really stones?"
"Hmmm...."
"Potato...baked stones?"
"Potato baked stones"
"Stone baked potatoes"
Comic 2
The art of memory
"Umm... the chemical symbol of silicon... umm... I remembered it from the play on words" [TN: ケイ素 (keiso - silicon) & 元素 (genso - chemical element)]
"My...umm, horizon....hm? Lover... boat? What was it? My boat.... my boat!?"
"Hm? So what was it!? In the end what was the chemical symbol? Actually, is silicon even related to all this!?"
Hmmm
Collecting them from the back
"Okaay we're done"
>>135593256
In the last panel of the first comic it should be
>"Potato baked stones"
>"Potato baked stones..."
>>135593256
Splittable chopsticks
"Wagh, the chopsticks split horribly, it'll be a little hard to use it like this huh... I'll take one more"
"Really again... Can't be helped, one more..."
"Okay, this time it split properly"
"Ohh~"
"What's up Furuya"
"You're fine with that?"
The two long parts
"There was that usage as well huh..."
>>135593541
Road
"Oh, Asou-san, there's a promenade over here"
"If I make conversation with these senpai who find faults out of nowhere, this'll be a pattern where they carry the pace. Okay, here I'll..."
"It's too small for a promenade. Isn't it just a mountain pass?"
"A mountain...pass!?"
"I couldn't get a[n approving] pass"
"It can't be helped. It wasn't promenaded as a promenade"
[TN: There's a play on words here between 遊歩道 (yuuhodou - promenade) and とゆーほど (to yuu hodo - to call [something]) but I can't think of a way to carry the pun so I made something as close as possible to it]
Taadah
"I feel as if I lost even though it was pointless..."
>>135593478
Huh, thanks for catching that.
The sketchbook manga and anime were some of the things that kept me entertained during my army service over eight years ago. Haven't had anything to do with the series since, surprised that it's still alive and ongoing. The comedy girls were my favourite, I used to absolutely adore them.
Rereading and rewatching this now, and it's like I'm in a time warp. A lot of associations with it that I had forgotten keep popping into my mind. Thoughts from a different time and place. It's weird, but also very cool. Stupid amounts of nostalgia.
Thanks for translating these and reminding me that this exists. Keep up the good work.
>>135590685
Oh that should be 146 huh. My bad
147
Gure and the bicycle
Meow
"Meow"
Pedal
The tire is spinning. He is surprised
Shiver shiver
"Cute"
>>135594959
Comic 1
Hat
"A hat"
"A hat"
"The feared inverted anemone human"
"Woaah, scary"
Comic 2
Hat 2
"Ow!"
"It's no use. I can't see in front of me too much"
"I...I see..."
"How about parting your bangs and wearing it?"
"Parting my bangs?"
"Like this?"
"Who are you"
>>135595746
Comic 1
Grass Whistle
Fweeeee
Grass whistle
Prick
Munch munch
"Whaa!?"
Comic 2
Grass whistle 2
Fweee
Prick
Shiver shiver
"Hm? What's wrong?"
>>135595746
Tsukki is cute
>>135590610
I'm up, so checking now. Generally the omake is put with the last chapter of the volume.
>>135595992
Comic 1
Herd of hairy caterpillars
Hairy Caterpillars
"W...waaaghhh! Caterpillars! Scary!"
The caterpillars got scared and bent their bodies. The plants shook
"Gyaaaaaahh!!"
She got traumatized
Comic 2
Fluffy Sparrows [TN: Common name is Ramie Moth. If you want to change it, leave a note at the third panel]
"Ohh, those were fluffy sparrow larvae"
"Fluffy sparrows?"
"When they sense danger, they shake their bodies a lot"
"I see. If they do that they will emotionally drive their enemies to a corner"
"No, that's not the case..."
"But it's such a cute name"
"Yup. Since they look like sparrows who fluff up in the winter, the name stuck"
"Huh? They do!? Where!?"
"No, it's their adult form okay?"
>>135597619
Comic 1
Sparrow
"Huh? But weren't the larvae of the sparrow family not hairy caterpillars but hornworms?" [TN: The sparrow class is the Japanese form of the hawk moth family]
"Yup. They are"
"Look, the fluffy sparrow isn't from the sparrow class"
"That so? It's [getting] complicated again"
"Then, how about the white speckled sparrow and the peach sparrow we see often?"
"Those are from the sparrow family"
"Then the cobalt sparrow?"
