>>512746
dont really think people would play this, sorry man. dosnt matter how long you put into it if it isnt good. cant make a complete decision on if its realy bad or not, but based on your tralier it isnt good at all.

assets and textures look like free assets off of unity market, only looks a tad bit better than metal of honor rising sun. but you have normal map issues with the guns being see through, all of your UI graphics are stretch out for some reason. everything just looks really bad.

release a gameplay video because even if the graphics and everything youve showed suck your game might still be ok. your trailer dosnt show anything cool

thanks for the feedback, if you want to look more into it to really see if its boring or not then check this : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2WYLMluKJw0

ofc i should mention i started making this game when i was 14, and i made every asset ( textures, animations , models, rigs, around 90% of scripts ( due to lack of knowledge when i started ) )

>>512754
now youre lying, you didnt make every model. i dont think you made any gun model or car.

it literly is a copy of just asets and shit from the unity marketplace like anon said

obviously bait ya dinguses

ya fuckin kidding me? look at my channel , i have animations and modelling videos everywhere even from when i started ( years ago ), but if you dont believe me then theres nothing i can do.

or you can try and find these animations or models on the internet , which is impossible because they are all mine

>>512755
100% the only model is the zombie and thats a place holder for now

>>512746
*makes video private*

im guessing this was really shit for you to have to do that

>>512762
it was actually, due to the fact that i didnt get the reactions i would normally get, maybe people are just shitty in 4chan i guess

and i cant delete the thread for shit so ... its stuck here

>>512765
>>512768
or because your game sucks and people can tell you that because of 4chan. if you want people to suck off your ego just go talk to your family and friends, you will never get better. and your game will still be shit

>>512770
LOL ty senpai XD

>>512765
3D is for of art, artists learn on criticism, if you will tap everyone on the shoulders and say how good they are, they will never fucking learn.

This is your 1st lesson of art as a hobby/profession.

>>512776
but instead, lets tell them how they fucking suck and they will never be good at anything

i like that , i do

>>512746
Instead of a "game" you should call it what it is: a prototype. For that it isn't too shabby, you have the functionality now you can improve on the art aspect of it. You've learned a lot, keep on going.

>>512746
BTFO

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So someone told their honest opinion and you piss your pants and hide the video?

Don't be fagit boy, if you want to know how to improve your work, show it to us.

if this was not a troll you should pick either coding or art. Its way too hard to make by yourself.

if the gameplay is fun i can get past shitty graphics but 90% of the market will skip your game.
you are young, pick one and keep improving.

>>512746

[This video is private].

What's the point of posting it publicly then?

how to encourage someone on 4chan:
> excessive use of the word faggot (or misspellings thereof e.g. fagget, fagit, fgt)
> criticise the meta of the work, but not the content itself
> be a dick

OP, judging by the other shit on your channel, game seems cool. Re-public the trailer so the not-dicks can see please

>>512859
lol
shit is shit

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>>512746
did u just use ur age as a way of both getting attention and as an excuse

Holy shit OP is a literal child
Can't take criticisms and expects to get their dick sucked, if that doesn't show that he's new to 4chan I don't know what is
That and he's literally 16, how is this thread still up?

>>512746
Literally Autism.
underage & his youtube name seemingly was https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_rHnKf8ZWF4 Knuckles209Cp
Sonic + Childporn and he does pivotvideos since 2011 when he was eleven and therefore even too young to own a legal YT account

>>512768
Thats the way to do it. Ask for feedback as long it is positive. If its not try to delete everything. yup

>>512972
People with strong denial usually get ahead in life. They don't give up even in the face of overwhelming evidence of incompetence,
so they keep collecting the unlikely triumphs just by staying in the race.

In todays world of shameless self-promotion supressing any criticism of yourself is empowering. In the year 2016 stupid is strong.

What bothers me is theres no fucking game here.
You've been working on something for 3 years and literally nothing to show for it.