"Those are pearl spot fish" [TN: Japanese 'Suzumedai']
Comic 2
Hair
"How are hairy caterpillars and hornworms different?"
"Hairy caterpillars are hornworms with hair that sprouted"
"In reality they're not much different aside from sprouting hair huh"
"That's right!"
>>135598534
Comic 1
Lead clothes
"I also want some lead clothes"
"Lead clothes? What're those?"
"Look, the one piece the president often wears"
"The president wears a one piece...!?"
"Hey, what're you thinking? These. Boiler [clothes]. This is also a kind of one piece"
"Ohh that"
Comic 2
Lead Clothes 2
"Yaaay, I got some lead clothes!"
"With this, I can do work in the dirty clay room and be completely okay"
"Don't call it dirty"
"Even if I do this"
"I'm completely fine!"
"Your hair is full of dirt Kate"
>>135596906
Okay, I have to sleep now, so I'll do fixes in the morning I guess.
>>135599361
Comic 1
Extra
"What does extra mean?"
"It means the sort of meaning like 'too much' or 'special' "
"Oh, it's different from what I thought"
"What? You thought it was like the X of a tiger? Oh, [or] an extract that if you drink you'll become a tiger?"
"Whatever, Takane you're so insightful"
"Kei, it's because you're so predictable...."
Comic 2
Case by case
"Ughh. So I'll draw out my predictability it's more like that. That or playing by ear according to time and condition in a case by case [situation]"
"What is"
"That"
"Anyhow, that would be 'A case! A case!' LIke in Hakata-ben" [TN: In Hakata-ben, 'bai' is an emphatic sentence ending]
"Whatever, Takane you're so insightful"
"Kei, it's because you're so predictable...."
>>135600156
Comic 1
Greed
"Oh this, this looks tasty"
"Hm Let's have a look"
"The greedy special"
"Let's pick something else since I don't want to be thought of as greedy"
Comic 2
ATM
ATM Corner
"If one thinks that those characters are an abbreviation for 'atomic' then it would seem like a nuclear [spot]"
"That'd be scary"
"It's okay it's okay"
"It's okay it's okay, probably"
I'm taking a break a bit but I'll be back soon. Hopefully thread will be alive so that we can have time to release this by the time the thread dies
>>135600525
Bump
>>135600156
>>135600156
Why Kei isn't in the anime?
>>135602385
Because she showed up too late
This QC is going to be a headache. Please bare with me if I'm a bit slow.
Chapter 130
Page 117
"Wait, my way of asking was bad." -> "Wait, I phrased that badly."
Page 119
Strip 1
"Inside are chestnuts!!"
Strip 2
"Is what I feigned, but it's really chestnuts."
"Is what I feigned, but it's really sea urchin."
"Is what I feigned, but it's really just pudding dipped in soy sauce!!"
Page 120
Strip 2
4th panel "Can't you?" -> "Couldn't you?"
Page 123
Strip 2
Panel 2
"Because a compromise would result in unforgivable sushi quality."
Page 124
Strip 1
"That's normal in that situation." -> "That's normal in this situation."
TL Things
Page 121
Sora's final head movement is untranslated.
Page 123
Strip 1
Was there a reason for leaving the "nori" untranslated here?
Strip 2
Have enough time to put out one more
148
Darkness
At night I return to my room. In the middle of pitch darkness, I search for the string of the lamp by groping [for it]
I know it's around this area, but it's like there's nothing
Like there's nothing
Like there's nothing
>>135605381
Comic 1
Kera [TN: Common name is mole cricket]
"Oh, what's this bug?"
"A kera"
"Ohh a kera"
"Yup a kera"
"An insect" [TN: Japanese 'mushikera']
"Yup...hm?"
"You're not wrong, but you are"
"That so?"
Comic 2
Tobikera [TN: Common name: Cassis fly]
"Oh it flew!"
"Ohh then it's really a tobikera"
Kera
This
Tobikera
This kind of bug
*Nothing to do with a kera
"Tobikera...? What?"
"Ohhh I want a friend I could tell my stories to"
>>135605755
Comic 1
Cat
"I haven't seen any cats recently"
"Me neither"
"Then let me show you something nice"
"Kurihara-senpai"
"Tadaa a Dirhagus foveolatus" [TN: There is no possible translation for this japanese name nor is there a common name. But it looks like a cat for some reason]
"Woaah, a cat's face"
"--so where did this thing come from?"
Comic 2
Liver
"Liver: 100 grams for 10 yen! Cheap!"
"It's good for my body so today I'll make boiled liver"
Liver: 47 yen
Ginger: 99 yen
"In the end the ginger was expensive..."
>>135604765
Whoops. I must have cut off the TL questions on accident. Reposting.
TL Things
Page 121
Sora's final head movement is untranslated.
Page 123
Strip 1
Was there a reason for leaving the "nori" untranslated here?
Strip 2
"We're not compromising right away" sounds a bit awkward. Do you have any other suggestions for this?
Page 124
Strip 2
What was the original joke here? Could it be made into a TL note?
Also, "I preformed that dear matter." doesn't sound right. Can you check this?
Thanks again and are you gonna upload a mega of all the chapters these threads have done up until now whenever? Also GA Anon translator guy, please.
The thread when
>>135606044
Comic 1
The northern star
"What're you reading?"
"A book about constellations"
"If you try thinking about it I don't know much about constellations"
"That's true. I only know how to search for the Northern star"
'How do you search for it?"
"First you find the big dipper or the constellation Cassiopeia ..."
"....and it should be near midway.... Well, you might be able to find it even with that, but I don't remember..."
Comic 2
Ursa Major
The big dipper
The Northern Star
Cassiopeia constellation
"You find it like this"
"Ohh that's right! That's how"
"Huh? What're the stars around the big dipper?"
"The big dipper is part of the Ursa Major constellation. It's the tail part"
"The bear has a long tail..."
"He has a long tail..."
"Long"
>>135606100
121
She's brimming with excitement
123
Strip 1
Not really. It was sort of an in the moment thing since it's on the packet. You can translate it as seaweed if you wish.
Strip 2
"Don't make a compromise right away" or something
124
It can be if you wish. She's making a lame pun. Asakura-sensei then says something along the line of 'You did that disappointing line'. I was probably doing this on a sleep high sorry.
>>135606686
I gotta go somewhere unfortunately. But I'll be back to finish the rest of it in maybe 3-4 hours. Hopefully thread will still be up by then.
What happened to scorebook?
>>135606686
Page 121
It's best to leave that as is then.
Page 123
Strip 1
I would prefer it, if the TS can.
Strip 2
Okay then
Add a "Yes," before "because a compromise would result in unforgivable sushi quality."
The inquired about line should read something like, "Quit trying to compromise already."
Page 124
By "original joke, I was actually asking for the original pun Sensei was trying to make so it could TL noted.
Asakura's revised line is perfect.
Don't worry about the thread. People are always willing to feign conversation to keep it alive while we're translating.
>>135607006
Did anyone else even read it. Honestly, it's strange to even see the author writing a different work than Sketchbook. If I had to guess, it died a quiet death.
This manga looks super comfy.
QC things. (1/2)
Chapter 131
Page 125
"Many people..." -> "Too many people..."
Page 126
Strip 2
"There are many people here, so..."
Page 127
Strip 1
Was the original TL note too long? I'd prefer it be put in at the bottom, just for the sake of having it.
"TN: A Giza 10 is a 10 yen coin with jagged edges manufactured between 1951 and 1958. It's considered a collectible to most"
Page 128
"Two cups, double meter, one cup." Unless the translator tells me I'm wrong, change this to "Two bows, two claps, one bow."
I'd also say change the second panel to "First the two bows."
Page 131
Strip 1
Second panel "must" -> "most"
4th panel
"But first on a gloabl scale is Everest!!"
"2nd is...!!" "2nd..." "Umm... 2nd...!!"
Page 132
Strip 2
Panel 5
"Just as one would think"
Questions for the TL
Page 127
Strip 2
"Gonna empty my whole wallet full of 5 yen coins!" makes it seem like her wallet is filled with nothing but 5 yen coins. Is that the intention of the line, or can it be changed to "Gonna empty all of my wallet's 5 yen coin out!"
Kate didn't actually throw a coin here, did she? Does here final line have any actual relevance to her, or can it be reworded to be talking about the situation in general? Or could it be that she just wanted to fit in a pun here.
Page 128
Strip 1
"two cups, double meter, one cup."
What? Are you quite sure on this translation?
二拝二拍一拝 is the original Japanese as far as I can tell. I believe I recognize this as the name of one of Suwako's spellcards in MoF. There it was translated as "Two bows, two claps, one bow" which is a line I've see in many other things as well. Google translated "two claps" as "two beats" which I guess could be mistaken for "double meter," but I'm so curious to know where "two cups" came from?