I don't know what was in the private video, but going from everything else, it's just more videos of you testing out more weapons and doing nothing.

This is less than a tech demo. Hiding behind the fact that you're 16, and then thinking it grants you special privileges is bullshit. I've seen people your age create some genuinely impressive art and other media that I'd honestly be jealous of. Wishing I had that talent at that age.

This however, is actually shit I'd expect out of a 16 year old. Wanting us to be impressed, or otherwise stroke your ego is stupid. That only works for fucks that don't know shit about your subject. Even then they'll ask "is this it?", you don't have anything to show.


At this point I'm rambling. So I'll quickly summarize it for you.
No one gives a shit if you're 16, just make something good.

>>512980
That is pretty harsh anon. At sixteen you're not expected to do well at this, ofcourse a younger person can impress you just by showing potential.
That said this is a 18+ board full of angry autists so if you're of such an tender age with a still fragile developing ego you really have no buissness to be here.
This place is only good for the kind of adults that is tempered in raw shit and can shrug off hostile remarks and shit-post tier criticism with a snear.

I don't know what Op did since he decided to hide his creation but if you can make even a shitty game at that age you're pretty advanced for your age group.

>>512985
It's not harsh at all.

I see shit like this all the time on youtube. You have 13-14 year olds with pirated c4d making shitty youtube intros, and other things like that.
This isn't any different, he's just taking assets and shit and tweaking premade scripts.
Just because it's not the normal thing that a 16 year old does, doesn't mean I should care.
The only thing that should make me care is the level of quality that he produces. And at this stage, it's poor. It's almost the same as those people that post something they "made in like 5 minutes" and expect people to be impressed.

Maybe it is kind of harsh, but he just to keep making shit. Without expecting anything from it.
Age shouldn't be an excuse, or a boon. If you do good work no one will care what age you are. Unless you go parading your age around looking for attention.

Cmon, just make the video public. We would like to see.

>>512746
why dont you post this /vg/ it has amateur gamedev general
people there will LOVE it

>>513045
im pretty sure OP already killed himself

>>512980>>512988
>It's not harsh at all
>Maybe it is kind of harsh

I lol'ed

This is a bad place to display your work.

The point is you're creating something and doing something progressive, nevermind if someone thinks you might be wasting your time. Work on your game man, it's the only thing that really matters. Hard work, not comments on a forum since the comments and the people are fleeting.

Good luck on your game, I saw the second link you posted and you're doing a great job for your age. It's a good thing to create, a lot of people don't do that.

>>513066
One of the the only things this post got right is that he should be proud of what he made and that he should keep working at it to make it better

He is still flaunting his age like it gives him some kind of handicap, and making his video private because he didn't like what people had to say? Sure our comments are fleeting but we want him to make good art, if you just throw that at all away you end up like Dobson

>>513060
Yeah I kind of realized it while I was writing it.

Fuck it though, criticism is unbiased, or at least it should be.

Ebin "game"
When i was ur age i wasnt such an autist

got here late, vid has been privated. Im only bothered by the logo

>>512770

Kill yourself.

>>512765

You should always be open minded when it comes to critisism. But you should also know the difference between critisism and shitting on something. It's obvious you didn't get the response you expected to get, but that's fine.

>>512796

> Honest opinion
> Don't be a fagit boy
> Fagit
> Boy

Christ your post just screams underage

>>512746
It looks solid, at least. The animations and gunplay look well done, it's just the game as a whole I don't think I'd play. That may just be a matter of personal taste, but there's good stuff in there for sure.

>>512765
>>513030
this, I want to see the video dude.

thats acc cool

>>512770
This.
>>512765
THIS KID IS 17 MODS LOOK AT HIS CHANNEL B& PLZ!

>>512746
underaged b& and obvious newfag, reported for cancer. Please delete system32 and hang yourself you fucking autistic cunt.

>>512754
Some of the animations seem to be from BF3 or 4.