Honestly, I don't think this needs the TL note. I see that Hazuki doesn't know what it is, but isn't it quite famous?
Page 130
This, however, could use a TL note. Or just a wikipedia link if you feel like it.
Page 132
I don't think "spread out" really fits here. Could you check on that. What does Benten-sama mean here by "You're still young!" here? Does he mean to call her naive/inexperienced, or is it possible that "crumpled" be replaced with the synonym "wrinkled" here so that Sora inadvertently be calling him old here, and that is his response. Also, for what reason does he seem like Benten-sama?
Page 134
"She is the silhouette of supremacy in the final years." Please clarify this line for me. I don't have a clue what this means.
>>135607501
I read it and it was pretty funny to me. It seemed to be more of a comedy manga than a slice of life so i guess thats the reason why people didn't read it.
>>135606686
Stole some time to put in 1-2 pages.
Comic 1
Ursa Minor
"Oh, is this a part of the Northern Star or something? It also has the shape of a dipper"
"Yeah, even though the big dipper is called that, in regard to this one it's called the little dipper. The tail tip of Ursa Minor is also the Northern Star"
"The ear here has a long tail as well"
Ursa Minor
"Actually, this is a squirrel"
"A squirrel..."
"Cute..."
Comic 2
Cassiopeia
"Speaking of which, why is the constellation Cassiopeia named that?"
"I wonder. Its characteristic form...what is it?"
"It's the name of an ancient Ethiopian princess"
"An ancient Ethiopian princess!?"
Cassiopeia
"Don't apply the shape as it is"
>>135607501
If you mean the original joke for 124, it's 'あがりをおあがり' (agari wo o-agari) which basically means "Draw the green tea'
I'll get to your questions in the next one
>>135610129
Take your time. I'm gonna be a while trying to figure out the omake.
>>135610129
Comic 1
Hercules
"But normally constellations are modelled from their form right?"
"Then I see the Hercules constellation as a frog"
"A frog!?"
Hercules
"A frog..."
"A crushed frog..."
Comic 2
Secluded frog [TN: Common name: Surinam toad]
"This looks somewhat like a secluded frog"
"Secluded frog?"
"That sort of flattish frog does exist. The technical name is a Pipa Pipa"
"Pipa Pipa is a cute name"
"Sensei"
"What kind [of frog] is it? Alright! Let's try looking it up on the net!"
Grab
"Gyaaahhh!"
>>135610230
Good luck. I've gotta leave again now. But I'll give a good thought about your questions as well. Be back in an hour or two again
>>135591630
>tora-kuta
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XK1mxsih6uU
This one was a doozy. I almost asked for an entire re-translation.
Omake
Page 136
"What did ya come to buy?" -> "Ya here to get something?"
Page 137
1st panel
"Yeah... just for few of the half price dishes... Yup."
2nd panel
"It'll be half price soon, won't it
5th panel
"But if I get a late start, won't they all be taken?"
6th panel
Page 138
3rd panel
"You know that?" -> "You can tell?"
4th panel
"There're the rest, right?" -> There'll be some left, right?
5th panel
"kid" -> "kids"
Page 139
1st panel
"And the expensive sushi has 3 packs remaining, the cheap one has 5."
"Sha can't refuse..." -> "She can't refuse..."
4th panel
"she'd as the employee" -> "she'd ask the employee"
"There are those kinds of people, right?
Page 142
"Demand and supply being in perfect alignment is really an amazing thing, huh..."
Questions for TL
Page 137
3rd panel
"Frankly, if I wait, I feel as if there won't be a great cut in price."
I'm not 100 percent sure I get what she's thinking here. Is she saying that if she waits too close to the 20% offs, the people won't come out and make them 50% off, or does she mean that she just won't feel as if they're 50% off for some reason?
"Well, if you don't mind too much. What if you leisurely wait?"
What is she suggesting here?
Page 139
1st panel
You translated it as, "the matter of buying of not being able to think of buying that bento is completely different."
The typesetter put "the matter of not being able to think of buying that bento is completely different."
I don't understand either version. Please help.
5th panel
When Asou says "she" does "she" refer to Hazuki? Hazuki answers like this is about her next page.
Page 144
Panel 4
"Ah, they're not thinking anything" Does she actually mean this, or does she mean something like "they're not paying attention."
>tfw GA is ending
TS here, awake and ready to get to work. I'll put in what you've got so far and wait for TL to come back for the rest.
>>135613147
Good luck my man
>>135609776
Oh right,
>Was the original TL note too long?
Kind of in this situation. I don't like haivng to use 2 lines for a note inbetween panels because it's kind of hard to fit and make it still readable. I put the full thing in now though.
>>135614216
>I don't like haivng to use 2 lines for a note inbetween panels because it's kind of hard to fit and make it still readable.
I understand. For situations like this though, I would assume the TL note can be put at the bottom because it isn't imperative for reading the strip.
>>135610379
I'm back
Comic 1
Secluded Frog 2
"What's that!? The horror! The horror!"
"Secluded frogs, you see, as the name suggests are babysitting frogs. The eggs on the parent's back are buried, and within that structure the tadpoles hatch."
"Bit by bit the holes open on the back and they are raised there until they become little frogs"
"Say that beforehand!!"
"Was it that disgusting...?"
"Okay then, let's try looking at it"
"No!!"
"Let's try looking at it"
"No!!!"
Comic 2
Midwife frogs [TN: In Japanese 'Sanba frog'.
"Secluded frogs huh. Babysitting frogs huh. They're amazin..."
"In addition, there's also one called a sanba frog"
"Samba frog..."
"Ohh, what kinda [frog] is it?"
"A frog that twines its eggs on its feet and until the eggs hatch, it looks burdened"
"Sora, it's different from that samba"
>>135614455
As long as there's less than 2 TL notes it should be okay
>>135609853
127 strip 2
Yes I like that
128 Strip 1
Was it? I never got that far in MoF sadly. I interpreted it as drinks of sake cups but I think you're right about the claps. 拝 means bow. So you're right. My fault.
130
If you think so. It's basically the Seven Good Fortune Gods who come visit towns on the New Year and Benten-sama is the god of knowledge and arts. If you lay an image of the gods under your pillow on New Years eve they'll supposedly appear and one of the gods bless you with fortune in whatever area they control. So if Benten-sama blesses you you get fortune in arts for the whole year.
132
I think he means 'I'm still young'. 敷く means to spread out, but I interpret it as she laid it out flat on the pillow and it became crumpled when she laid on it.
134
I think I was confused by the kanji here. I'll retranslate it. 'She thinks that the kitsune is the supreme shadow picture'. I don't know if that's the part you're referring to or not though.
>>135615007
Comic 1
White Stew
Making white stew
"Nee-chan, the mushrooms?"
They weren't selling them
I don't know whether this will be a substitute, but I bought shiitake
"It won't"
'Kinoko' in English means 'mushroom'. [Therefore] even shiitake are mushrooms.
"You really feel like putting them in?"
Comic 2
Shiitake
White Stew with Shiitake
"Shiitake surprisingly works"
Yup it does
"But if Nee-chan influences it, somehow it becomes Japanese-like"
"Is there some problem with it?"
>>135615130
>>135609853
Oh I didn't notice your second part for 127 here. I think she refrained from it in the last minute. I'll try retranslating the line again:
"Letting go of all the luck you had in your hand on your own"
It does kind of feel like she's reprimanding sensei a bit but I think she just wants her word in as well.
>>135615007
Page 127
Does this mean that the TL needs to be changed to say luck instead of fate? If so, I'll rewrite the line.
Page 128
Okay.
Page 130
>It's basically the Seven Good Fortune Gods who come visit towns on the New Year.
This is what I think needed the TL note. Everything else is stated in the strip itself.
Page 132
If he's referring to himself, then I think wrinkled is better in place of crumpled. They're both the same in terms of pieces of paper, but wrinkled can also mean old, which is how he seemed to take Sora's comment.
Page 134
Yeah, that's perfect.
>>135615495
127
Sure
130
Let's go with that
132
Let's go with that
>>135615680
Okay then.
Page 127
4th panel
"You let go of all the luck in your hand"
Note: Luck is pronounced similarly to 5 yen coin (go en)
Now all that's left are the omake questions.
What should I put for the note on page 130?
just Note: the Seven Good Fortune Gods who visit towns on the New Year?
>>135616690
With some help from Wikipedia.
Note: The Seven Treasure Gods are believed to visit towns on New Years and distribute gifts to worthy people.
>>135616690
TL here. Go with what >>135616915 says. In other news, science pages hurt my brain
Just going over everything on chapter 130 now.
Page 120, strip 2, panel 3
It says we can't bring in living fish. Is that right? I feel like maybe it should say raw fish. I'm also thinking
On a hygenic level -> For hygiene reasons
>>135617688
Qc'er here.
I thought living fish made sense, but I know so little about seafood that had to look up sea urchin just to understand the pudding with soy sauce joke, so I can't make a call on this.
I didn't change "On a hygienic level" simply on the basis that "It's Ryou/Fuu," so I'm fine with that suggestion.
>>135615220
Fluffy Sparrow (Adult)
A moth that had the name 'sparrow' stuck to it. But they aren't part of the sparrow class [TN: Scientific name Sphingidae] but the night class [TN: Scientific name Noctuidae]. It's a simple moth, but the light blue on the hindwing makes it a little pretty. Though you can't see it if the wings don't open. They often eat the sap.
Fluffy Sparrow (Larva)
Ramies which grow en masse by the riverside and are often increasing in large numbers. If you scare them they sway slowly. When they eat up the ramie, they crawl around the nearby roads. Their color is poisonous but they are not. Traumatic.
Chimney clothes [TN: My fault. So 017 here uses the wrong translation]
Boiler clothes. The so called one piece. In the main work, it is the work clothes the president often wars. If you write it in kanji it is 煙管服.
Flying Kera [TN: Common name: caddis fly]
An insect of the Trichoptera order. The appearance is similar to a moth. Most of the larvae are aquatic, make their nests [there], and are hidden inside it. They walk about similar to the bagworms.
>>135617688
Raw fish sounds better. The hygiene line you made also has better English flow.
>>135617964
>>135617688
Hmmm I'll leave that choice for 'living fish' to consensus. Both sort of work out I guess.
>>135617964
>>135617975
Well my thought was they'd bring raw fish but they couldn't keep it from going off hence sensei's line about the fridge.
>>135618490
After running it though Google.
生 = Living
魚 = Fish
生魚 = Raw Fish
I'd say change it.
1-2 more for the night
149
"I can see a really small boat. What was it again Natsumi?"
"Huh? What?"
"A word that comes out often in art...ummm. If I'm correct.... bunker..."
"Bunker!?"
Bunker: A machine gun made with reinforced concrete. A defensive encampment equipped with artillery.
"That's right. The bunker principle" [TN: Japanese 'touchika hou']
"You mean perspective?" [TN: Japanese 'enkin hou']
>>135619276
Just making sure you know. The rest of the QC questions are here >>135611988
>>135619276
Comic 1
Very [TN: Japanese 'bari']
"You fiiishing?"
"Yes very fishing"
Very
(Meaning) exceedingly, immensely. In general it has the same meaning as 'chikappa' in Hakata-ben
"It really doesn't look like very fishing though"
"Whatever, it's very fishing"
"Look, this is a very sea bream"
"What's that. It's just the fish's name..."
Comic 2
Burr [TN: Japanese 'bari']
"But, why with tongs..."
"The fillet here's got poison. Don't wanna touch."
"But I wanna eat it. So I was thinkin to bring it home"
"Ohhh. Is it good?"
"That's right. Nacchan, bring some home as well. Look got about three of em"
"Ya mean it ain't!?"
>>135611988
137 panel 3
She means that she's aiming for the better deals. If she waits she's getting the worse one, ie. the 20% ones.
137 Panel 5
I'm gonna admit that Hakata-ben isn't the most clear of languages. But the general gist is that Natsumi is trying to suggest for Hazuki to relax a bit.
139 panel 1
I had somewhat of a problem with this line as well. I'll try rearranging the sentence a bit because the line partitions in walls of text can be undecipherable.
'If that's the case, buying that bento is a different, unthinkable matter altogether"
She basically spent the prior parts of the sentence analyzing a woman's needs from the contents of her cart so she's trying to summarize her analyses into a compact statement.
139 panel 5
She's referring to the lady
144 panel 4
The latter. The idea is that they're not thinking about what she's saying
>>135619986
For 137 panel 5, the 'unthinkable' is actually neg. potential so it should be 'different matter altogether that I can't think of'
>>135619986
Mistake on comic 2 title. It should just be 'Bari'
Comic 1
Goal
"Speaking of, Nacchan, why're you here?"
"Well, I hear there're kittens on the coast So I came with everyone"
"Taadahh, I, Minamo, have come to take pictures of cats!!"
"Ohh, the girl that was here before"
"Today I brought a foxtail"
"Where are the cats"
"Ohh, some time ago... who...?"
"It's been a while"
"You didn't come for the cats did you?"
Comic 2
Mottled Spinefoot
"Woah, are those mottled spinefeet?"
"Mottled spinefeet? Ohh, Bari"
Mottled Spinefeet (Standard Japanese name) = Bari (Common name)
"You eating these right? Isn't it better to cut the fillet and take [out] the organs?"
"Ohh I was"
"But I don't have the tools"
"And I do"
"You are somewhat amazing
>If she waits she's getting the worse one, ie. the 20% ones.
Okay, this cleared up a misunderstanding I got from watching Ben-to. I thought all of the left-overs were put half off, not just some of them.
>>135620029
Do you mean for page 139?
>>135620519
Yeah 139 sorry
As for the bento, it depends on the store. Some pick certain ones. Others do all. It really depends
>>135620428
Comic 1
Poison
"Okay, if you take the intestines out of the mottled spinefish while it's fresh, the fishy smell is also reduced and you can eat it nicely"
"Is that so"
"Oh, this is the poisonous fillet huh. A lethal weapon"
"Oh that's dangerous. If you get pricked it'll hurt quite a bit okay?"
"Huh? What? It just hurts? It's dull poison, nothing to be feared"
"If you're careless, that'll give you weeks of pain"
"Craaap. That's real scary..."
Comic 2
Device
"Agh... the string broke! I lost my device!"
"Now I can't fish no more"
"No no, it's too early to give up"
"Just wait a little please. Devices have surrendered to the sea before"
"Okay, I've gathered some"
"That much......."
Okay. This wasn't as hard as I thought it would be. But that might mean I misunderstood something, so please check.
Page 137
3rd panel
"Frankly, I feel that if I wait too long, there won't be any left.
4th panel
Change "but" to "and."
5th panel
"No need to worry so much. Why not just wait calmly?" Is this fine?
Page 139
1st panel
"If that's the case, then it's a whole different matter that I can't predict."
Also, change the last bubble of this panel to, "There's the possibility that she'll get two expensive and two cheap sushi, but the most likely outcome is that she'll get 4 of the cheap ones."
2nd panel
"I'm also aiming for those.
4th panel
"But if someone's that worried, they could put them into their cart and ask the employee to stick the half off seal on for them."
Page 144
Panel 4
"Ah, they're not paying attention!!"
If these are fine then everything is ready for v2.
thanks again. Yer doing god's work.
>>135620981
My bad it's not surrendered, but 'Devices have fallen into the sea before'
Egi
"I recovered some trash and made economy with ecology that's kind to even your wallet:
"Well that may be true"
"Woah, what's this? Shrimp?"
"That's a lure called 'egi'"
"I don't it in detail, but it's something to lure squid"
"Ohh, squid fishing?"
"Pretty much. Squid fishing huh... that'd [also] be called 'eging'"
"Eging!?"
"Since' you're using egi, you put on the 'ing'!?"
"Yup"
"By the way, fishing for aji with a lure is called 'ajing' If it's Mebaru then mebaring"
"This is nothing less than a naming sense! How wonderful!"
"Would that be a praise?"
>>135621098
Sure, I'm down with that
>>135621447
Comic 1
~ing
"Well, but I understand that kind of naming"
"Ohh"
"At my place, we call entering the bath 'furouing' and getting sleep 'suiming' " [TN: I used the Japanese names because if I used the English versions (ie. bathing, sleeping), she'd sound really stupid. But at the same time, she'd sound like Kei. So I'll leave the call to the QC/TS]
"I...I see"
Comic 2
Bait
"But wait. I don't use lures so much. I got hooks, but I got no bait"
"Bait huh.... then wait a little"
Ragworm
Crab
Shrimp
"Which'll you use?"
"You are really amazing..."
>>135621633
Comic 1
Anahaze
"Oh you got something"
"Ohh, what's this?"
"Anahaze"
"Anahaze? The color's kinda strange. The sides of the mouth's got blue on it"
"Even though it's delicious, because of that color it's one fish that's hard to put on a dinner table"
"Well, I don't have the desire to eat it as well... Ya want it?"
"Thanks for the meal!"
Comic 2
Anahaze 2
"You...'re gonna eat it now?"
"Yup"
"The white body's got blue all over it somehow. Can you really eat it?"
"Thanks for the meal"
"Ohh delicious"
"You're amazing...."
>>135621830
Comic 1
Anahaze 3
Afterwards, he caught a lot of anahaze
"Oh! This is delicious!"
"It works it works"
"Ohh surprising!"
"Woah, you guys can eat those"
"What's this, Ueno-san's beig surprisingly delicate. It's pretty good"
"Blue ain't a color of food"
"If ya think and see the world as black and white, it'll be fine"
"Ya think I can skillfully mimic that?"
Comic 2
Takane
"What's wrong, it's easy. The only one who can't is Ueno-san"
"No impossible"
"The cats!?"
And I'm done for the night. I might put up more if there's still a thread when I get up, but this is it for now
>>135621098
Alright, I'll go over everything once more in the Omake to make sure I didn't forget anything, and then I'll upload them all for final checks.
>>135611988
Page 137 again,
It looks like you started a change for the 6th panel in this post but never actually got round to it, is it okay in it's current form?
>>135622616
It's okay. I don't know why I wrote that.
Alright then, v1s to be checked for any errors, and then we can release the rest of volume 9.
Chapter 130
https://mega.nz/#!LNYhhbhR!6vszvTwwgk3YJPRCFq-nrobZsu3Vrd_u7NJp69zgo4s
Chapter 131
https://mega.nz/#!zExwFIZb!MxEFD5LFVoZK4IcLWw4TjaES7gcROdeCvlvOUzHzTiY
Omake
https://mega.nz/#!PQBRWZAQ!bTc3ARyltQD2Kj4VMwi2gG25fd3DGBI06K3_JxTQgjg
>>135612604
Yeah but I'm thankful that the manga is up to date with translations. The one niche series Yen Press translates decently fast which is bizarre.
Chapter 130
Page 124
The specifics for the bad pun were never gotten. I guess it's fine.
Chapter 131
Page 132
"crumpled" -> "wrinkled"
"I'm not a crumple!!" -> "I'm not wrinkled!"
"You're still young!!" -> "I'm still young!!"
Omake
Page 139
Panel 1
"thatshe'll" -> "that she'll"
Besides the pun, I think everything else is fine.
>>135624833
Oh I forgot to re-export page 132 after fixing it, my bad.
>>135625257
I was wondering on that one. Still, it's better than just missing all the fixes entirely.
shall I hold off in case of a pun explanation, or just release them?
>>135627232
Just release them. The pun isn't vital to the chapter, so I'll let it go. Please post them to mega for me.
>>135627274
Okay then.
Chapter 130
https://mega.nz/#!bch1CK5Z!tMOWhTszKEyezgpizE_L0PEyrNQmMAqiypSM87IvZ-c
Chapter 131+Omake
https://mega.nz/#!zJAhnACS!MiWLVVShYgBiIl5xC5mVUnPfdnifMP-hBnqSlfzAzHI
>>135606401
Also if this guy is still around, yes, you can have this
https://mega.nz/#!aN5WTDob!2EVw3oIl0fYL1bOeO0plDxUzRyqeckRyN2uReZ64p08
And with that it looks like volume 9 is done.
>>135627601
Always around, thanks friend.
>>135627601
I just realized I hadn't been checking for this. Sorry.
List of missing periods.
Chapter 130
Page 137, Panel 3
Page 139, Strip 1, Panel 3
Chapter 131
Page 125, Panel 3
Page 127, Strip 1, Panel 4
Page 128, Strip 1, Panel 3
Page 129, Strip 1, Panels 2/3
>>135628324
Whoops, my bad. I'd been doing alright at not forgetting those up until now. Fixed versions done.
130
https://mega.nz/#!HcB1mISB!HfFpgF577MemDC557KyuU5HlAl3a5jSG-MQvSPxzygU
131+Omake
https://mega.nz/#!WZBjCbST!TmgrMJSHtHIzxDIvHnP-5LxmydQpMTqPw2pvUADU21Y
And all the chapters we've done
https://mega.nz/#!ecBQ3KqR!XsA2iAnOO8T4Ov5Pvq9ViSJpGg6UXhuE8ihMDhucmr8
>>135628748
Okay. Everything seems good on them. If the thread lives, I guess the translator will do more chapters, but I'm going to sleep for now. I'm happy we finished a volume.
>>135629865
Cool, well they're pending on batoto now
I applied for contributor, but apparently the person in charge of approving that is AWOL.
